Immortality Cultivation: Start with High-Grade Spiritual Roots

The writing is good, but I don't like the strength of the main character. The protagonist starts by cheating on the cultivation speed of Tianling Root, but chooses not to break through in order to not attract attention. Later, in order to suppress his own speed, he chooses to languish for several months and not practice much.

I feel like the plot is very jumpy. I don't know why it's weird.

As soon as he saw the genius, the high-grade spiritual root immediately clicked in without any hesitation.

The plug-ins have been enlarged, and they have somewhat suppressed the growth of the protagonist.

The writing is immature and the fighting is average. Read more great books and look forward to your future.

I thought you were writing about Jin Dan, Nascent Soul, Qi Refining, etc. There are so many early stage scenes.

I haven't started reading it yet, but if the protagonist has too many cheats, it will be difficult to write. Unless the protagonist is constantly conflicting with others, or the protagonist hooks up with many women all day long, only in this way can the number of words be written in a slow pace. Otherwise, hundreds of chapters will be written, and the protagonist will become a chronicle if he practices too quickly. Authors who are not good at writing and writing plots will have a hard time keeping track of the progress of the plot.

In fact, I feel like it would be more fun if I didn't have to suppress the protagonist's combat power. The rest of the world will be all over the world.

How should I put it? Countless golden fingers are still walking on thin ice, surrounded by dangers. They encounter accidents without moving. When an accident occurs, the protagonist explodes. This is because he is being chased and killed by the law of heaven.

If you have any ideas, you can discuss them under this post.

The writing is good, I can read the latest chapter by chapter, the three views are correct, the killing is decisive, the division of wealth is diverse, the human heart is not simple, there are both good and bad things, excellent work!

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