High Martial: The New God of an Old Era

1. It is said that it is a mythological gap that no one else knows about, and then the protagonist's name is the ferocious beast. When he saw the protagonist absorbing the crystal core, he casually blurted out Taotie. Where is this cultural gap? 2. The university teacher humiliated him and his mother. He was submissive and did not dare to say a word. His teammates questioned his strength. He went to the ring and beat people half to death. He bullied the weak and was afraid of the strong. 3. There are contradictions in the settings before and after. In the previous chapter, it was said that the Titan's first-order five-ton force was changed to the second-order five-ton force in the next chapter. It is typical to write whatever comes to mind, without an outline and no rigorous setting. If you didn't have to pay to comment, I think I would have been criticized by people long ago. Is this the level of the daily guide?

Fortunately, I started by listening to books. I came back when I was bored to look at the detailed settings, otherwise I would have just read Bao Qishu in the first three chapters. The reason for the disappearance of the myth was actually a catastrophe, not a deliberate erasure by mysterious forces 🥵. Then how do you know about the Ice Age and how do you know about dinosaurs? There is a science called archeology. The unprecedented Sequence 1 training takes a week or something... What is the difference between it and primary school students' composition.

After reading the first sixteen chapters, I felt very depressed. I have never seen a protagonist like this. He restrains first and then rises. At the very least, he must rise. He does not suppress first and then restrain. He only starts to rise from chapter twenty-three. Really, most of them should run away before reaching chapter twenty-three.

After reading a few chapters, something didn't feel right. After flipping through the table of contents, chapter 24, the ability started to appear...

No, buddy, are you kidding me? The height of the raised floor is 3 meters? ? ? Isn't the normal residential floor height 3 meters?

It's quite speechless. You said that those mythological characters have been played by other actors, so you can't relate to them, so forget it. Don't you think of those holy beasts? The most basic Four Sacred Beasts of Blue Dragon, White Tiger, Suzaku and Xuanwu are Chinese, so everyone should know them. Or maybe Taotie or something else would be fine.

Are the hundreds of ones you smoked in the past all rubbish, or are the ones you smoked in the past useless? If they are all rubbish, I believe you won't be able to draw good ones in the future, because the probability is low. If they can't be used, then don't write that you smoked hundreds of them in the past.

The subject matter and framework are okay, but what makes me uncomfortable at the moment is that the writing is a bit long-winded and emotional. You can refer to the books of Global Gaowu and Fengxian, both of which are about Gaowu. They write very concisely and do not explain a lot in detail. Gaowu is mainly just for fun, so come on, author.

Brothers, remember to start reading from Chapter 23, the previous chapters are all nonsense.

Wouldn't it be better to delete the first twenty chapters? What is the role of existence? If you hadn't read the comments and said jump to it, you could have just abandoned the book.