Ms. Rushaki's Self-Development Diary

Let me respond to the question of marriage orders. It is impossible to marry. You can only accept a hundred and a single, so you only write a hundred and a single. Then this one is a hundred. Finally, please give me some follow-up readings. I don't have high requirements. As long as there are 100 follow-up readings, it will be enough for me to put 200,000 yuan on the shelves. Having full attendance will give you more motivation to update. So please read it and use your little hands to get rich until the end. Please, this is really important to me.

It seems a bit shameful to just call Rusaki

Just like the title, I changed the beginning and condensed the 9k chapters into 5k, so the serial number has changed. . Because the subject matter is easy to review, it is difficult to change the serial number. At present, we can only split Chapter 7 into two chapters, so let's make do with it. 😥 Even so, Chapter 7 is still available for now, and we will wait and see when it will be released. . . Finally, thanks to Naipeng Ju, he won again 😭😭😭

I think the first thing that should be changed is the protagonist's name.

Let's hope we don't make the same mistake this time.

After reading the first chapter, it feels like a composition written by an elementary school student? {(°△°; "}! Is this author a newbie?

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Can this persona of always losing children and letting them starve be changed? Her parents owe her a complete childhood.

For example, the scene where the protagonist's face is simulated being broken by his best friend's teeth. Even though the protagonist planned it, there is no way this thing can be related to his relatives. Not to mention the one who was knocked, the tooth that knocked the person will also hurt. There is also the reason why the protagonist takes care of the child to avoid spilling the beans and being kissed by his best friend. But in my opinion, regardless of the subjective intentions of the protagonist, looking at it from a purely third-person perspective, the first time as mentioned above was an accident and even hurt people. The second time, wasn't it just pure coaxing? It's hard for others to misunderstand this thing without explanation, right? To sum up, in some plots, I feel that a certain event itself is normal, but in order to advance another event, the author will force the protagonist to think that there is a problem with this event, and then deduce a series of actions to cover up this "problem", which is a bit of a forced plot. By the way, I have a small suggestion at the end. I won't go into details about how to add points because it has to do with the plot. But if you don't want the protagonist to have good looks, don't always emphasize 60 without make-up and 85 with make-up. It's obvious that intelligence-related attributes are not so emphasized in studies and the writing is quite good. Why do you have to keep talking about it as soon as you get good looks?

Both the plot and writing are average, barely watchable.

I feel like I can't support it, so I need to support it first.

It would be nice if there was only the system and no system panel. I don't want to read any novels based on panel data.

There is a bad sentence in the introduction. Where is the most versatile central word?

You guys can't finish it hastily this time.

It feels pretty good. Come on, author.

Was there a novel in the past where the protagonist's surname was Meichuan or Buchuan, and his name seemed to be Ku Zi? How come the author has this surname that is obvious at first glance but also has some meaning of paying tribute 🙂

I feel like I could write about Forbidden Academy City. The style should be quite suitable, how should I put it?

Why does it look a little lukewarm?