After the Rebellion Was Successful, We Learned That This Place Was the Red Mansion

Damn it, I understand that the Jia family and the garden drama in Red Mansions are relatively common, but you are rebelling now and are only one step away from taking over Shenjing. Are you afraid that there will be no plot to write by then? Why don't you start the story when the rebellion is about to succeed? You're almost going to be the emperor. Once you get into the palace, nothing is yours. You have to grind and moan. It doesn't fit the character of a rebel hero at all. You can't retreat even after you hit the city gate. The big-faced treasures of the Jia family are waiting for the execution of those who deserve to be executed. How many of the twelve hairpins can be collected (if not, it's OK to be executed if they can't be collected). If they are going to become emperors, are they afraid of not having a woman? They have no qualifications to decide whether the Jia family can live or not. They have to forcefully drag it out. It's really speechless😓

I finished watching the ending at 11 p. M., Feeling uncontrollably sad. I got up at 1 p. M. And drank a glass of strong wine. I fell asleep in a deep sleep. At 3 p. M., I sweated out the wine, went to the living room and sat there, and worked hard until 7 p. M. I read this book in one sitting, immersed in the daily life of the garden, and enjoying the most perfect love story that I have read online for more than 20 years (the author is not that great, this is due to Lin Daiyu's own character design as the first heroine of the four classics, and her emotional experience with Jia Baoyu's childhood sweetheart made their love more perfect and clearer than Baoqin and the others. Of course The author is also credited with making this relationship possible due to the hero's less generous spirit and preference for Daiyu) As a result, the wonderful thing is that the cycle is like a garden play in life, and it is also the garden play that I can't get out of. The last two chapters have changed for 20 years, making the short half a year described in the whole book become unreal. In the illusion of the final reunion, I can't imagine how to live. What made me relate to it was that without Lin Daiyu's three days of not eating or drinking and the following ten years of human life, would the orioles and Yanyan around me be happy for a moment? I drank a cup of coffee in the morning and told my wife, who I have loved for many years, that I didn't sleep all night after reading a book with a bad ending. She hugged me and comforted me and told me I was cute. After this weekend, my wife will heal my sorrow for this night. How big the impact of the pain caused by the protagonist for more than ten years will be on him. Finally, thank you to the author. It's a pity that Baoqin could have had a few more chapters, but goodbye.

It's a bit too much for Lin. . . In fact, I feel like it doesn't matter if I don't accept it.

It's also good to study things to gain knowledge

Hurry up the water, write too slowly, the water is too slow

It feels like you are forcibly involved with the Jia family. What is it that is not yours?

I came from Daily Guide, and the writing is okay. The protagonist's status is raised too high at the beginning of this book, and there is nothing to write about. It also raises the status of Jin Chai and others too high. To be honest, they are just slaves and maidservants, and they regard themselves as princesses. I feel that this is also in the same vein as Red Mansions. However, there are still few chapters. I look forward to writing better.

I don't understand why the author kept a large group of concubines from the previous dynasty in the palace? They are still nameless and have too much bad taste.

Don't talk about worrying about the gods, and then treat Jia's family well. You have become the emperor, and you have killed so many people, and you are still afraid of the gods.

This means that if a Red Mansions fan were writing a historical novel, I would have to criticize him! ! ! ! The biggest contradiction or poisonous point of this book is that the tone is too high! ! At first, I thought that the arrival of Liu Bang and Zhu Yuanzhang was a blessing. After all, they conquered the world from a young boy, and the protagonist was only twenty-four years old. The ranking of historical emperors was already in the top ten in history from the moment they captured Beijing! After that, as soon as I entered Beijing, I went crazy to visit the concubines of the former dynasty. It was okay once or twice, but I felt it was inappropriate to hold it for a long time. The princess was okay, and the queen was like this. I saw this, wasn't she a king? Suddenly, I felt that the emperor's power dropped wildly, and his historical ranking dropped to around twenty in my mind! Let's go back to the plot with Jin Chai in the Red Mansion, and being with Li Wan, Wang Xifeng, Yuanchun, and Qin Keqing also looks like Prime Minister Cao! This ranks thirty again! [In my mind, Prime Minister Cao is not as good as King Gao in terms of charisma and power as an emperor. Of course, he is just ranking the emperor. Prime Minister Cao is still better than King Gao in terms of ability! ] Then he had ambiguities and flirtations with Bao Dai, Xiang Yun, and San Chun. After all, this is a good thing for fellow Red Mansions. That emperor didn't just wake up to hold the power of the world and lie drunk in the lap of a beautiful woman. This is just like Zhu Jianshen and Shunzhi! ! ! In the end, even the maid was wildly flirting with him, and the palace maid and eunuch made a mistake and taught the maid with a pleasant look, haha, this is Jia Baoyu! ! ! Your emperor has no character at all. He conquered the world in his twenties at the beginning. He is not crazy at all. He is a good gentleman to everyone. He is not decisive at all towards his subordinates. This kind of character is really not worthy of being the founding emperor. It is difficult to be a general! ! ! Of course, after all, everyone in the Red Mansion community admires and dislikes Jia Baoyu. This idea of ​​becoming the founding emperor at the beginning is unbeatable from the perspective of gathering all the gold hairpins. Those who started the Jia family should really not mess with it. The author's writing style is also good. The monthly pass is given to you, but it's a little watery, and the update is too slow! ! !

