My Proficiency in Pirate Liver

After reading it, what should I say... The author's comment area was full of curses, and it's not without reason. The author himself also wrote in the previous article that he would find a good devil fruit, preferably one that can fly. You have to eat the slippery fruit when you know that the fantasy beast type is the answer to the version. At worst, you can get the natural type or something, and the system is hanged. Well, the author changed it to friction fruit, but it's not bad either. Maybe the author has his own ideas, such as developing the Slippery Fruit well, or using the system's ability to eliminate the disadvantages of the Devil Fruit and eat the second one. But the author didn't make it clear whether he intended to sell it off or leave a suspense. Only the author himself knows. I can only say that if the author has a lot of room for improvement in his writing and is not a master, it is best not to do this, because this situation will appear to readers as a deliberate poisoning by the author. In the current environment, readers will not have much room for tolerance as long as they see the author poisoning. After all, the current environment is so complicated. If you can't stand this book, there will be another one. There is always a book that can be read without poisoning. By saying so much, I don't mean to instruct the author on how to write or revise the text. I just want to remind the author not to step into the trap again.

I said earlier that I knew the answer to the version where the Phantom Beast restrained itself from eating the Density Fruit, but you went to the trouble of finding the Slippery Fruit to eat, not to mention that it has its own system and can control wind without side effects. I really don't understand.

It's so funny, you eat a Slippery Fruit and imagine a lot of abilities. Isn't this a typical power of thinking? If you eat a Magnetic Fruit, you need to control the four basic forces. If you eat a Dark Fruit, you will create a black hole in the universe.

Yeah, it's extremely poisonous. The male protagonist of a defiant author eats slippery fruit? Do you want to sell your buttocks to the Celestial Dragons?

The author's outrageous remarks are fine as long as they don't offend the Celestial Dragons.

Why eat Devil Fruits if you have a system? Even if you want to eat them, there are so many fruits, so you just eat this one, and you have to find a weakness for yourself.

Some authors write to a certain extent, but the novel just doesn't become popular. There is actually a reason. In the battle, the protagonist beat the pirate half to death. Instead of finishing the work quickly, he kept beeping for a long time and preached to a dying man. Are you teaching the pirates to behave, or are you teaching the readers to behave?

Why do you want to accept Ah Jin? Will there be good people following Crick? It's just a bit of a charming personality, and why are you keeping it at 11 years old? Don't understand

It was originally written that Gu Yina fell down the stairs and it was fine. The next stop was that time passed directly and she went to sea. You had to write it down.

The plot of the Chamber of Commerce is a complete waste, strength is the first priority. Why do you think so much at the age of 11? There are a lot of inner dramas, and there is an inexplicable air of literary youth.

Taking in a younger brother at the age of 11-2, who is still an adult, gives people a sense of separation.

I'm not commenting on this book, I'm just using the venue to ask a question. I just want to ask everyone, if I really traveled to the world of One Piece, if there were cheats, the cheats would be moderate, neither big nor small. So what will everyone do after time travel? Are you going to go out to sea and become a pirate after a lot of hard work? Or join the Navy? Or the revolutionary army? Or secretly set up an organization to overthrow the world government? Or a bounty hunter? Or something else? If I want to get there, there will be plug-ins and a normal start. I probably wouldn't be a pirate. For ordinary people, the sea is very dangerous and insecure. It's not easy to eat or drink well. It's normal to sit on a boat for half a month without seeing anyone except the crew. I guess I can't stand the loneliness. I also have to face wanted orders and be in a dangerous atmosphere anytime and anywhere. Given other options, this kind of life is probably extremely unbearable for ordinary people who have lived on earth for more than 20 years. But at the same time, in order to obtain a better life (corrupt life 🤭), I may go into other professions, engage in business (after gaining some force) or steal from those beastly nobles and rich people (of course, act within my ability and choose the target carefully), or find an opportunity to become a noble and live a corrupt life. When the ability is sufficient, turn this rotten world upside down and re-establish order. Or do other things. As for joining the navy, if there are no cheats, you may join. If there are cheats, there is a high probability that you will not join. After all, being in the navy is also very dangerous. For time travellers, it is probably extremely difficult to have the consciousness to fight pirates at all costs for the sake of the people of the pirate world. Of course, some nobles or other beneficiaries will definitely be offended in this process. In this case, if you have the ability, then take revenge secretly (without revealing your identity, after all, pirates have always been straightforward, and it is estimated that even if the revenge is done a little rough, you will not be able to find out who did it). If you are not capable enough, stay away from looking for another way out or endure it. After all, it will happen sooner or later, and when the time comes, you can take revenge however you want. Of course, the most important thing in the pirate world is to use your brain. After all, not many people there have brains, most of them are reckless. This is probably what I think, what do you think? 😰

The protagonist ate the Slippery Fruit just to be handsome, awesome! !

