Gou Zai Gaowu Gods and Demons Evolve

I bumped into a beautiful neighbor at the beginning of the game, go 🦌Two rounds and write again, okay?

The awakening adjustment panel for junior high school students after traveling fifteen years!

Author, are you kidding me? Based on your world view, the male protagonist is so talented that he is still afraid of not having money? No one or no organization to support?

Actually, I'm a little confused. Why does the protagonist become an orc instead of a human? Why not change Pangu to Panmo? Isn't Pangu's image the image of a human being? The history here is broken, and the directions of all the techniques are specious, but the protagonist has traveled through the past. Why does he have to make himself a human, a ghost, and not a ghost? Why can't he directly refine the so-called genetic potion, take its essence and remove the dross, and directly strengthen the human body? Is it because you have seen too much genetic modification of orcs in the West and feel that your own human body is not good enough? What the hell is a dragon-headed demon who can't stand it any longer? What's going on? Are you going to twist our mythical image and turn it into someone else's bit by bit? These authors now brag about foreign mythological images every day and deliberately distort and vilify our mythical images. How can those who don't understand understand our own mythical images after seeing them? If you step on your own mythical image and flatter others, will you die if you tell the truth?

The writing is good, very good, but it seems too descriptive and a bit watery... That's the plot, well, it's hard to describe in one sentence. The first is the name of the protagonist, which is completely impossible to bring in. Secondly, there are too many descriptions of women's appearance, which makes people sick to their stomachs. The second is: The scene of the monster attack in the first chapter. Since this is a world of high martial arts, missiles, laser weapons, and other conventional weapons should be deleted directly from this world setting. The price/performance ratio is too low. With this kind of money, it is better to hire two genetic warriors as city security guards. Devouring Starry Sky dared to write this back then, It's because we readers didn't see much of the world back then. I admit that I like to eat. Moreover, people eat this bowl of rice early. Even if the article is just a piece of cake, a lot of people will still buy it. But you can't do it. You are a newcomer. You have to consider all aspects, especially logic. It's useless that you wrote a lot of weapons before. Space-based weapons, which are powerful enough for Godzilla, are all lost in the power you wrote. They were blocked by a little monster. The broken bird at the beginning of Devouring the Stars is also so strong. Also, the building was closed down by Kaijugan, and the city suffered heavy losses. All of this was just a foreshadowing to highlight the power of the monkey warrior behind. But since there is such a powerful warrior, why didn't he appear directly from the beginning? He had to wait until the monsters roared and knocked down all the buildings, the defensive shields were exhausted, a lot of people were killed, and the city's losses were maximized, then he slowly took action. Forget it, if you don't just kill it quickly with a stick, you still have to pretend to yell first, why not wait for the monster to knock down two more buildings? To increase the losses? Actually, I can't understand what I wrote like this. For example, this awesome warrior was in retreat. The monster came unexpectedly. He had just woken up and was still confused. It was a bit uncomfortable to start a fight with his eyes opened... Then you should also say something later. For example, this was an accident. Human cities had not been broken through like this in many years. The city leader at the time was in deep retreat and could not react. I wanted to highlight that dangerous world view, but I was unwilling to conceive of how to balance power, so I imitated that old persimmon who wrote a bad book and started writing with passion. He can put poison, he can even pull 💩, can you? You can't, because you are new. The first chapter is suspected of being embarrassing, and the second chapter is directly in the animal world. The arrangement of the protagonist's birth point is not good enough, there are contradictions, but not outstanding enough, and the contradiction is too routine. It is also a routine dilemma of the protagonist's lack of money and resources. Moreover, after the protagonist gets the gold finger, he does not quickly think about how to better use the gold finger, not only to look at the legs, but also to look at the breasts, and again to look at the butt. I feel that this kind of loser is not worthy of your writing style, buddy. Of course, the most important thing is that you use too many redundant words. Those crackling sentences can be refined into a large paragraph. The number of words in the first chapter can be reduced by half, and most of the second chapter can be deleted directly, leaving only the most refined plot.

A student wanted to pick a widow after only a few chapters, but he didn't see a girl, so he had to have good intentions when choosing the heroine.

Isn't this introduction about Panlong?

Don't laugh at the challenge? I lost.

The writing style is average. If you are a novice, you may still be able to read it. If you are an old bookworm, you may not be able to stand it after reading a few chapters.

The quality of Qidian during this period is not good, every good-looking one

The author is a complete novice. How can I put it? The subject matter is good but it is useless. It is not close enough to the world view you wrote about and it is useless.

If good people don't do things well, why does evolution regress back to vicious beasts?

Is the author of this list a high school student? Getting used to exam rankings? Martial arts fantasy is about murder and arson, not ranking.

Toxic, at the end of the first chapter of MD, there is a panel attribute flow, just like a third-rate online game, it instantly looks like a lump

Comparing the previous monsters, is the Hundred Meter Dragon bigger or smaller?

How dare you write this in your first book?