High Martial Begins with Awakening Superpowers

I feel like the author has a bright future in writing pornographic stories.

I'm looking forward to what's coming next, but there are too many female characters written. Do you want to accept them or not? I can't quite understand whether it's pure love or multiple girls. Don't be ambiguous, otherwise it won't please both parties.

The setting is quite interesting, but the author needs to write it more clearly. It's hard to understand the power equation now. What does it mean when magical power evolves three times? Is it possible to evolve the superpower three times by practicing this magical skill all the time? But looking at the description later, it seems like I have to change it midway. For example, in the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, you need to practice the Dragon Claw Hand and the Dragon Capturing Skill. If the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms allow the superpower to evolve three times, and the previous martial arts allow the superpower to evolve once and twice, then the total is six times, but the author seems to mean a total of three times. The Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms only allowed the superpower to evolve for the third time, not three times. Also, does martial arts allow superpowers to evolve, or does one need to evolve superpowers to practice martial arts? Let's take the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms as an example. From the previous description of the evolutionary equation, it can be seen that cultivating the divine power allows the superpower to evolve three times. However, judging from the description of the Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms later, one can only practice magical skills after evolving three times. And the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, do they allow summoned beasts to evolve into divine dragons, or do they allow people to evolve into divine dragons? If the summoned beast evolves, is there any essential difference between evolving the summoned beast into a dragon and a roc? Why can the protagonist evolve the summoned beast into a roc but not a dragon? If people are allowed to evolve, then it would be very strange to allow summoning powers to practice this martial art.

To be honest, those settings are pretty cool. Very stunning. All aspects of the protagonist are also well written. The plot is also good. And there are no bugs. The writing is very detailed. The basic supernatural martial arts are explained very clearly. It feels like I have thought very comprehensively. It's obvious that a lot of effort has been put into the setting. The only pity is that there are too many emotional scenes. All kinds of ambiguity. Weigh endlessly. And they are all proactive. And do you really like baby-faced and big breasts so much? The author has been single for thousands of years. Still the ultimate dog licker. Don't write emotional scenes or write less single female protagonists. He really has the talent of a great god. Martial arts writing is really not suitable for writing about the harem. Especially the early stage. Now the protagonist only has level 4 or 5 abilities. You just got a girlfriend. Four ambiguous objects. When he reaches level 100, that's not a few hundred harems. Moreover, this kind of ambiguous drama takes up too many words. Not worth the money. Fifty chapters ordered. I probably won't order it after reading this.

Rt, there have been too many written by women recently, and they are all very ambiguous, and I can't stand them anymore. There will be only one female protagonist. If you want to write multiple female protagonists, tell me in advance. I will turn around and leave. I have to write so many ambiguous supporting female characters. Can I become a regular at any time? 😅

Don't write too depressingly. This world view and system are very interesting. Write well. Come on, author. But don't be too pornographic. Don't be too depressing. Xiao Huang Yiqing has always suspected that you are cheating on the word count.

The female characters written by the author have a sense of déjà vu as if they are looking at the little emperor uncle.

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Practicing martial arts skills and super powers is quite innovative. But the question is, is this novel serious? When I read one of the chapters, I wondered if it was pornographic. Author, if you have such ability, why not write harem novels? You will have a much better future than you, a hard-working martial arts writer like you.

It should be a period of rapid improvement when I first wake up, but there are cheats, and I actually go to work. . .