Naruto: Bringing Orochimaru Back as a King from the Start
火影：开局让大蛇丸王者归来
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- Completed
- Length
- 698k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- English
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It's a bit far-fetched that Tsunade didn't know about the Impure World Reincarnation. The earlier part, depicting Orochimaru's triumphant return, was quite exciting, but the later developments became incredibly disjointed. Even if Tsunade initially didn't know about the Impure World Reincarnation, and then became so eager to summon Nawaki after discovering it, why didn't she revive Dan and Nawaki…
The dialogue lacks emotion, is entirely AI-like, and is full of cause-and-effect relationships. The blank spaces in the dialogue are filled with this, failing to highlight the characters' personalities. This feeling is further amplified in fan fiction, since most readers have read the original Naruto. Overall, the ideas are good, but it's hard to find a reason to keep reading, perhaps because I use AI so often. The above are all personal opinions.
Why is it so heavily influenced by AI? Can't you use less AI when writing a novel?
Ding Zhen at first glance, it's definitely written by AI, it's so authentic.
Is the author Naruto Cloud?
I won't criticize you for using AI, because I use it too. Just tone it down a bit. What's with finding Karin in Tanabata Street? The age is wrong, the location is wrong, nothing is right. It's so jarring.
There's no need to read garbage generated by AI.
All the key points, no blank spaces.
This is the drawback of AI literature: AI lacks human emotions and is devoid of feelings.
I'm laughing so hard I'm numb. The protagonist's biggest cheat is that he didn't get killed by Hiruzen Sarutobi when he was spouting nonsense. I can't believe there are people who think the protagonist is efficient and decisive.
Several daimyo from the Land of Fire... This really feels like AI.
Karin's age is incorrect. Karin is about the same age as Naruto and Sasuke, maybe a year older at most. Naruto hasn't even been born yet, and Karin is already four or five years old. I seriously doubt whether the author has even watched Naruto.