Oh, please don't do those things that abolish modern ideas or something. I'm really convinced.

Confess Lin Daiyu, castrate Jia Baoyu, and serve the concubine 😜

5 Days of siege, 30 chapters captured

After reading a few chapters, the author's writing is indeed good, but to be honest, the topic selection is really poor. At first glance, I don't know how to proceed. How to write a rebellion in the Red Mansion and become the emperor? How to write the heroine? How to write the garden as a harem? Which emperor's harem is full of women who have been confiscated from their homes... And more than half of them are second-hand, how can they be concubines? How to become a queen? The girls in the Jia family are all wives and daughters of officials from the previous dynasty. Lin Daiyu and Xue Baochai have no fathers. Even if Lin Ruhai is not dead and surrenders to the protagonist, can the daughter of a surrendered minister be made queen? There is a complete mismatch in status. And if the Twelve Beauties really become a harem, the layout is too small and illogical at all. Will we be able to write about the governance of the country in the future? But if you add other girls, wouldn't the theme of Red Mansion be in vain? In the future, all the twelve hairpins will become strangers Is it possible that you want to ascend to the fairy world? Write the Twelve Hairpins as immortals? That's even weirder, a second-hand fairy who refines her heart in the world of mortals? Even more uncomfortable. So I really don't know what the author will write in the future, and it feels contradictory no matter how I write.

There is no need for the author to write about any golden hairpin. Any maid is more beautiful than the maids in the entire palace, which is a bit inconsistent. You can use the mentality of collecting stamps, possessiveness, and having a taste after learning the identity to handle the plot.

From now on, other people will have reasons to raise armies. The queen of the previous dynasty, look at how many people have done this to the queen of the previous dynasty throughout the ages. Does this protagonist think that she has military power?

Red Mansions is about writing a garden play, but now the protagonist is the emperor who moved the garden to the harem. If you want to look at the hard work of writing, there are at least 20 books on the monthly list of 30. No matter how good the author is, can he still write something good? And if we really want to write about efforts to govern, we should start from the rebellion ten years ago. Now that the rebellion is successful, it shows that the focus is not there at all.

Have you ever been an emperor? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Too slow. Without the writing power of Grand View Garden Notes, women from the previous dynasty should write less. The queen, Yuanchun, the concubine and the singer-song princess took turns talking and sleeping, which ruined the progress of the Red Mansion. . What are you doing if you delay the meeting?

Probably the golden finger is not good enough. I review memorials every day until the second watch. I don't have much daily life. The few people I sleep with are second-hand. The emperor's job is too boring, not as good as a modern charterer.

It's too bad. I will definitely make up my mind not to watch it tomorrow.

