Naruto: Bringing Orochimaru Back as a King from the Start
火影：开局让大蛇丸王者归来
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- Completed
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- 698k Words
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- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
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- 4mo ago
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- Qidian
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Tsunade didn't know that the reincarnation of the earth was a bit ridiculous. Originally, the story about Orochimaru's return as king was quite exciting, but it turned out to be unsatisfactory once the story got deeper. Even if Tsunade didn't know about the reincarnation of the filthy soil at the beginning, but she was eager to summon the rope tree when she found out, why didn't Tsunade resurrect the broken and the rope tree in the original novel? People in Japan are very repelled to disturb the peace of the dead. Tsunade can't let the dirty soil reincarnate into the rope tree and the broken tree. To her, it would be a blasphemy to the soul!
The dialogue has no emotion and is full of AI flavor. It is full of cause and effect. The blank space of the words itself is filled with this kind of thing, which does not highlight the personality of the character. This feeling is further amplified in the fanfic. After all, most readers have watched the original Naruto. Overall, the ideas are good, but it's hard to make people want to read on. Maybe it's because I often use AI. The above are all personal thoughts.
Why is AI so strong? Can you use less AI when writing a novel?
One glance at Ding Zhen, the absolute beauty was written by AI, it tastes so good
There is no need to read garbage using AI
Is the author Yun Hokage?
I won't talk about you when using AI, because I use it too, just be more restrained. What the hell is it that I picked up fragrant phosphorus on Duanzhu Street? The age is wrong, the place is wrong, everything is wrong, it's too dramatic.
All focus, no blank space
This is the shortcoming of AI writing. AI is inexperienced and has no sensibility.
I'm laughing so hard. The biggest worry for the protagonist is that Hiruzen Sarutobi didn't beat him to death when he was talking nonsense. I didn't expect that there are still people who think that the protagonist does things neatly.
There are many famous names in the Land of Fire... The AI flavor is really strong
Kaoru's age is wrong. Kaoru is about the same age as Naruto and Sasuke, at most one year older. Naruto hasn't even been born yet, and Kaoru is already four or five years old. I seriously doubt the author has watched Naruto.