Simultaneous Transmigration: Sharing Our Essence, Conquering the Heavens

What a great idea. In theory, ghosts can really appear in the pirate world, and devil fruits specially designed for ghosts can exist in theory. It can be used as a springboard to create a new pirate version of the Valley of the Gods incident. Since One Piece updated the Valley of Gods incident, no one has done it like you until now. There is a future. Catch Robin, fake history, and take advantage of the world government. I have seen similar ideas in the early years, but unfortunately it is not as good as yours. There are few updates at the moment, so keep up the good work!

It looks strange, a bit messy, and some parts don't read very smoothly. It feels like it was written in AI.

I have seen that writing about one person will not bring good results. He belongs to the standard cesspool world. The plot itself is nothing, the main line is unclear, and the strength positioning is still vague. The Eight Magic Skills are even more poisonous. One person's world is astonishing, but the performance is that a group of people learn it and are hunted down like dogs. In other worlds, if you follow the settings, you will forcefully promote someone. If you don't follow the settings, you will be disgusted by the readers attracted by one person.

The one with the highest combat power in the pirate world right now is Loki. He is a giant, proficient in three-color domineering, and his fruit power is the black dragon Nidhogg, which can transform into a 40,000-meter dragon. Kaido is like a younger brother in front of him, and he destroys the navy headquarters. The whole body is covered with domineering energy, Written by the author himself, how strong are you originally, and then the fruit is an amplifier, it should be a percentage bonus, there are only useless fruit ability users, there is no fw fruit The pirate fruit is purely a great magical power plus a special physique. Author of Bao Chaobiao

The writing of Pirates is quite innovative, at least now I know what the author is going to write after the first glance of other fics.

Defense, defense in various senses

There are problems with the plot at the beginning. It is forced to suffer and the hatred is deep. In One Piece, it has no strength and runs around the world.

Just find a class as soon as you can answer the question

After roughly reading it, the evaluation is that the author has his own ideas, and many plots are counter-conventions. It's a pity that I have an idea but my writing skills are a bit poor. I feel that the plot development has no beginning and no end, with only empty ideas and no ability to write well.

The author should improve himself. The writing style is too bad, the writing is too messy, and the chapters are too complicated. The idea is good, but the writing style is so good that it spoils it.