Simultaneous Transmigration: Sharing Our Essence, Conquering the Heavens
同时穿越：共享本质，横推诸天
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- Ongoing
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- 306k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6mo ago
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That's quite an idea! In theory, it's possible for vengeful ghosts to appear in the One Piece world, and Devil Fruits specifically for feeding ghosts could theoretically exist. You could even create a new One Piece version of the God Valley Incident as a springboard. Your imagination is truly remarkable. Since the God Valley incident in One Piece, no one has done anything like what you've done.
It's strange, it's a mess.
It looks strange, a bit messy, and some parts don't read smoothly. It feels like it was written with AI.
Don't write about just one person.
I've seen that any story set in a fantasy world featuring only one character never ends well; it's a classic example of a cesspool. The plot itself is empty, the main storyline is unclear, and the character's power level is vague. The Eight Extraordinary Techniques are a major flaw; in one world, they're touted as invincible, but in reality, a group of people who learned them were chased and…
The strongest fighter in the One Piece world right now is Loki. He's a giant, proficient in all three types of Haki, and his Devil Fruit power is Nidhogg the Black Dragon, allowing him to transform into a 40,000-meter-long dragon. Kaido is nothing compared to him; he could easily destroy the Marine Headquarters with a single sit. His entire body is covered in Haki... The author wrote this himself.
The One Piece fanfiction is quite original; at least now, when I read other fanfiction, I can tell what the author is going to write at first glance.
Defense, defense in all senses
The concept is interesting, but some of the statements don't make logical sense.
The opening plot is problematic, forcing a tragic and vengeful atmosphere, and in One Piece, someone with no strength is running around the world aimlessly.
A bunch of dissertations to defend, quickly find a class to attend.
I skimmed through it, and the reviews say the author has many original ideas, with many plot points subverting expectations. It's a pity that while the ideas are there, the writing is lacking; the plot feels disjointed and disjointed, full of ideas but lacking the ability to execute them well.
The author needs to improve; the writing is terrible, the flow is disorganized, and the chapters are too disjointed. The idea is good, but the excellent writing ruins it.