Myriad Worlds: Starting in Great Tang, I Draw the Keywords of Fate

The writing is mediocre. The protagonist lacks initiative; they're practically a task-obsessed robot. Author, do you really think this is interesting? Your tasks are so low-level. Tasks should have levels; you should show the protagonist how to explore and level up. But no, it's just about doing every task that comes along. Why not just find someone and keep grinding tasks? Just grab anyone.

He seems like a lunatic.

Physically invincible but mentally out of sync, seemingly invincible yet still acting all polite and fussy! You're supposed to be extraordinary, yet you do whatever you want, kill whomever you want, embodying a carefree attitude, and you don't even eat beef.

The tasks are too frequent and boring.

As the title suggests, the author has little to no literary talent but insists on acting like a genius, writing a novel full of preaching and boasting. Less than ten chapters in, he throws in a bunch of so-called doggerel, neither literary nor rustic, yet he's self-satisfied, rambling on and on, awkwardly chatting away. It's like a pig with scallions stuck in its nose pretending to be an elephant, a country bumpkin trying to fly. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤫

Lots of nonsense. The idea seems good, but why "seems"... Is because it has a lot of unnecessary details, so I didn't read much of it.

Most time travelers deeply despise the Cihang Jingzhai and Jingnian Zen Temples and feel a strong desire to exterminate them, while they have more goodwill towards the Yin Kui Sect, a demonic force, and even pity and admire the witches there. But in reality, while you can criticize righteous forces as sweet-skinned defenses, the demonic sects are poisonous defenses. They kill a disciple's entire family before accepting her as a disciple.

What kind of protagonist is this? It's a system training dogs!

The author pioneered a new genre: the (tu cao, a form of online commentary/criticism).

It's too drawn out; there's not much character development or plot; it's all just switching identities and extracting entries.