
I Am in One Piece Summit
我在海贼登顶至上
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.6M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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332Chapters
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Eyes, It's hard to describe in one word, alas. The beginning is actually very good. Although it is a bit watery, it is still watchable. The latter part is more difficult to describe, alas. Women just accept someone who is similar to her, alas -_-||. If you have a golden finger, just don't eat the fruit. Don't you have a biological brother? Simply. They all got the thunder, but they didn't give it to him. It made it look like his brother had picked it up. I really don't understand that my only biological brother is a time traveler, so I know how much danger my brother will be in if his identity is exposed later. Obviously they all got Thunder. If you don't want to eat it yourself, give it to a phantom beast and breed an eight-headed snake. Let's just say that if he eats Thunder, he can't beat him. Who can catch up except Winky?
Insert eye
What started as an adventure story turned into an urban love story. The more I look at it, the more embarrassed I become.
It feels like a time-traveling pirate without eating fruits is like eating pan noodles without adding chili peppers or eating pickled fish without adding sauerkraut. He has completely lost his soul. People who are said to be domineering over everything, are proficient in transformation and use their abilities to their advantage. Among the three senior members of the Navy, there are five ability users. The Four Pirate Kings have three abilities. The protagonist Wang Lufei's rubber is not strong enough and he directly drives the Sun God. With this living reality before our eyes, why do some people always act as if they are in a daze and insist on not eating the fruit? This thing doesn't conflict. Personally, I feel that domineering over everything else is something that needs to be considered when meeting at the top. And the fruit is the high-speed train to the top! I haven't even climbed the foot of the mountain, so I just thought about the pose for taking pictures at the top. Isn't it too ambitious?
Every time the protagonist performs a lottery, the mysterious operation is very stupid.
The first draw can be considered useful with Crow Cultivation and Medicine A. The second time I used the Star Cup to increase the life limit in the world. Do you think Im is not strong enough? Unshackle Im? The third time I pulled out Eriyi, I just had nothing to do. I could have played freely, but suddenly I was given a life-saving mission.
It's written as a collector's issue. The more I watch it, the harder it gets. It's too bland. As long as the famous women in One Piece are basically included, they are also included in other dramas.
Toxic death
When it is put on the shelves, poison is put on the shelves. The thunder fruit can be exchanged for points. I went to draw a star cup to change the rules of the world and make the world more possible. The current protagonist, who is less than 10 years old, has been using the points to do some breathing methods.
The One Piece Code is a masterpiece before you eat it. After eating it, Eunuch, no matter the combat power or ability, the original work has collapsed long ago. It looks good compared to the original work, but it is all invincible. It's completely brainless and fun to follow the original work. The farther away from the original setting the better if you have the brains to talk about facts and logic. If you are just reading a book, when you smash someone else's stall, don't smash it based on your own preference. Just smash it if it is not your preference. You should trash the author because you like it, but the writing is so bad and distorts certain factors. I simply don't like books and ignore them. Otherwise, I'm just here to vent. Be polite. Be respectful.
Why do you want to keep Guangyue Rihe by your side? Too poisonous
What are you thinking about having Yue Rihe by your side, just for Hesong? Even if he has the potential to be a general, that's not the case! If you want the protagonist's subordinates to be powerful, you can find someone else, even if you create your own one! The Pirate World is so big and there are so many places that have not appeared. I can accept it even if you create thirty or fifty general-level characters. After all, the transportation in the Pirate World is not smooth. It is normal for the Shilipo Sword God to appear or be only a little famous in his hometown island and have never been to the sea. It is not known to outsiders, not to mention that now only the potential of a general is required. From the growth of the character Kebi, I don't really believe in the potential of the characters in the One Piece world. Based on Kebi's performance when he appeared and his current strength level, I feel that if you just find a random passerby and give him sufficient training guidance, and if he has the will to become stronger and is willing to work hard, he will eventually reach the strength of a general, and at the end he will be able to become a candidate for the three disaster generals. Author, do you not understand the character of Hiyori Kozuki, or do you view the character's behavior from a different perspective than me? I suggest the author go to Station B to read the character analysis of Hiyori Kozuki. The behavior of Hiwa Kozuki is too abstract. In my impression, Hiwa Kozuki and Momonosuke Kozuki are on the same level of disgusting. This character is so disgusting to put in the protagonist group. It's like you cooked a table of dishes, both meat and vegetable, with all kinds of flavors. People who eat the dishes have different evaluations. Some people like this dish, some like that dish. Those who don't like it at most should just eat less. But I feel now as if you served a plate of shit on a table of dishes. How can you still eat it! Perhaps I am not a writer of novels, and my ideas are different from the author's. What I just say may not be correct, and the author makes his own judgment. For a plot like this that requires adding subordinates to the protagonist, my first feeling is that it is best to create an original character, just like Xiong Bao and Crow Dabao. After all, you can't have too many supporting characters of this kind. If there are too many, it will be difficult to write, and there will be no drama in the later stage. Therefore, you can completely create a few original characters to achieve the purpose of increasing the strength of the protagonist's subordinates. The second step is to accept the characters who appeared in the original work, but these characters have their own impressions in the minds of readers, so they must be carefully considered. You should choose characters with generally good reviews, such as Zoro, Kuina, and Sanji, all of whom are pretty good. For those whose evaluations are more controversial, such as Akin and Yamato, they need to be carefully considered and reformed. After all, there are those who like Ah Jin for his loyalty to the captain and his strong strength when he appears, while there are also those who hate him for his lack of opinion. As long as it is the captain's order, he can kill innocent people indiscriminately and repay kindness with revenge. For characters with generally negative reviews, we should stay away from them as much as possible. I'm talking about Hiyori and Momonosuke, and even the Nine Heroes of the Red Sky. They are like mops that are sticky with shit. They feel disgusting when they are close.
