
Time Travel at the Same Time: but Our System Is Misaligned!
同时穿越:可我们的系统错位了!
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- Myriad Worlds
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It's about ghost slaying, and the setting has a deep relationship with the ghosts.
The plot period of Demon Slayer was during the Taisho period, and twenty-one things came out to help them eliminate internal unstable factors? Interesting
Hot knowledge, the superposition of golden finger genres, especially the superposition of golden fingers with the same flow, can write results, I have never seen it
Pure dog💩, after reading it I even wanted to ask the author for compensation
Shit
Within one chapter, you can create conflict between the previous and later settings, and the AI is not that rubbish.
The system still needs to be tamed. It's enough. I'm here to read the cool article.
I am Shen Nong. In Chapter 70 or 80 of the Demon Slayer World, the author threw away all the plots and characters of the Demon Slayer, and let the protagonist tangle with an inexplicable and obviously not female protagonist, Mrs. Rose, who overcame the female supporting role for more than ten chapters. The plot made no progress and the relationship made no progress. Zhan, this Madam Rose, I did a search, but I didn't see anything to do with Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. I don't know if it's an original character. Anyway, it has no characteristics at all. It's so inexplicable that the protagonist and this woman go through more than ten chapters. It's the first time I've seen such a weird thing.
It's another nanny story, with the same golden fingers and even a system. What do you think when you fight for Tanjiro and Tomioka Giyu even though you can avoid them in the early stage? According to the development of the plot, wouldn't it be good to run away and develop first, knowing that nothing will happen to the protagonist? You still fight him desperately, I can't figure out what you are thinking. Even if you want to join the Demon Slayer Corps, wouldn't it be better if you develop yourself for a while first? Join when you have nothing, but you will be restricted everywhere.
Good setting, but poisonous weeds
But there is something really wrong with a world like Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, which has a lot of pitfalls. You may think that its animation is very popular, so you write it, but this has loopholes in the setting. It is better to write about JOJO, Juju Kaibai and the like. If you want to kill demons in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, it's better to find a few smart people who climb the technology (it's very convenient to play in the same time flow), not to mention the same time flow Jenga. Your Demon Slayer's force value can be evaluated as a speed pass after determining the time lapse speed. You can be a nanny to support the protagonist. The key point is that Wuhan almost wiped out your entire family just now, but you are dawdling. Your protagonist is not just a passerby, but a step-by-step adopted son. This is pure poison Comprehensive evaluation of this book, poisonous weed!
Shit, it's shit💩💩💩💩💩
Those who have never eaten shit can read it. It's such a big cheat to beat a kid and play nine chapters. Nine chapters are still so big. Beat a kid and play nine chapters. You can't even use so many chapters to fight Daluo Immortal. Also, are you writing the style of All Heavens and Worlds or Jenga? A world has been written for almost 60 chapters and it's not over yet. There's a lot of nonsense that crazily suppresses the combat power.
Those who have never tried Shi can try it
I can't understand what the author is thinking at all. It has turned into a purely self-interested article. One or two chapters are enough, but three or four chapters are enough. It lasts for more than ten chapters with a supporting actress who is not the heroine. There is so much water inexplicably when there is no progress in the plot and no progress in the relationship. I can't understand what the hell is written. Who are you, Mrs. Rose? Do you value her so much? A lot of entanglements, a true man of God
What did Ghost Slayer write?
When you first open a gold finger furnace, you can eat Nezuko if you take the initiative. Later, when you encounter other ghosts, your gold finger will die.
I have an idea but the writing is so bad. The settings on the previous page are eaten up by the next page.
Studio writing, inconsistent, childish writing style
Just the plug-in creativity is okay
That is to say, the plug-in is misplaced, and the creativity is still a bit novel. Other plot content is just a mess. Taking the first Demon Slayer script as an example, the protagonist's understanding of the original plot is in the Schrödinger state The plug-in has just been activated and is in urgent need of energy. It is known that the original plot was calm during Tanjiro's training, and knowing the existence of plot props such as the blue Higanbana flower, the protagonist chose to train together 🙂 It is to forcefully suppress the plot and combat power, and even debug plug-ins... What is even more outrageous is the stitching of the plot. It is rare to write about Demon Slayer fandom, and it is forcibly integrated into the background of the era. Most of them are just mentioned in one stroke, but the author insists on writing a lot of conspiracies of ninja nobles in the same period, and also mentions the internal and external era background many times. Does the author know what is the situation in the country during the Taisho period of Demon Slayer? There are a lot of Zhutianliu, Mugenliu, and even Demon Slayer, but the fans don't mention the background of the era. Why? Not to mention that the plot is still a mess💩
The introduction attracted me, but the content was hard to explain in one sentence. I even wanted to ask the author for mental damages!
With Chuanliu, Demon Slayer's force value is very poor if he cannot speed pass within 15 chapters.
With your nb system, it's so hard to defeat the mobs. Another fierce pressure
I started reading the book in the fourth chapter😅The latest chapter has been a mess for 13 consecutive chapters, and I can somehow get entangled with some kind of Mrs. Rose. Chapter 13 has made no progress in the plot, and it even seems like I will continue to mess with this thing. What the hell is this writing about?
The title is "Simultaneous Time Travel", the content is all about Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, more than 100 chapters, and it still has its fucking overwhelming fighting power.
I'm not telling you that in the latest chapters, the protagonist of Demon Slayer Sekai has been inexplicably entangled with the lady Rose for thirteen consecutive chapters. The plot has made no progress. It is a two-player drama. The other Demon Slayer characters have not appeared at all. Can anyone really watch it? No matter how many foreshadowing points the author has made for this Lady Rose, you can actually have the protagonist and this lady be inexplicably entangled with water for thirteen chapters without any progress in the plot. I really can't understand it. It's inexplicable.
There is really very little that can be seen in Tongchuanliu. A world with low martial arts like Demon Slayer would be boring if you didn't speed through it. If you speed through it, the world would be abandoned. It is better to inherit the flow than to pass through the flow. Similarly, this plug-in can also be inherited, and the world that has been cleared can also be used as a resource reserve.
Time travel at the same time, but the villain does it first.
You have traveled through time and space to the world of Naruto. Originally, you thought this was just an ordinary time travel, but until one day, you heard that the Kirigakure Village in the Country of Water was besieged. What pirate group besieged them? There are also those who can transform into animals and some special ninjutsu. The most important thing is that you actually understood it, saying that some of those people even knew some Marine Sixth Form and some Murlocs. You are just thinking, isn't this the villain of the One Piece world? As a result, at this time, your plug-in started. You are in the Naruto world, you are in the One Piece world, and you are in the Bleach world. You in Inuyasha's world and you in other messy worlds have appeared. No, it should be said that there are only these 4 worlds so far. Then you from the world of Death made a lot of complaints. Say that one day you were in the world of Death, and one day your soul traveled to the world of Death, and then you were still there in the World of Death. While wandering, I suddenly discovered that there was an extra piece of land in the world of Death. It was the pure land of the world of Naruto. Some of the strongest men in the world of Naruto had appeared in the world of Death. And some were assimilated into Hollows, and some were absorbed by the God of Death and became the new God of Death.
The idea is interesting, but the plot is too exaggerated.
This book, Ghost Slayer, is quite creative. Although it is still not a story about the same time traveler, it just pretends that it is a time traveler. In fact, it is a story about a group of time travellers, because they cannot share their spirit! The author could still accept it, but the Demon Slayer at the beginning was too bad, so he left!
When will it end? I don't want to see this copy
It's taken me so long to write and I'm still speechless.