After Being Reincarnated in the Dirt, I Lived as a Bug in the World

I suggest changing the title and introduction of the book. There is nothing related to bugs in the first 50 chapters. Bugs appear after 50 chapters. The name of the first bug you get is Atomic Slash, which sounds very damaging, right? But it cannot have any effect on life and can only be used for polishing and fertilizer... This bug is not a bug at all...

Now that I've finished reading it, let me know what you think. I came here to read the author's new book after reading the old one. In my opinion, the author's biggest problem is that the main plot advances too slowly and there are too many branch plots. Especially this alchemical law. This kind of law requires too much to explain and takes up a lot of space. But the fact that the protagonist is still an apprentice means that his level is low, but he knows more. This actually means that a small car can pull a big cart. The more he understands, the more separated he will feel, because he is obviously aware of it, but his level cannot keep up. It quite affects the reading experience. Good concepts and ideas have always been an author's advantage, but they should not be affected by this advantage. Telling the main story well is still the most important thing. Especially when the author throws out one concept after another. The main character is still a minor character and nothing will change. The imagination chapter and the upgrade chapter are two different things. How to combine the two is the most important thing

Well, you can see from the introduction that it borrowed bugego's settings.

This makes the protagonist choose a bad time to be an undercover agent. It would actually be more reasonable to become an undercover agent after being promoted to the advanced class. At that time, the protagonist has 8 to 9 whirlpools and has the strength to participate in all subsequent events instead of crawling around all the time, so that the strength is not enough, but he joins a mercenary, which can't even be written in a book. With the protagonist's talent and resources, he can completely skip the timeline of half a year to a year, and there are a lot of explanations when choosing an undercover agent. Why should there be so many explanations? It is unreasonable in itself. The author should re-imagine the plot. When I watched A Cat, I didn't find it attractive at all.

The first time he was forced to join the military by gangs, and the second time he was forced to go undercover by the military. I don't know if there are any more.

What the author wrote is too messy and has no main axis. In this fantasy world, the protagonist explores things in scattered ways. (Simultaneously distracting the reader) and making it feel cluttered. In addition, according to the progress of the timeline, scenes such as fog, snails, spiders, root-seeking meetings, etc. That are not experienced by the protagonist himself must be described simultaneously. Completely unattractive to readers. It was suggested that this way of writing should be discontinued. 80% Is written around the protagonist. Your grades must be better than now.

I watched the Magic Dice of Destiny again and missed Master Xiao Chen. The people of the Outland Territory are still waiting for Xiao Chen to save them.

What about the bug? Why haven't I found it yet?

What a pity that such a good worldview and power system in the previous book ended like this.

Isn't this the hidden skill of One's new game?

First, the background of the world is too large, which prevents the author's writing power from being perfectly displayed and can only be ended hastily; The second is that the protagonist basically disappears in the later period, changing from rising to being a group portrait; I hope this book does not set the background too big, it is better to take it slow, and the world view can be slowly unfolded in the form of several parts. In the first book, the world view was too big all at once, making it seem that the protagonist has always been hanging around in a small circle and has never stepped out.

I think it's quite interesting, but to be honest, I'm not sure how long the author can stick with it, after all, the stakes are so low.

Just change the introduction and delete the bug first. I don't think it will affect it at all, and it's more stylish. The main reason is that this bug will appear much later.

It turns out it's you, a eunuch boy, and you said that this book is quite to my liking, but if it's you, it's so good and not worth reading.

If you tell me a way to subscribe to novels on Qidian without spending any money, I will believe you.

I'm afraid no one can do it by folding the wishing paper 9 times.

Are there any old fans who read another book by the author?

I've read more than 100 chapters, and it's just been taking classes, studying, and researching antennas. It's so boring!

