
Time and Space Island
超时空海岛
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 109k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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25Fans
50Chapters
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One thing to say, I think Ye Huo's strength is writing about girls, especially girls in Red Mansions.
That's not to say that you can't challenge your weaknesses, but I think it's undesirable to completely throw away your strengths for the sake of your weaknesses. There are some people in the comment area who are so obsessed with Red Mansion. Let's first find out that among Yehuo's books, Red Mansion's achievements account for a very large proportion. I have accumulated a group of Red Mansion fans. Without waiting for consolidation, I will turn around and ask the author to write something else. To be honest, I advocate writing about other types of people. Will you pay if Yehuo writes it? I ordered two books, and neither one of them is about karma. Now, after reading these few books, Yehuo is not able to write authors with attractive plots. The characteristic of Yehuo is that girls can write well and make readers happy. To put it inappropriately, I am just a vulgar person, I just want to see a harem in the Red Mansion. For this reason, even if the plot is clichéd or unrealistic, as long as the girl writes it well, I don't care. But if you want to put aside the girl in the red mansion and write a good plot, then I am definitely very picky. If there are bugs in the plot, it won't work. If the plot is cliché, it won't work. If I want to pay for the plot, it must be really well written. I don't know how many people think this way, but I think it depends on your grades. Ye Huo has written so many books. You should have a strong balance in your mind whether your writing style will give you good grades or not.
I saw a new book opening a few days ago, but I wasn't interested in reading the introduction (The Red Mansion is still interesting) It's better to continue writing about The Red Mansion, as long as you don't do anything about cultivating the immortal Red Mansion (The Red Mansion of cultivating immortality is a bad thing, I can't grasp it) The Red Mansion is all about garden drama!
A spaceship that far surpasses Earth's technology costs 2 billion yuan. Although it is a spaceship that cannot be activated, an aircraft carrier costs more than this. Author, are you insulting the reader's intelligence? Not to mention that this is not what supporting good people does. The protagonist wants to build an environment on an island that can accommodate hundreds of thousands of people. Is 2 billion yuan enough? It is simply not enough to renovate the living environment of an island with hundreds of thousands of people. 2 Billion yuan is not enough, let alone the daily necessities and food needed by hundreds of thousands of people.
You've written quite well on this subject matter, polish it well and don't let it fall apart again!
Double portal, both worlds are suitable for you. Don't waste your time. Isn't the writing about the time and space very good, especially the part about the Red Mansion. Be obedient. The next book will be a double portal. Ming Dynasty, Zhang Yan, Ba Yan, Kun Xing, Tian Guifei 😁😁😁
Is it a familiar track or an old problem? The pace of certain worlds should not be too fast.
Finally, I no longer cling to Dream of Red Mansions. To be honest, the genre of Dream of Red Mansions is really difficult to write. It would be better to write about a theme like the original book Blind Date in Time and Space.
Stop mentioning supporting actors endlessly
Leng Zixing in the last book, that kind of unnatural situation, I mentioned it endlessly, don't let it happen again
Wouldn't it be better to call it "Time and Space Island"?
I like your time and space series, write it well, keep up the good work
The island has never changed. It was still the same as it was then. It feels like the protagonist has done nothing, and yet it feels like he has done something.
By the way, does anyone know where the author's latest book is? I quite like his emotional scenes, they are well written.
You didn't know you were writing another book until you cut it! 😥😥😥
There has been a similar theme before, but for some reason it was unfinished. Come on, author! Carefully clarify the outline of the topic!
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The value system is too much. It is equivalent to building a country. When New China was founded, the local tyrants were divided into fields. Did any farmers pay wages? Even in modern society, there are only subsidies and no wages? Do you need to provide food, clothing, housing and transportation in the early stage? Is there any charge?
You have a new book and you don't even promote it? Don't even know
The author stops writing books? Almost half a year
Why didn't you say you were going to open a new book?
It is really not possible to write about Korean entertainment. There are many Korean entertainment novels about second- and third-generation girl groups, and they are very old and well-documented. Furthermore, the second and third generations of fans are no longer active, and there are no fans to attack if they write too much.
Yo, you actually cut it?
Then don't blame me for laughing at you. I have long told you to continue writing the original Red Mansion. If you cut out the Red Mansion and write a new book that is not as good as the original Red Mansion, then don't blame me for laughing at you. You asked for it!
There is no promotion for a new book. The Western fantasy world of time-travel blind dates and the girl in the red mansion are both well written. My evaluation is not to take advantage of the science fiction worldview. You can grasp both Western fantasy and ancient times. The science fiction worldview is just a mess.
Is there a new book out? Has the author changed his account again?
Don't write reality, you can install a set spaceship to directly block the island.
Is there a new Tomato book out? What's it called?