Shinji Yanggami Ikari! !

A bit of a fly in the ointment is that it doesn't have enough house odor. It would be more interesting if the protagonist spoke and described in a Yangshen way, and then the rest of the characters smelled like Japanese manga nerds😋

The author may suddenly stop writing and announce that he is going to practice martial arts in real life.

When I finished reading the article, I was shocked to realize that the thought of dreaming into a divine machine was like an ancient beast dormant in the dark abyss, exuding a frightening aura, carrying endless evil and arrogance, and quietly peering into our spiritual world. And the author has long been trapped in it. It is like a steel needle tempered with ice, drilling into the bone marrow along the cracks of thinking. It is not plundering, but crushing and reshaping. It wants to knead other people's inspiration, pen power, and even reverence for words into the clay of its own will. Wait, what am I...

The author has become the true personality of the divine machine, which can be called the second divine machine.

Someone was in Infinite before and started to speed pass, which can be said to be a severe torture to the boss, and now there is another crazy magic machine. The heroes at this starting point are really like the crucian carp crossing the river, there are so many!

The flavor of Shen Ji is so authentic. Those who are worried that the author will skip the code word to practice martial arts need not have it. The author has not learned the code word yet, so he should learn martial arts first. He can do at least two pairs of Domas every week.

The flavor of Shenji is enough, but the two-dimensional flavor is too weak. If everyone around them is assimilated, it will become a fantasy We should use the thinking of Shenji to reduce the dimensionality of the supporting characters in the two-dimensional flavor. If all the supporting characters and even the villains are assimilated into one flavor, it will not be that interesting.

I have serious doubts about the novel that the author first asks the magic machine to take over every day before starting to write it. This taste is too correct.

Write it carefully, and I will bring two cartons of milk to discuss with Shenji in the future, and let you be the new Shenji

In the future, the protagonist will be the first saint in the world, and at the same time, he will have the marks of the disciples. After receiving the inheritance of the disciples, he will take a holy word, and the scripture he writes will be called the "Bible". Then everyone in the world will call the protagonist the Holy Son 🤓

Before reading: No matter how similar it is, how many people can imitate the magic? After reading: No, this is too perverted.

The commanders nodded and laughed at the flattery of the Ancient Taoist Scriptures. They stood up directly, pointed at him and said hello repeatedly "Yes, Ancient Taoist Scriptures, you have done a good job and made a huge contribution to our novel world. We must reward you now, and reward you heavily." , We will make you reach the sky in one step, achieve supreme magical powers, and cultivate you completely!" While speaking, the major commanders have already grabbed a lot of monthly tickets in their hands, and there are many rewards. These rewards are actually made from hundreds of monthly tickets, and they are all treasures in the collection.

The author is extremely ambitious and very capable. You can already sense things in the dark. Now that I have come to the place where Shenji became a god, I am afraid that I want to absorb the spiritual imprint of Shenji's enlightenment back then. Not to mention complete refining by then, as long as it can be refined to three points, there will be great achievements!

You have done well, and I will reward you severely. This set of Seven Life Xuanmen Pills is given to you. Use it to break through the realm of the eternal giant and attract more divine energy to Yan Jie.

According to ancient Taoist records, a qualified author updates at least ten chapters every day. This is in line with the supreme principles of courage, love, wisdom, and integrity between heaven and earth. Of course, if the author is stubborn and refuses to agree with this truth, then we have to see the real chapter in our hands. You have the marks of the gods. By chance, I was also lucky enough to get the marks of the gods. Among them is a supreme skill called "The Power of Divine Elephants to Suppress Prison". I wonder what the author meant?

Unexpectedly, the author found another pair of father and son, Hong Yi and Hong Xuanji.

NERV is a big sea of ​​suffering🌊. The driver 👨‍✈️ is in the sea 🌊. The EVA body 🤖 is a ship 🚢. The driver 👨‍✈️ is the person in the boat 🚢. The boat 🚢 carries people and keeps driving towards the completion ✨. Is it to cultivate the body🔧, strengthen the body🛡️ship🚢, and reach the other side🏝️🤔 of the sea of ​​suffering🌊? Or should we train the driver 👨‍✈️'s body 💪😤 so that the people in the boat 🚢 become familiar with water 🏊🤔?

When I saw the title, I was still wondering which sun god it was, and I was stunned when I saw the heroine Longya Mibenbu.

The author has the idea of ​​a magical machine, which is very offensive, and actually very good, but the problem is exactly this. The characters in the whole text basically have the flavor of a magical machine, without any otaku smell. In fact, what readers want to see is a fantasy torture otaku story about a divine machine, and the interaction of some otaku characters. The further this book goes, the more it tends to be an uninteresting Shenji-style fantasy novel. Gradually, I can't stand it anymore, and I can't even sustain the plot until it's on the shelves. It's really a pity.

After reading Chapter 31 so far, I feel that it is not just as simple as refining the divine machine, but becoming the king of the divine machine.

1. Assume a question 2. Add between the adverb and the verb 3. Add commas in some specific places 4. An emperor, a beggar 5. Kneel down and be a dog, reward hard

666, You must have inherited the original imprint left by Shenji after he closed the pen. After writing this, you can definitely do Gaara, the Sun God.

At the beginning, only the main character had a Yangshen flavor, but later everyone's speaking style became a bit boring.

In the current chapter, changing the names of Shinji Ikari and other characters seems to have no connection with the EVA Chainsaw Man and other stories. It does not mean that it must follow the original plot, but at present, it seems that the content of being a Yoshin fan is greater than that of a two-dimensional fan. Is it necessary to increase the two-dimensional content? I believe the author also has his own considerations

Let me see how talented he is

This book is really well written, but I don't understand why the results are not good 😐

It was interesting at the beginning, but after the beginning, the pace slowed down and became more and more boring. It feels lackluster, the fights are not fun to write, and the plot is very bland. The protagonist's personality is completely inhuman, the supporting characters have some humanity but are not outstanding, and the little brother who was included in the front is not included in the back, which is a waste of pen and ink. There is a problem with the protagonist's setting, his thoughts are inconsistent, and even the readers don't know what he is thinking. I am afraid this problem will last throughout the novel. If the protagonist's thoughts, feelings and character are not well written, the whole story will be wrong. It seems that he hates evil, but in fact, you can't feel his emotions from his words and deeds at all, and there are often contradictions between what he says and what he does. It's okay to write it for fun, but there is a problem when writing a novel.

After writing so much, I thought the protagonist was so awesome. It turns out that in Yangshen, he is just a little loser. What are you pretending to be?

I thought it was at Eva, but it turned out that I went to another place halfway through the lecture. Can I write it down next time when I lecture? Otherwise, I can't read the entire volume title without skipping it. I really can't understand it.

Is this book dead? I took a look and it hasn't been updated for ten days.