The Companion Divine Tree of the Star Realm

Why do I feel like I've read it? It's also an astral novel with a jumping spider as the main character, but it's just unfinished.

After watching two-thirds of it, I couldn't stand it anymore. I exchanged it for the original stone that can strengthen the space system, and bought other divine products from Hua Yuan Stone! The price of one male god-given plant can be compared to four or five ordinary god-given plants, but I don't have a few more female ones. What are you writing about?

After reading for a few days, this conflict has not been resolved. When can I honestly start farming and develop? I read a few Star World fanfics and found that I liked them all. I farmed and farmed and started writing about battles. I wrote content that I wanted to read about farming but didn't want to see. It was boring and procrastinating. I also wanted to skip reading but was afraid that there would be too few people reading it.

The plot is a bit bitter and the plot is full of hatred. It might be better to have more heart-warming daily stories about farming.

There's something wrong with the rhythm. I haven't written about cultivation in detail and I haven't gone out on adventures. Now it's like a running account, starting with winter - sprouting - waiting for the fruits to mature - waiting for the caravan - entering winter again. There have been many chapters without any ups and downs in the plot. If I continue writing like this, I will lose the few follow-up readings.

A lot of things are distributed unreasonably and the writing is a bit messy. Only three different loquats are born? I don't know what I'm thinking. That's the soul system. You can't get anything except divine items. To conceive other things is to give up the roots and chase the trees. If you don't have four exotic loquats, you can get one divine gift. If you breed one more, you will get a quarter of the divine gift. If there is no divine gift, you should use all exotic loquats. If you want to say that there is not enough pollen, then don't send seeds everywhere. You can take half of the share yourself, and leave the remaining half to the tribe, but you can ask for half of the income from the output. That way, those warriors of the same clan who use golden locusts to pollinate can evolve to the mountain master as long as they have one! Except for Phytolacca, none of the remaining three are completely mine. I don't know what to think! ! !

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The writing is indeed good, and it has the flavor of thousands of miles

It's too bland, Tian BuZhong's messy things are a big deal

The writing is pretty good, but I feel that the scenes are a bit off-kilter and the connection is not smooth. Please give me 5 recommendation votes to support it.