Escaping the Hidden Mist, Starting by Stabbing My Teacher in the Back

I realize that you don't have a large and useful psychic beast. Masashi Kishimoto's psychic beast Tadayoshimaru is a chameleon, and can transform into a city through invisibility. If you have this at the beginning, you won't be afraid of being caught up. I didn't get the Kirigakure ninja sword Samega, except for the beheading sword, at least there was one.

The more I read, the more I feel that it was written by AI. I myself have recently started to use AI to write novels, and the style seems to be basically the same

The reason is okay, but not sufficient. It is best to add a plan for the future to explain the protagonist's behavior. Otherwise, just saying "good or bad" without being thorough will only make people quit.

It's 200 chapters, and I'm still banging my head here and there. There are so many buffs and the fighting is not exciting. How can I put it? The writing is okay, but it's too boring.

When did you stop writing about Danzo? Kick me. I feel like I went astray. I was so tired of writing about Konoha.

The subject of Naruto is originally a hot-blooded manga. At the beginning, it was because the protagonist was not from Konoha anymore and had some interest. But judging from the current situation, the plot has been very dull. There is no climax or trough in the advancement of the plot. It feels like it is just a chapter in one sentence, and the protagonist keeps researching and researching. He has superimposed a lot of abilities and is just doing experiments? It feels like it's too focused on experimentation. Hot-blooded comics should be hot-blooded, not bland like this.

It's time to run through the plot, there's been too much chatter. You said the protagonist has developed power, but you haven't written out what benefits those things bring to the protagonist, or you have to do everything yourself. You just run around with a girl all day long. You said he has developed his strength, so he sparred with the immature Nagato. The two of them haven't done anything serious yet and have no strong performance. The writing is gentle. In the past, I could still see that I had read the latest chapters at eighty or ninety after raising it for a day or two. Now, after two days, I have read the latest chapter at sixteenth or seventeenth. It can be seen that the follow-up reading is also very bleak.

The overall plot is okay, but the optimization ability of the protagonist is too vague and conceptual. Almost everything comes to mind. As a result, the process of improving the ability of the master bedroom corner was foggy and chaotic. .

I have read dozens of chapters so far. The author's writing is concise, not cumbersome, the plot is smooth, and the organization is clear. The character's ability has reached the sky in an exaggerated way without improving. The ability concept is very thoughtful and worth looking forward to. One last thing, don't go back to Konoha like other articles and write exclusively about Konoha's intrigues. That has no future and will be ruined by other people. You can try to look at the entire ninja world and start provocations everywhere.

The writing is okay, but a little short. I want to ask if there are female protagonists. How many are there? I hope the plot is not about falling in love in one chapter.