Is There Anything Wrong with Seeking an Encounter in One Piece?

In your book, Here I Come Again, don't write romance, even if the woman is used as a vase or background board.

I don't feel like the Dependent's Gift panel depicts any special growth potential? Except for the characteristics, talents, and digitized attributes that may appear during the first implantation, there is nothing else. The growth of Tiandaoqin is also unique to the protagonist's talent And it is too small. The protagonist can only develop one at the first level, and it does not describe the absolute ability to control the dependents This golden finger is not even as good as Im's ability...

You are still a novice, you don't investigate anything, you don't even know about devil fruits, you go to someone else's lair to fight someone, can you ignore the gun, can you run away if you can't win? There is no motive or purpose

The plot is a mess. I suggest you not write female characters.

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Just copy it according to the code and continue the following