I Am Cultivating Blood God Son Among Mortals

When I saw the third chapter, I felt a lot of poison. 1. After the protagonist learned that he was pregnant with a rare treasure and a mysterious inheritance, his first reaction was a wry smile. Just like if you won an eight million lottery ticket, your first reaction was a wry smile. Why do you think you have too much money? 2. A sect as big as Yellow Maple Valley can't even get out the foundation-building pills of its disciples with alien spiritual roots. The pill-forming master can actually say, "Although you have alien spiritual roots, a foundation-building pill cannot guarantee the success of foundation-building." It's so crazy that such disciples can't use their resources freely? What does Linghu do for food? 3. The gift given by the master to the disciple is a ceremony of apprenticeship. Who is the apprentice? I haven't read it since I bought it. Author, can you see for yourself what you wrote?

How cold it was when Yellow Maple Valley gave up on Hongfu Han Li and others. The protagonist had better hand in the demon pill, the teleportation array, and the great movement order! Even my concubine Xin Ruyin's formation skills were reported! It's full of flaws, I don't know how to complain about it. People really laugh when they are speechless.

The heroine actually chose Xin Ruyin, who is also a shemale. The teleportation array was actually given to the sect, which is simply a novice act. If I were Ancestor Linghu, I would definitely get rid of you and keep this secret as my own. With such an opportunity, I can achieve greatness by myself, so why leave it to the sect. You are not a descendant of our ancestors. Take Han Li with you for anything, just nanny Wen.

This book is full of poisonous points. The author should reopen it. The starting setting is quite good, and the main character Goldfinger is also very attractive and exciting. However, in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality fanfic, if you don't follow the original work and change the settings randomly, there is no need to take pills indiscriminately. Han Li even took the pills to the point of becoming drug-resistant. It's no big deal. You won't let him take more.

Why is it called "teacher" instead of "master"? What the hell?

Um, your pace is too fast. It doesn't matter if you have a golden finger to practice quickly. Xin Ruying has reached the peak of Qi training in less than a year. Don't you think there is a problem?

"Mortal: Comparing Han Li, Nine Secrets of the Start"

Another person who handed over the teleportation array to the sect. Author, do you think Huang Maple Valley can defend it? The writing is not realistic at all

Actually, I quite like this kind of novel that tells the sect about the teleportation array, but most people don't like it.

After the blood-refining son of God became a demon, he ascended to the demon world and became the clone of the ancestor of Styx.

Taken for granted, who can practice blood kung fu?

This book is too rough. I can't figure out the relationship between the original characters. It's uncomfortable to read. I can't read it anymore. I've stopped reading it. I've already read more than a dozen Mortal fandoms. I only found this book when I was short of books.

It would be better to write about Deng Yin, the old demon of Shushan Swordsman, who died and was reborn in the mortal world. Due to lack of cultivation background, techniques and resources, he practiced the Blood God Dharma.

Man, this book may be sold out.

The protagonist formed a pill at the age of 20. How old is Han Li? The timeline feels so confusing!

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The author, isn't Xuan Le from the Yanyue Sect? Have you changed it?

The writing is okay. Although there are some minor problems, it is still acceptable. The only bad point is that the choice of the protagonist's natal magic weapon is too random: the protagonist's blood path technique has many reference magical powers and magic weapons. I will list a few here. The magical powers: Shura Blood Flame, Karma Fire, Blood Gang Divine Thunder, Blood Training Divine Light... Magic weapon category: Transformation The Blood God Sword, Yuantu, Abi, Immortal-Slaying Flying Knife, these magical powers and magic weapons are very consistent with the protagonist's skills and the blood evil body. The above ones are from Xianhu, Anhuang, Fengshen, and Shushan. They all have corresponding content. The author is easy to find, and he can perfectly combine these magical powers and magic weapons into this book. Come on, author 👍

I've read dozens of chapters but I still don't understand. If you get the Sky Thunder Strain and give it to Han Li, you can't write a book of your own. Damn it, those of you who write fan fiction are either starting with Qixuanmen or Yellow Maple Valley.

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I am a mortal fanfic appraisal machine. The full score is 10 points. This one is a 3 points. The writing is average and the blood path is sideways. Who among normal people wants to be a vampire? It makes people feel bad, has no appeal, and tries to be a good person. It's cheating. The character portrayal is a bit fake. The progress bar is a bit fast and can't fill in some interesting holes. It smells a bit like a loser. There's no sense. It's just average. I barely took a look at Shuhuang. I'm a little bit addicted.

All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!

Tall buildings rise from the ground. How can you know the sky until you grow old? I wish the author a great success in making this book a success. Polite borrowing: Meeting is fate, guest, do you want to come and see me, "Nirvana Immortal Tribe", group portraits, big background Family cultivation, power plot, delicate writing, emotions of each character Online, non-routine, original story, if you think it is still interesting, please comment and support.

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