Before the Heart Era

First of all, the title of the book is incomprehensible, and the introduction is written like an outline, both of which are unattractive. Secondly, the role of the prologue is not to give you the author's words. After reading the first three chapters, you are the first person I have seen using the [] symbol for character ideas, which is a bit abstract. The description of the environment at the beginning of the first chapter is ineffective, the dialogue between the characters is too bad, the two people are inexplicably enjoying themselves, the protagonist's ideal is to protect, it is too inexplicable, and you, the author, do not explain it. I resisted and read the second chapter. The dialogue between the characters was also a bunch of bad jokes. The battle started out of nowhere, which made people feel that the cause and effect were unclear, and the world view setting was not thrown out at all. I skipped reading the third chapter. I didn't see the use of the protagonist's awakened abilities. There are also a bunch of things you explained in the author's words: those fancy characters are the memories of the protagonist. If you don't write it in the article, how will you let readers know? Can readers directly look at your outline or read your thoughts? It doesn't matter if you are just practicing writing for your love. If you want to make some money from online writing, you must at least write something that makes readers happy. The first three chapters have passed, and they are boring and uncomfortable. I don't even know what the protagonist is going to do, and I don't know what the world view is like. The writing is too self-indulgent. This is my subjective opinion. If you don't like it, you can delete it. I apologize to you, maybe it was a critical review.