Personally, I feel that it is impossible to leave this continent. Now it seems that the continent where the protagonist is located is wrapped in a "blank". A large amount of gold is needed to build a ship to travel far away from this continent and come to another continent. At the current plot advancement speed, even if the protagonist is promoted to a soldier, it will take a long time, because the performance of the lower string soldier is too weak at present. I don't know how the upper column is, but in any case, it is just barely on the table. The article mentioned that there is an unknown realm beyond the warriors. In this realm, excluding the ancient snail, one of the ten ancient plagues, one can be considered invincible and have a certain ability to protect himself in the outside world. I feel that the protagonist will not see the god-like existence that created the bug in the introduction later, and it is not clear whether the bug only exists in this continent or the entire world. Personally, I prefer the latter, because the god-like character in the later games is very high. ૮—ა In short, it depends on how the author writes 🙂

When it comes to fantastic fantasy, I think the author is number one. As long as you keep writing, I will keep subscribing (the reason for the low fan base is because I changed my account)

What are you doing? How could there be such a book? The male protagonist is actually a man. I write every book that is sexist like this.

At present, it seems that the writing style is very different from that of Mr. Xiao Chen. It is all about the protagonist's intelligent thoughts and large-scale descriptions of other characters. Even if the protagonist's name is changed, it can be regarded as a continuation of the previous book. It would not be inconsistent to directly say that this book is Xiao Chen's arrival in the outer ring.

The author's imagination is good. I think it's this kind of whimsy and the feeling of uncovering the setting step by step that is very interesting. The world view is set by myself this time. It is much better than the previous one. The copies of Unbounded, Seed of Food, and Ancient Heaven are really boring and long. Now the branch lines are much shorter, with Bronze Gear, Giant Ginger, Scarlet Apostle, and Forbidden White, and there are a lot of exciting points and small climaxes such as adventures and skills. The previous one had several dungeons and was too long to read. It was a little out of touch when I changed the map and opened a new dungeon. This time around the inner city, the outer city, the wilderness outside the outer city, and the satellite city, the world view is smaller, easier to control, and less fragmented. And what I like is that it's like traveling through another world. You can catch up immediately, take pills, practice exercises, and learn skills. The author slowly understands the world based on his own perception and experience, and gives traces of his own exploration of the world view, rather than accomplishing it overnight. Just like facing many unknowns and unsolved problems, other books try to open up God's perspective and directly explain the setting. This medicine can improve one's spiritual power, and that medicine can overcome inner demons. The author gradually explains these strange adventures and uses from Xiao Chen's perspective.

According to the progress of the last book, the author has already written a quarter of it. I have read about 250 chapters so far. The whole plot is advancing slowly. In terms of world view revelation, plot direction, and pace, it is slower than the previous book. The last book was hastily ended because the plot was too big and the plot got out of control in the middle. I don't know how far this book will go. I've read too many books about The Eunuch Cut in Half, and I'm no longer disturbed. The Lord of the Stars, Can Meng of the Old Gods, Journey to Dimension, Xuanmen God-Apotheosis, Beginning with the Guhuo Bird... Recently, the only conscientious books I've come across are The Wet Egg Embryo and The Abyss Wanderer. The former is of stable quality except for the final chapter, while the latter is still being actively updated.

Compared to the first book, the beginning of this book is mediocre, but it's a pity that the author's setting

I just caught up with the latest chapter, it's very well written. I suggest you reduce the length of the battle. I read more than 1,000 chapters in the last book, and wrote five or six chapters for a two-person battle. It was too difficult. Don't make the same mistakes again,

I gave up when I saw 270 because, like the previous book, it described a lot of things and the setting was too complicated, and it was so awesome that it ended up being at a low level. Can I ask if I can be promoted to sergeant?

In fact, the author writes really well and has great imagination. I don't know why there are so few of them.

Is there any book friend who can share the book list? I really don't have any exciting novels to read, so I'll do it first. The pictures below show the books I have in my large size (to prevent people from saying I read pirated copies) and the books I am currently subscribing to

Write this book well for me and don't let me scold you later. You know what you wrote in the previous book, Country Without Borders. I have been following this book since I read it. I am also an old fan. Don't do it well. Write it well