Let's talk briefly!
Regarding the question of whether to eat Devil Fruit or not, to be precise, I won't eat it, but I will collect Devil Fruit. After all, Devil Fruit represents a large number of merit points. As for the protagonist's abilities, physical strength, domineering, and use of various weapons, as for the power of domineering, my thoughts and humble opinions. The three types of domineering can also be said to be completely dependent on the human body. To put it more vividly, it is the concept of "essence, energy, and spirit" of the human body. This book will deeply explore the potential of domineering. Just like in the theater version, Vice Admiral Kong Ming uses domineering techniques to affect the development of matter such as the form of matter. Of course, there will also be other elements and higher abilities. After all, merit points can refine gift abilities from life experiences and historical possibilities. As for the lottery, the abilities are diverse, but there will definitely be ability integration later. ps: Some rare devil fruits will be used to cultivate your own people.
After reading eighty chapters, it's still a bunch of kids fighting every day. The same routine every day becomes more and more boring.
Pirates fandom without fruit is like the West without Jerusalem
The taste is too authentic, it smells like middle school and high school composition, without the feeling of pirates.
He has a good idea, but he is too naive and does not give full play to his abilities. He just takes things as he goes, not to mention developing some breathing techniques. Obviously, you can get legendary value by forging, but it is just a wave. If you write about daily life like this, you might as well just jump to going out to sea.
I'm not going to complain, but by the end of the 90th chapter, two Red Scabbard Nine heroes have appeared, and it turns out that their strength ratings are the same as Jhin's? ! Do you despise the Imperial Vice-President more or do you admire the Nine Red Scabbards? ? ? Even if Jhin doesn't perform well in the plot, he has been the second-in-command of all beasts for so many years. Why do you think Kaido is the second-in-command of a hundred beasts for so many years? Or do you think that all the Nine Red Scabbard Heroes are almost at the level of an emperor's deputy? Then Kaido killed both Kozuki Oden and the Nine Heroes of the Red Scabbard. Doesn't that mean that Kaido can defeat an imperial group? Are you kidding me? !
Some plots are less
When I saw Perona, she didn't know what to do, the spirit bit her heart, and the main character was just like a field dog. It was really not as interesting as the previous chapters. Although the author insists on describing the protagonist as a handsome dog, this description is too realistic.
Many plots are too deliberate, such as meeting the three Hancock sisters, meeting Perona, and meeting Robin. Meeting one can be luck, but meeting three is too fake. Moreover, the protagonist either has a good relationship with them or takes them with him. Is this planning to open a harem in the future? But the protagonists are nearly ten years younger than them, which I personally don't like. I feel it's not as good as meeting some original characters of a similar age.
Such a complex system panel has been retired from the environment, especially for readers who listen to books. I used to be able to read it patiently, but now my head hurts when I hear a large system with a lot of data that has unclear meaning.
Too much daily life is boring. How old is the protagonist now? According to this writing, if the protagonist goes to sea at the age of seventeen or eighteen, then there will not be two or three hundred pictures? Summary: It's as bland as water and tasteless.
Watching pirates not eating the fruit always makes me feel like something is missing.
It's the first time I see a different pirate, it's a different feeling, I'm looking forward to it
Idiom Solitaire!
On the first day of the new year, I wish my book friends: good luck and good luck!
God-level fruit: paper fruit!
Personally, I think that if the paper fruit is developed well, it will be awesome! It feels like the paper fruit is the superior fruit of the book! After all, books are made of paper! The ability of the Book Fruit can be completely possessed by the Paper Fruit! A bold idea, you can completely use the space created by the paper fruit ability to pull in those with abilities, kill them, and seize their fruit abilities! In addition, there are many directions for paper fruit development. First, you can refer to Xiaonan's paper escape, a billion detonating talismans, and the technique of the God's Style; second, you can refer to our country's talisman technique, the five-element talisman, the sky-reaching talisman, and the like. If this is developed well, it will feel awesome; thirdly, you can refer to our country's paper-tying technique, paper people, paper horses, paper birds, etc. In many suspense novels, there is a scene where a warrior in golden armor is punched out using paper techniques to kill everyone. If this is developed well, it will be a powerful tool for clearing out miscellaneous soldiers! There is a book called "Paper Fruit in One Piece" at the starting point, which is pretty good, but I'm tired of following the boat flow, and I hope someone can write a book about forming my own group. Using the above abilities to seize the fruits and form your own power is no more fun than following the boat! Is there any master who can write a book? ?
Fuck. It's actually over? Didn't you eat the fruit until the end?
Book Recommendation
Friends who are not interested in reading can go and read "Taoist Priest: I asked you to make a wish, but I didn't say I would help you realize it". It is a masterpiece with millions of words and can be consumed with confidence! Great God, Great God! Can I use the treasure land? Please bring it, please bring it (๑>ڡ<)☆, if you can't advertise, please delete the ban directly! ! ! Thank you, thank you! ! ! Dear book friends! After seeing so many gluttonous feasts, let's try something different~ The staple food is important, but snacks are also the spice of life, and they are guaranteed to look good! ! !
Well written! Stop being a eunuch!
Go find Sugar, Monet and the woman who ate the lucky fruit
Speaking of which, are there any pirate novels about practicing the Heaven-shading Technique or the martial arts and national arts 🙂
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Come on, author. Follow up 25 hours a day. It's best not to sleep!