Eternal Life Starts from Lying Down at the Demon Gate

The setting is good, but the protagonist is too useless. The protagonist of a book can pretend to be useless, but he cannot be a real useless person. It all depends on luck.

If you become wise and expose your abnormality in front of practitioners, you are giving your life to others. Are you betting that others will not get to the bottom of it and not leak it?

It's so poisonous. The protagonist has been a turtle for more than a hundred years, but he casually tells others that his blood can increase the longevity of elixirs. Is this a fool?

The style of this book is that a map will kick away some readers.

It's amazing, what about Lin Xue, he didn't successfully form the elixir with lung mist, even though the sect is also a mess, but the plot of this godman kidnapping the protagonist is simply amazing.

The useless protagonist looks uncomfortable and stupid.

As the title says, this book has smooth writing, vivid descriptions of supporting characters, and has the potential to be a source of food. But at present, I think the probability of this book being discontinued after 50 chapters is as high as 70%. Because readers will feel that the early stage is not exciting and will not have the patience to read on, resulting in poor results. Gou of Changshengwen may just be showing off. In the first 10 chapters, the protagonist has been in the cycle of "encountering changes → changing places → encountering changes - changing places". The frequency of map changes is high and the time span is long, but the protagonist's strength has not improved much.         --，，，，，                             Maybe it will get better in the future, after all, only 10 chapters have been updated, it has just begun. According to the pace of this book, it is not impossible to become a Nascent Soul in 20 to 30 chapters, so let's look forward to it. Another point is that I feel that the new plot of revealing that one's own essence and blood can ripen the elixir is a bit intellectually depressing. What is the difference between this and telling others that you are a humanoid elixir? Tang Monk from another world. Even if you look like an old ghost to others, don't you have a "secret method"? There are many ways to pry you out. If you master this secret method and let the cannon fodder practice it, wouldn't it be a steady stream of high-level medicinal materials? It's inconsistent with your previous state of mind. The subsequent plot of being captured by the supporting character you helped is a bit nonsensical. It's not that there's anything wrong with this. It's because you chose to continue working as a handyman after you successfully established the foundation. After decades, Gou took the initiative to reveal that he had a secret method to help others, and was stabbed in the back by him, revealing his true strength and appearance. This is very strange. Weren't you in the Demonic Sect before? Why don't you develop some techniques to burn your lifespan to escape or temporarily enhance your strength? It's very frustrating and illogical.                                                                                                                                                                                        This book has both bright spots and shortcomings. The author's skill in describing supporting characters is quite good. Will he spend more time on this aspect in the future? Anyway, I've only updated 10 chapters, so keep waiting and looking forward to it.

Trash, hook💩, shit

Read the first eight chapters. What's the use of cultivating immortality like you? It's just living, which is worse than a tree.

What does it mean that the protagonist does nothing but hangs around women all day long?

In fact, the concept at the beginning of this book is still good, and the writing style is also good, but the pace is too fast. Some of the stories are well designed, but they all feel like they are just scratching the surface. Perhaps Qidian. Com likes this fast pace, and it doesn't matter whether it's fast or rough, including those popular novels. Anyway, I'm not used to it. I just like to tell the story and the characters advance step by step.

I subscribed and read the next hundred chapters, it's very good👌🏻This article is really useless. You have saved a chicken feather and been exploited for so long. You have already paid it off long ago. If you don't worry about it, what about the readers? It's not like you're a coward. If you change the magic path, you can directly start training into a ghost general. You don't need to carry it with you at all. It's the same sentence. You just tricked me. You tricked me all night.

No one will read this crappy book, right?

This book is like a delicious seafood casserole, but the shrimp in it tastes like cockroaches. The overall plot is mediocre, but the plot is sloppy. I feel like a second-rate writer who bought the first 50 chapters.

The plot is not great, and many explanations are unclear. The writing is not detailed enough. There is no development context. Waste of time

You can't listen to this book. I gave up on the first chapter. The protagonist's name appears too much. If you can write a book, pay attention to this point.

A bit boring. The whole thing I write about is about the troubles I had with the female nun, and I feel like it was written specifically for misogyny. There is no main line, just jumping from one sect to the next until you can't go on anymore and the cycle repeats. The battle scenes are unimaginative and lackluster.

Don't deliberately devise disgusting plots just to pick up girls.

This book feels a bit rubbish. After reading more than 50 pictures, the combat power is not clear.

The Tianling Root is as rare as the Five Spiritual Roots, and he is worthy of being the protagonist, so he met it!