Funeral Parlor No. 9

Be sure to write about the harem 😍

Were you always so fragmented when writing books in your old life? It feels like watching an old literary film. What is said seems to be like this. Do you understand? Hey

Dear, too much is too much. Since you have joined this industry, you have to consider the mood of the readers. It is sixty chapters and the protagonist is still a corpse. This was originally done in a prologue. Are you prepared to let the protagonist die before it is released?

Octopus, do you have something at home or are you feeling unwell? There was no news suddenly. I hope everything is well with you. If you want to reopen a new book, then we will wait for your return, wish you peace.

There are too many descriptions of the protagonist's inner activities, making it difficult to read.

After becoming a medical official, Octopus seemed to have exhausted his talents and had no more outstanding works. This time we suddenly lost contact again. Do we need a eunuch? ! !

Don't write it like a zombie article. You still have to drive when you have to, and it's not always necessary to increase the speed appropriately.

It's super messy, uncomfortable to watch, and the elements are not well integrated. The super powers of urban magic are mixed with the supernatural and weird. In the end, it feels like it's not on any side. I originally thought it was a story about exploring supernatural powers in the city, but then I turned around and wrote about the supernatural. The supernatural seems to be a bit more involved, and it also shows supernatural powers... These are two completely different themes, and they give people different emotions. I don't know if anyone can integrate them well, but at least the author can't. The plot... How should I put it, the part where the boxer is resurrected, wearing a dead man's clothes and going out to do activities, but there is no reaction from the people around him? What about the scares that should be shown? What about the reaction? No... The heads were chopped off, a headless corpse. Wasn't anyone stunned by the impact? What about that startling shock? No,,, I feel that everyone's emotions are super stable, not affected at all, and I won't go into details about Meng Man being able to fight the pro version of zombies; "Soul Memories" about the boxer not playing match-fixing, "for the glory of the boxer", gives people the feeling of being extremely perfunctory, so I have to write it off, and he was given a neurotoxin. Does it mean that the hospital didn't check it or didn't find it out? Is this world controlled by chaebols and corporations? Everything is taken over by a biological company, and the world view is not explained clearly The overall feeling is that there are many elements stitched together, and the stitching is unclear I thought it was an L5 top, but it turns out that the comment section is still an ancient platinum

Do you want a eunuch? Why have you stopped updating?

The author should write about what he is good at, such as medical and official novels, and give full play to Director Zhang's strengths.

Write a work about food and sex. I feel that The World of Food is your best work.

Keep writing about cities. Your portrayal of characters is superb, especially women. I always feel happy when I read your books.

This book feels like a eunuch 😥 The previous book was okay, but it ended in a sloppy way, making people feel as if they had eaten a fly. I was very disappointed 😡 It's better to finish the book before reading it.

There is no more Octopus after "The Bone Boat". This is the best book written in recent years. It's a pity that I cut it myself. From then on, I started writing incomprehensible. Every book is either unfinished or eunuch, and the same is true for the great doctor. I really don't know what the author is thinking. With your current style, it is impossible to attract new readers, and the patience of old readers will only be slowly consumed by your operations until they give up on your book. If this continues, your reputation will only deteriorate.

This book is pretty good, why isn't it updated? Bad data? How many chapters is this? Can't you write well?

I felt relieved when I saw the eunuch. It was like a stew with a little bit of everything. It was neither fish nor fowl.

Tsk tsk

Haven't started watching yet? What's going on

Octopuses have eight legs and can cut themselves to escape from danger.

When I first opened the book, I said that the plot of this book was too exaggerated.

It's better to stop pretending to be novel and write what you are best at, bro.

Updated two months ago, eunuch?

Don't let down your book friends who trust you again, Octopus

Something seemed wrong for a long time. The beginning looked like the endings of Octopus's previous novels.

Squidward, if you don't write a book, I won't have any books to read. I haven't logged in for 2 months since I started.

Keep writing about cities. The city is so well written.

I didn't think anything of your eunuch books before, but now that I've seen the great doctor Wujiang Eunuch, I really don't dare to pursue your books anymore.

Did the old octopus burp? He hasn't made a sound for months.