Ancients, Please Possess Some Normal Objects!

This must be a rewrite; I've seen similar ones before.

The angle and subject matter are good, but the biggest flaw is the excessive amount of unnecessary dialogue, making it unreadable.

Damn it, I just want to ask, why am I considered a bad guy just because I went on a blind date?

The premise is similar to the book "Your Ultimate Move Seems to Have Been Subdued by Me." The beginning of that book was quite good, but it was abandoned later.

After the fire hydrant was gone, it felt like I had read a different book. I don't know why, but it felt very disjointed.

Hey bro, why is it free for a limited time?

The archery competition is only a few days away, and they're already making bets. Do they think they can learn it quickly?

Is encountering a Heroic Spirit a protagonist's cheat code, or a miracle of the world? It leaves a lingering feeling.

I really don't understand why we need to teach Deng Ru military strategy. Is it for him to do micro-management in battle? Is that suitable? Isn't his role supposed to be someone who pioneers the way while others clean up, or a stabilizing force responsible for the organization's survival?

Disguise, divine intervention, and dream entry are all ways to easily lose oneself. Author, are you trying to fight fire with fire?