Funeral Parlor No. 9

Be sure to write about the harem 😍

Were you always so fragmented when writing books in your old life? It feels like watching an old literary film. What is said seems to be like this. Do you understand? Hey

Dear, too much is too much. Since you have joined this industry, you have to consider the mood of the readers. It is sixty chapters and the protagonist is still a corpse. This was originally done in a prologue. Are you prepared to let the protagonist die before it is released?

Octopus, do you have something at home or are you feeling unwell? There was no news suddenly. I hope everything is well with you. If you want to reopen a new book, then we will wait for your return, wish you peace.

There are too many descriptions of the protagonist's inner activities, making it difficult to read.

Write a work about food and sex. I feel that The World of Food is your best work.

After becoming a medical official, Octopus seemed to have exhausted his talents and had no more outstanding works. This time we suddenly lost contact again. Do we need a eunuch?!!

Keep writing about cities. Your portrayal of characters is superb, especially women. I always feel happy when I read your books.

Do you want a eunuch? Why have you stopped updating?

It's super messy, uncomfortable to watch, and the elements are not well integrated. The super powers of urban magic are mixed with the supernatural and weird. In the end, it feels like it's not on any side. I originally thought it was a story about exploring supernatural powers in the city, but then I turned around and wrote about the supernatural. The supernatural seems to be a bit more involved, and it also shows supernatural powers... These are two completely different themes, and they give people different emotions. I don't know if anyone can integrate them well, but at least the author can't. The plot... How should I put it, the part where the boxer is resurrected, wearing a dead man's clothes and going out to do activities, but there is no reaction from the people around him? What about the scares that should be shown? What about the reaction? No... The heads were chopped off, a headless corpse. Wasn't anyone stunned by the impact? What about that startling shock? No,,, I feel that everyone's emotions are super stable, not affected at all, and I won't go into details about Meng Man being able to fight the pro version of zombies; "Soul Memories" about the boxer not playing match-fixing, "for the glory of the boxer", gives people the feeling of being extremely perfunctory, so I have to write it off, and he was given a neurotoxin. Does it mean that the hospital didn't check it or didn't find it out? Is this world controlled by chaebols and corporations? Everything is taken over by a biological company, and the world view is not explained clearly The overall feeling is that there are many elements stitched together, and the stitching is unclear I thought it was an L5 top, but it turns out that the comment section is still an ancient platinum