Pirates: Climb to the Top Starting from Swallowing Thunder!

One Piece is now an era of great dazzle and depression 😍, and hormone fruit is the answer 😁

The manga is so bad that I can't read it. I thought the plot before Ming Ge's chapter was pretty good, but the stuff I drew later made the previous chapters illogical and boring. Just refer to some fruits and settings in the comics. If you copy the plot, you won't be able to get around it. Many plots are simply illogical. If nothing else, the red-haired arm cannot be explained at all.

The author was stabbed in the back by Oda. The Thunder Fruit was still in Elbaf until Luffy went to sea more than ten years ago. In the end, it was eaten by Enel for some reason!

Don't do too many fruits, it's really meaningless. It's not good to make it too complicated, and it doesn't look pure. Even if you want to imitate Blackbeard, two are enough. Don't do too many. Multi-fruits are a big poison in pirate novels.

Don't write the original heroine in such a disgusting way.

At first I saw that the setting of Zi Shao Shao was interesting, so I saved it. But now I see that it is not my cup of tea. The original female protagonist is too boring, and the characterization is just a mess. There are obviously so many characters to choose from in the original work, but they just waste time and ink and not include some. This is a fanfic...

😅 Too many fruits are poison points? There are two Blackbeards on the surface. How many protagonists are there is not too much. What is the difference between having multiple fruits and those abilities given by the system? There's no difference, okay, why don't you say it's poisonous? If the writing is poor and the writing is not good, everything will be poisonous. Can the writing be called poisonous if the writing is good? Don't be too toxic and cause trouble.

You are a person with the Thunder Fruit ability. I have never seen you use lightning strikes several times. You have been fighting here for a long time, and I have never seen you use active and passive elementalization to avoid damage in battle. With your current strength, facing those non-mobile characters, even Whitebeard can use the Thunder Fruit handle to fly a kite and beat him to death.

If the author doesn't set up character cards, not many people will read the novel!

I like the One Piece fanfic, but I'm afraid the author is a eunuch

It's finished. Momojiji 100 chapters, the combination of golden fingers and layout is speechless

I dare not go in and see 😅

If there is a dimensional rift, is that Zhutianliu?

There's a lot of nonsense, so I'd like to cut out some unnecessary introductions and make it easier to read. The whole article is boring.

The protagonist has a golden finger. To put it bluntly, it means adapting and being able to keep the good things and get rid of the bad ones. Then he can eat some later and use a big sword, or let the blacksmith make a capable big sword. After eating, it is best to go to the world of Inuyasha.

The Thunder Fruit is locked according to the different bioelectricity of each person. With one move of thousands of thunders, it can easily kill all ordinary Celestial Dragons

Too much nonsense. There's a bit too much pretense. It's not an urban romance. Just one chapter, 30% nonsense. Chapter 90. I don't have any specific plans for the future. The plot is too slow

Waste of my time(ﾉ_<.)🔨

This fruit is completely unlike the fruit in One Piece. If you receive it temporarily, it is like a devil fruit born and raised in One Piece. Then the fruit awakens and you receive it permanently, then it feels natural.

There's a sense of pretentiousness about the balls, but there's also a pretense that I don't quite understand.

It sucks. Speechless

If a hunter's guild in One Piece cooperates with the world government, it will be a fool. If it cheats neutrality, it can actually become a giant in the underground world.

It's up to you

When your ability to absorb disasters is released, can your shattered sternum be restored with your domineering energy? Your sternum has been shattered and you're already injured. How do you use Haki to recover? You might as well write that the calamity ability is a real illusion, the injuries are illusory, but the pain and force of the broken sternum are real, then this fake injury is dispersed by the domineering force, then it is possible. Otherwise, if your sternum is shattered, how can you be treated by Ba Qi?

This author has an old problem, too much nonsense, and a lot of verbosity. One chapter is divided into 3 chapters, then 3 chapters on time, and then 3 chapters on theory. Alas, the shortest among the shortest is the tallest, so it's just okay.