Reborn Psychic Girl in Tokyo

After entering the dungeon, I started to talk a lot of nonsense and slowed down the pace. After I turned into a cat, the plot was full of negative feedback, and then inexplicably started a whole chapter without reading the setting. I felt sleepy after reading it, and suddenly started to think about why I opened this book with the first dozen chapters so boring.

It doesn't look good, just a boring running account. The protagonist's character is the kind of brainless and disconnected creature that only appears in the author's writings. There is no logic in his behavior, thinking and speaking.

The first dungeon will be longer, because the final props are related to whether the dungeon can be downloaded later, and it is also related to the protagonist's complete change of mentality. Well, now he just accepts being a beautiful girl, and he has not yet determined to become the cutest, sexiest, most beautiful and unique girl in the world. As for the subsequent copies, there must be short ones. After all, writing long ones all the time is also a test of your writing ability. By the way, I want to mention yesterday's chapter. Part of the inspiration came from action movies, so the whole thing is a bit abnormal. I don't know if you can accept it. If you can't accept it, I'll make some adjustments. From now on, I'll use serious means to confront the enemy, and I won't do any extravagance. Finally, I would like to ask you to do some follow-up reading. If you want to recommend, you must follow-up reading, because Qidian's recommendation mechanism determines that if the follow-up reading is not good, the book is not good, and if the book is not good, it will not be exposed. The first book for a newcomer is not easy. Please read it and use your little fortune-making hands to read it to the end. Please, this is really important to me.

Not bad. Come on, author, keep updating.

It's so uncomfortable to read. The first volume is a mess. The copy is smelly and long. In the second volume, a killer who has killed several people comes to kill the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't kill her. It's disgusting In a supernatural world, firstly, I don't kill decisively. Secondly, I don't study and improve after I have extraordinary abilities. Thirdly, the character's personality is very fragmented. Fourthly, the plot is also messy and difficult to read. If it weren't for the protagonist, I would have run away.

1. If there is no update at night, there is a high probability that you accidentally entered the dark room again by writing "hi", and you will not know the result of whether the review has been passed or not until the next day. 2. I have to adjust my schedule because I tend to step out of line. I have to update during the day. Otherwise, if I step on the line, I have to release it the next day. That's too painful. If I update it at 12 o'clock any day, it proves that I have adjusted. 3. I originally wanted to ask for a follow-up review, but I am too embarrassed to ask for the quality of my update. Please just let it happen.

I saw the cover and thought it was a new book by an old author? Taste it first

Change order! 😁Cough, take care of it.

The beginning is pretty good, but it's a pity that the newcomer doesn't know enough about the rhythm and readers' preferences. Accumulate experience and write the next book well.

It's okay to write a dungeon, but this dungeon is too boring. Don't talk about a lot of settings at once. We can't remember it, and we don't want to go out of our way to remember it. It's better to gradually experience and reveal these settings from the protagonist's dungeon adventure. What is the reason why it turned into a cat? The logic of cause and effect should best run through this copy.

Emmm, I recommend a TV series "Dark Assembly", it may bring some inspiration