The Profound Mirror: Seeking the Dao in a Second Life

The protagonist behaves like this without fear of being seduced. What gives him the confidence to be seduced? After all, Xuanjian's world view is all about cannibalism, killing enemies through leaps and bounds, and using "high-level" means to pin down lower-level cultivators. How does the protagonist respond?

Introduction: It would be better to add Ji Yueren.

Man, the plot really needs to move forward. It's been so long, and you haven't even written the beginning of the original plot. To put it bluntly, no matter how good your writing is, it is still a fan. You have to consider that what you write is a fan. Everyone who can watch it has read the original work, so what if you write your own original plot? What everyone wants to see most is whether your protagonist, after being involved in the original plot, will correct some of the regrets of the original plot, or whether he can take advantage of some opportunities of the original plot to take a different path, rather than saying that you have been carved here before you reach the plot. You don't feel like you are writing a fan at the moment, but you want to write your own story, but you have chosen the subject of a fan, which is very contradictory. You have to figure out your audience.

…I don't know why, but I didn't want to read it when I saw the introduction. Although I want to read Xuanjian style novels, I don't want to read Slow Tomato Xiaobai style fanfics.

Don't be mysterious, write more informative content, and don't make any group portraits. They are all the same people. It is better to read the original text when writing group portraits.

The front is really well laid out, and the small characters in the group are also well-played. The protagonist has solved the Taoism and cultivation ideas, and the second generation also has spiritual orifices. Now it is time to wait for the Jianzi to solve the cultivation environment of yin and yang balance, and then develop future generations. Since the protagonist has some skills from the past life, I think we can also try to combine them and let the descendants be equipped with talismans to practice other Taoisms. Overall, it seems that the author has the ideas and the ability to write this story well. It just depends on whether the results can support it. To be honest, any author who dares to write Xuanjian fan fiction has something to say, but this one is indeed the most interesting among the ones I have read so far. I hope my grades will be better so that I can read the story the author wants to write😊

After experiencing the baptism of batches of authors, I have become resistant to unsolved mysteries such as getting married, getting married, working, divorce, family problems, parents divorcing, girlfriend cheating, meeting on Monday, traveling, illness, etc.

The writing is too depressing, and it's not enjoyable to read at all. The most annoying thing is that there are a group of yes-men in this chapter. When encountering the frustrating and uncomfortable plot, oh, Xuanjian World should be like this. It's no wonder that people in Xuanjian World die so quickly. I read the book to feel happy. The more I read this book, the more frustrated I became.

After reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Pretending to be a fool is really poisonous. There is no necessary reason. Who are you pretending to be for if you are the legitimate son or the young master? I really don't understand. It disgusts me to pretend to be stupid just for the sake of dramatic conflict.

Why not announce on the spot that you are leaving the Xuanjian system and set up your own business 😭