After reading part of it, I basically understand why this book opened up so well and left it so low. The starting point set by the protagonist is too high. The rebel emperor has fought hard to conquer the country. Even if the author mentions systematic assistance, even if the protagonist is not a dragon or a phoenix in the hearts of readers, he must at least be a prominent figure in the world. But this book takes Red Mansions as its core, and the framework is written around the Dream of Red Mansions. It is doomed that it is impossible to tell a macro narrative, and it is biased towards the small-minded Jiji Waiwai. The author wants to preserve the completely different personalities of those women. They will inevitably have emotions, anger, sorrow, and petty tempers, and intrigues and petty thoughts. It is clear that his house was confiscated, and his status is inferior to that of ordinary people. In front of the emperor, he asks to take back the order? Reasoning with Emperor Taizu who fought all the way? There is also an actress named Ling Guan. I don't know how she dared to tell the emperor that she would rather serve other people than the emperor. There is a sense of absurdity that is not afraid of being cut into pieces with a thousand knives and killing everyone. To put it bluntly, Miss and Mrs. Dream of Red Mansions are just hypocritical and moaning after eating too much. If the house was confiscated early and was thrown into the land of romance, otherwise I would still have to accompany others with laughter and sex, and there would be nothing wrong with me. The protagonist's identity as emperor is very different from his actual performance, and can even be said to be a disconnection phenomenon. This has caused many readers to become increasingly frustrated and simply abandon the book silently. So the results are getting worse and worse. The above are all my personal opinions. I think this book has flaws and may not be accurate. There are a thousand kinds of Hamlet for a thousand people. In addition, since this book has been written so much, those who remain must be accustomed to the author's style and rhythm. The author should not change his outline and rhythm rashly, otherwise there will be no readers at all. In addition, since the author has the idea of ​​​​opening a new book, I would like to mention my personal thoughts. If the next book also writes about Red Mansions, the status of the protagonist can be just higher than the people in the Jia family, but not as high as the sky. The protagonist can find an excuse to intervene in Jia's house, while flirting with the girls, and the process of solving problems will be heart-warming and profitable. In addition, some thunderbolt methods can be used to execute male partners with evil intentions to suppress Jia Baoyu. In addition, the court tried its best to go further and cooperate. They are all good and refreshing.

I think no matter how good the male protagonist is, he must show some of the majesty of an emperor. For ancient emperors, a single word could make their lives worse than death. There is no need to treat Daiyu like a warm man. In addition, why not develop technology?

It would be nice to stop being a monk and become a eunuch. It's just a matter of becoming a eunuch, and it's just a matter of getting to know the Grand View Garden. It's just a matter of getting back to the Grand View Garden. You can just break in and watch the emperor chatting with the Twelve Golden Crosses. Even the eunuchs didn't stop him, it was so stupid.

The Emperor's start was eye-catching. He abandoned the useless socializing in the garden drama and directly interfered with the Red Mansion in his most noble capacity. It was so cool. And if the previous content is only above average, the two chapters in which Daiyu returns to heaven in tears after more than 200 chapters, personally feel that it is directly apotheosis, and the special identity of Lin Daiyu's character and the sense of fate of the Red Mansion are vividly described. It was also from this moment that the emperor changed his destiny against heaven, Lin Daiyu's past life was over, and the plot of happy enemies with the emperor officially began, which made people unable to stop. By the way, I really don't understand the reward mechanism. I originally wanted to give it to Lin Daiyu, but I can't reward it on my mobile phone, and I can't select a character on my computer, haha.

A lantern riddle satirized Ma Dajiao, which directly killed all the tourists watching the lanterns during the Lantern Festival, and no one dared to fart. How dare someone talk about pig's feet behind your back? Are the Nine Clans wholesalers?

The overall quality is acceptable, especially the Daiyu line, which has both ups and downs, and the whole process of emotional changes is quite in place. The main plot is just pushed forward one by one. However, I feel that due to the length and the number of people, only Daiyu's emotional line is relatively complete, and the others are superficial. It is a bit of a pity. One or two more characters can be described in more words. The later stage was a bit anticlimactic, and I felt that the author had no enthusiasm and patience anymore, so I finished it in a hurry, and the last few comments felt a bit perfunctory. I didn't write anything about the warm daily life after marriage. I could write about a tour to the South, a trip to Xiyuan, and having children. When I was watching the chat with Bao Qin, I thought that there would be a daily routine of going overseas in the future, but unfortunately there was no such thing. In addition, inserting Baoyu from time to time in the later period is a bit jarring. The abuse of Baoyu should be stopped when Daiyu has finished crying. The purpose of torturing Baoyu earlier was to cut off the former alliance between wood and stone, and also to vent his anger, which was a bit more satisfying. It was completely unnecessary to keep mentioning it later. I was having a love affair with my sisters, so I had to suddenly get involved with Baoyu. It was as if I was having a good meal when suddenly there was a loud fart sound, which was very disappointing. Looking at the voting stamp sent by the author, I feel that he did not understand the biggest selling point of this book. The biggest attraction of this book is the pure garden drama, nothing else. What is interesting is the daily life of sticking with the sisters, not the abuse of Baoyu. I really don't understand the author's statement that if Baoyu is not allowed to be abused, there will be nothing to write about. Could it be that the main plot is Baoyu's abuse? Baoyu can advance the plot because Sister Lin has not given up on him yet. If he wants to completely occupy Sister Lin's heart, Baoyu has to be mentioned. Later, Sister Lin even let go of him, but it felt like the author hadn't let go yet. You leave it outside and torture it as you like. If you insist on being dragged to your side and tortured, if you want to become a monk, then become a monk. If you want to be a eunuch, then be a eunuch. Why did the eunuch drag him back to the garden after he was done with it? Really, no one cares about Baoyu anymore, and the author still wants to talk about all kinds of details. This kind of abuse of Baoyu doesn't feel good, it can only create poison. Also, please recommend, are there any other novels that focus on daily descriptions of the harem?