As for the slippery fruit, the friction fruit written by the author is no different to me. As mentioned before, I don't want to eat dense fruits because I want to fly them. Yes, the reason is indeed very good. I thought I would eat fluttering fruits later, and then I would eat them all. If your protagonist doesn't have the proficiency system, it's reasonable. You are all proficient in the system, and you can be the strongest by relying on your liver. The answer to the version is three-color domineering➕sword skills across the sea, and you want nothing but fruit. Also add weaknesses to yourself. I thought I would get a big one, but ended up getting a big one.

I have read the latest chapter. Apart from being continuous, this book has no merit whatsoever. The most serious and huge poisonous point is that the characters that should be written about are not written about, and the people who should not be written about are written in large sections, such as Liya! Why would an ordinary person with a husband write so much? The more you write, the more disgusting you will be, the less people will subscribe! Even the Holy Mother Buddha with normal IQ would not take this role! Just take Keya with you. Why take her mother? Why not take her father with her? Bellmere even took Ajian out to buy a house to live in! And why are there so many descriptions of supporting male characters like Ajinzollon, Ace, Luffy and Cavendish? Who is the protagonist? And is it useful to have someone like Luffy Ace? No profit! Isn't it enough to change their original destiny? With their characters, do we expect them to work for the protagonist when they grow up? The protagonist likes his adoptive father? How can such a fussy protagonist do this kind of loss-making business? The protagonist has never been so kind to a female character! And it's almost a million words and I haven't seen any progress with any of the female characters. What does the author want to do when he is surrounded by little girls in their teens? Now he has reached the level of Shichibukai! Don't tell me the main character isn't even an adult by the end of this book! Can't you develop for a few years and reach full level before going out to hang out?

If you don't eat Devil Fruit, you won't know if you can touch the power of rules until you die.

Why do we still need to eat devil fruits when we have a panel? ? Give yourself a weakness for nothing

The more I write, the worse it becomes. Drive high and go low.

Yes, but can you explain more about Kuina's fruit ability? Also, it would be better if the main character's panel is streamlined.

There is a proficiency system. It is better to practice the G Fist to the full level to store energy, and then practice the King's Fist to the full level, and then store energy every day. When you see someone, you can punch in seconds 🙂

Kuina eats devil fruits? She is a swordsman. If she eats the Devil Fruit, she cannot be considered a pure swordsman. She is not qualified to compete for the world's greatest swordsman. I see Devil Fruits given to her every time. I want to understand the situation.

The new book has been released, and you are welcome to taste it.

The writing is okay, but it's a bit silly to eat a devil fruit when you're cheating.

The new book will be out in two days. The early stage of this Pirates book is about the world of Pirates, and there will be elements of comprehensive comics in the future. If you like it, you are welcome to read it! ! !

There is an upper limit to the fruit's ability. What's the use of eating slippery fruit?

Actually, I think it looks good, and it looks pretty smooth.

To be honest, I couldn't stand it when I saw Garp with his Overlord color. Maybe it is true, but I haven't seen Garp's Overlord color from the anime until I saw Luffy awakening the power of Nika. And from the overall view of the Overlord color, you need a firm belief, huge ambition, and not bad qualifications to awaken the Overlord color. When Garp appeared on the scene, he was already a retired person who messed around and then returned to Windmill Village to take care of the children to bring out the Overlord color?

Don't finish it too quickly, write more! Otherwise, Invincible will be over. Then why is there so much foreshadowing?

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Recommend a pirate fan novel: "Pirates: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" [Decisive Killing + Dominance + Great Swordsman + Pirate Group + Age of Rocks + World Domination] Return to the era of Rocks, join the Rocks Pirates and become a cadre, grab the gold from the sky, massacre the Celestial Dragons during the Battle of the Valley of Gods, and form a pirate group after Rocks' death to dominate one side. During the second celebration of the Celestial Dragons, all the pirate groups in the new world of the Alliance once again launched the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, snatching the Celestial Dragons' treasures and devil fruits, massacring the Celestial Dragons again, killing Lord Garin, Army General, and CP0 Chief... Hawkeye Homick: The world's greatest swordsman? No, no, no, this is not me, but Li Yuan. Ever since I started learning swordsmanship, I have been pursuing his path of swordsmanship. Whitebeard: The strongest man in the world is not me, but Li Yuan. That guy is so outrageous that even my ability to awaken the Shock Fruit cannot defeat him! Five Old Stars: Obviously I am immortal and can passively teleport to save my life. Why am I still being killed?