A Small Street Restaurant, My Ingredients Come from Another World

After reading the first three chapters, I am very eager to read on. Let me briefly summarize the content: Xia Yi, a chef graduated from New Oriental, is bound to the food system and can travel to another world (the world of monsters, elves and brave men) to obtain ingredients. As a recent graduate, he happened to inherit a small store of 30 square meters owned by his distant aunt, so he was ready to open a dream store. There is also an elf from another world who accidentally came to the real world in pursuit of a sacred object. The female elf is quite cute... Let me talk about the conclusion first. I highly recommend it. The author's narrative is smooth, explaining the store and system, and shaping the characters in an orderly manner. The main line of the story is clear and interesting. It is a potential seedling with no obvious poisonous points. In particular, the Spicy Stir-fried Goblin Ears ★ finally reached the one-star setting. Due to the addition of ingredients from other worlds, the setting of the food rating is clear and refreshing. Let's talk about the points that can be improved (for reference only): The first three chapters show the functions of the system from multiple angles, such as being able to travel through different worlds, and also giving a gift package for novices. The gift package contains points and a power-increasing experience card. The points can be used to exchange for unlimited space ice. Boxes, etc. It seems that you can get points by opening a store later, but these are what I summarized. The author never gave a positive explanation of the system, or even gave the system a name. It felt that the system was a bit too tool-based, and it felt like just adding whatever functions were needed, which was not very clear. Many system novels add their own characters to the system, such as poisonous tongue, naughty, bad taste, etc. It feels that it matches the atmosphere of this novel, and the author can consider it as appropriate. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more and his ideas will flow 🌹

Is it possible to decorate the restaurant with a different world theme, such as the Adventurer's Guild, so that the problem of the menu and the problem of the elf waiter can be solved?

By the way, the author doesn't know how to open a store with pig's feet. You can write about how to open a store or attract traffic to Brother Yong. This method may also break the circle.

🎭 Character design: The protagonist must take the initiative to go to another world to collect materials, raise communication issues with local residents, and bring visitors to the other world. 🎬 Plot: The first three chapters mainly introduce the limitations of teleporting to another world and other functions, as well as the curiosity and questions of visitors to the other world about the strange real world. ✒️ Writing style: The writing pace of this article is relatively slow. It is not until Chapter 6 that the elves appear in the system to score, indicating that the source of guests is lower, leaving a foreshadowing that the other world is the source of the elven race and the reality of the holy objects.

Should I say it or not? Three Golden Chapters successfully attracted me.

Come on, author, the writing is very good, keep it up. Just read the book reviews. Don't be led by the rhythm. You have to have your own ideas. Although the competition for writing books is difficult now, I can still read these chapters.

Will he die after food safety inspection?

It might be better if we get rid of these store explorers later.

🎭 Character design: The protagonist is a bit silly 🎬 Plot: Smooth ✒️Writing: non-toxic

🎭 Character design: vivid and distinct, reasonable distribution 🎬 Plot: Gradually advancing and fascinating ✒️ Writing style: fluent, currently non-toxic, can be called food

Not bad, to my taste, come on author

Not bad, not bad, very comfortable to watch, but now there are dishes that become more powerful, and there should be others in the future. Will someone react?