It is regarded as a "characteristic" masterpiece of Red Mansions. Its shortcomings are obvious, but its advantages are also outstanding. In an online article, from the perspective of the Red Mansion flavor, it can be rated as 8 points, but from the overall level of the novel, it can only be rated as 5 points. The main plot of this book is that the protagonist is a rebel leader with an invincible system. He relies on the system to be invincible in military and political affairs. In the first chapter, he has already led an army to surround the capital, preparing to force the emperor to leave the city and surrender. Then at this moment, the protagonist learned through the city's informant that there were Rongguo Mansion, Ningguo Mansion, twelve golden hairpins, and many figures in the Red Mansions in the city. The protagonist thinks that he has fought in the world for so long, so he should enjoy it. He gathers in the Red Mansion and registers thirty-six hairpins. It can be seen that it is a typical harem cool article. There is basically no political line or conspiracy line. The protagonist is invincible from the beginning. It depends on how the protagonist uses power and force to make the girls in the Red Mansion slowly be tempted to sacrifice themselves. Basically the main plot is that the protagonist uses both soft and hard tactics to make Daiyu, Xiangyun, Baoqin, etc. Gradually fall in love with the protagonist. This author's writing style is not bad, and the emotional scenes are relatively delicate. He is very familiar with the original work of Red Mansions, and some of the scenes in Red Mansions are okay. However, it has a few points that some people may find objectionable. One is that the protagonist is a bit cold-blooded and ends up spending a lot of money to win over Aunt Xue. Moreover, the protagonist is very curious and weird. In the end, there is a scene where Sichun, Baochai, Baoqin, Daiyu Xiangyun and others sleep together with Aunt Xue. This contrasts too strongly with the protagonist's affectionate attitude in front of Daiyu. Daiyu doesn't care, and the protagonist is also happy with it, which seems very disconnected. The second is that the protagonist excessively suppresses Jia Baoyu. Later, it is often written that the protagonist is chatting and flirting with Jin Chai. Baoyu will inexplicably break through the blockade and appear in front of the protagonist. Watching the protagonist flirt with Jin Chai, Jin Chai will also take the initiative to please the protagonist, which disgusts Jia Baoyu. I remember there was a scene where Daiyu claimed to be my concubine in front of the protagonist, and then rolled her eyes at Baoyu. The more complex character core of the Jinchai woman was not written. Watching the relationship between Jin Chai and the protagonist in the middle and later stages is basically like reading a pornographic novel. This seems very dramatic. I am very familiar with Red Mansions. I can only say that in the later period of the book, in order to recruit girls, the basic character logic was ignored. Another strange point is that in order to be close to the original work, the author also deliberately added mythical characters such as the Police Fairy. He also wrote that the Police Fairy possessed one of the protagonist's original concubines, and finally became the first queen because of her special status. Finally, Daiyu said that she had run out of tears and her mission in the world was completed, so she returned to the illusion of Taixu and separated from the protagonist in the Middle Way. In short, this book is not like a male channel's Red Mansion novel, but more like a strange mixture of the Qing Dynasty Red Mansion continuation structure + a female channel's overbearing president, marriage first, love later, romance + palace battle essay + stallion essay. But why I can still read it is mainly because the author knows Red Mansions better. At least in terms of form and language, it is still the same. He did not write Daiyu as a contemporary female middle school student or a spiritual girl. Some plots also have the author's interpretation of Red Mansions. This book is suitable for brainless readers who like stallions, and it is also suitable for old readers who don't care about the original Red Mansions novel. But if you pursue character logic and character arc, it is not suitable to watch.

I really nailed the role of concubine at the beginning, but I don't know why some of it was passed over later. Especially Wang Xifeng, who had been working on it for a long time before, but later wrote too fast.

The biggest failure of this book is that it did not kill all the nobles and nobles in the Duke's palace, including Lin Daiyu, Wang Xifeng and so on. They should have raised the butcher's knife and left no one behind.