A Young Man from Another World Came Back from His Hometown

The settings map of Zhang Xier who ran away

I feel that the author has an idea, but it seems that there are too many elements mixed together. I think the author should think carefully about what kind of story he wants to write? Are you writing a novel about the development of a rural development lord? Or is it a novel about Return from Another World with extraordinary powers and I don't want to eat beef? Or urban god hero article? Or a light novel romance? It feels like every element is present now, but each element is not discussed in depth enough. Come on. Author, you should think carefully about what is the main line of your story now? The main plot of your first chapter is to develop the territory, because after the protagonist comes back from time travel, developing the territory is directly related to his extraordinary power. But as it was written later, there was no urgency anymore, and they became two long-lived species again, wanting to fall in love slowly and build their territory slowly. This is not impossible, it is quite interesting. But it just feels like this. His plot advancement has completely become the two of them falling in love to advance the main plot. What is missing when the protagonist and the elf fall in love, and then create something in the territory. Is this too light novel?

I tried to run one out

The idealistic Madonna protagonist is equivalent to the system distributing money to build towns and villages

It's just the introduction that's interesting, but it's all for nothing.

The classic light novel writing method, with strong characters and weak events. The events all happened to shape the characters and not for the story. I don't understand why I chose the city.

That teacher was a huge failure. The first part of the story was okay, but the teacher created a huge moron and a brainless person. I lost my desire to continue reading.

Is infrastructure construction so easy to do? The construction period of large-scale construction is more than a year. This novel is just a quick one.

The name, introduction, and content of your book are incompatible with each other. I was attracted by the title of your book and found that the main character is mostly described as having a love affair with a princess who doesn't look like an elf princess. Your content is about rural revitalization next time, but your introduction doesn't show it. It's not that your writing is bad. You just I never thought of showing anything to the readers. The protagonist and the villagers are two different worlds. If the protagonist were not a local, he would go abroad to find a place and become a new country. You have not dealt with the background of the protagonist at all. If I were a pig's foot, I would dig up the land where the trees are planted. I can go wherever I want.

This introduction reminds me of the million-dollar-a-day golden finger setting, which was also developed in my hometown.

Well, the protagonist is so awesome, why does he come back? Wouldn't it be nice to develop a magical civilization in a different world? Musk went to African villages to raise chickens and start a business?

This introduction is very attractive, isn't it a liar?

Very good. Novels are for relieving stress and having fun. They should be full of relaxation.

It's too down-to-earth, very vulgar, unbearable, and no one likes it

Nice introduction. It looked like he had drunk too much fake wine.

Click to listen to the book, the latest 2 chapters don't feel like a book 😂😂The author drank fake wine

Author, what is the source of the energy of the World Tree in your first chapter? ? ? It is planted for the first time to help the protagonist not age, and it can also be understood as consuming the remaining magic power stored in the seed from another world! Let's not talk about the conservation of energy. Anyway, I don't want to be realistic in the novel! To put it simply: subsequent increase in population will allow the World Tree to grow/expand and even produce more magic power? ? ? What's the principle? Is it reasonable? If the World Tree is so awesome, uh, if you are talking about the prehistoric World Tree or the Chaos World Tree, I can barely understand it, but this is just the World Tree of the elves in another world. Although the name is World Tree, its grade should only be the mortal level. The most elves are born. Some otherworld works even have elves being invaded by other kingdoms on the mainland and even the World Tree is depleted. So how will you, the little world tree of the elves, grow when you come to the earth in the end of the Dharma era? ? ? If other books were probably almost exhausted due to lack of magic power, your first chapter assumes that as long as the population is large, the World Tree can create magic power and argument fields out of thin air? ? ? Is this reasonable? If they were so awesome, the elves from other worlds would not be captured by other kingdoms. And if they were so awesome, then why would the gods from other worlds launch a war of faith? Wouldn't it be enough to directly plunder the World Tree of the elves? The other world will not be unable to give birth to more gods due to lack of magic power. The most important thing is that the air in the other world is full of magic power. Every elves are powerful practitioners who live under the World Tree and have not seen how awesome the World Tree is. Now if you let a bunch of ordinary people live in the territory of the World Tree, can the World Tree automatically give birth to magic power? ? ? Is this reasonable? The Otsutsuki tree in Naruto also absorbs the spiritual energy in the earth/air and destroys the planet before converting it into chakra. It even absorbs people's energy and spirit in the end and converts it into white Zetsu. Other main god spaces/dream spaces are also converted based on absorbing people's beliefs/energy and spirit! But is the power system in this book reasonable? The World Tree of your Elf Tribe firstly does not absorb earth veins (although the land in the Magic Age has little nutrition), secondly it has no spiritual energy for you to absorb, and thirdly it does not absorb faith. It cannot be the power of my imagination to create magic power out of thin air as long as the territory is inhabited, right? ? ? Let's not talk about the principle, let's just say that your World Tree is for charity 😰 The protagonist's magic power came to the earth and he almost ran out of magic power and turned into an old man. You are just a little elven World Tree seed that does not contain much magic power. Can the air be filled with magic power the moment it is planted? ? ? Why don't you just say, "Concept God/Power of Rules/Void Creation, just to make a contribution without any intention?" The protagonists of the end of the law in other books at least use the main godhead to create a virtual game and then pull people in to absorb the idle soul power and convert it into spiritual energy. The world tree in this book only needs to increase the magic power of ordinary people living in the territory? Is it reasonable?

The author is from Western Guangdong? I guess they are from Mao or Zhanjiang?

I can travel in all realms. Personally speaking, I will really move forward crazily. I will either transcend and die on the road willingly.