Become a True Immortal Starting from Lingshi Loan

When writing fan fiction, write it well. Don't always think about turning into a fantasy fairy tale and wait for the punishment to be revealed.

The last two books were both Naruto fanfics, so I ran out of inspiration. I really, really like Naruto, so I'll take a break and write about Naruto later. I hope all book friends will like the story of Lingshi Loan. Please read it, recommend it, and collect it. New books are not easy to come by. Thank you all book friends~

After seeing Chapter 44 (currently the latest), I personally feel that the story written in the early stage is okay, it is interesting and rhythmic, please work hard. It's just that it's a little too slow, and I'm just about to break through the first level to the second level of Qi training; I also don't understand the significance of writing about spiritual stone upgrades in the early stage and being discovered by others, and the conflict seems to have faded later.

Having read the previous book, I was a little resistant to the author's change of style, but after reading it I felt pretty good.

The recent traffic decline in Qidian. Com is too serious. Why are so few people reading such a good book? And not just this one, most of them are read by few people.

Are you planning to write some achievements before promoting them in old books?

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Collect first, raise a hand, raise 20 chapters first

Come on, I like authors who step out of their comfort zone

The lifespan of the foundation-building realm is one hundred and fifty years. Are you a great monk who can take one step ten meters and one hundred meters ten seconds?

It's well written, but the strength is suppressed too hard. I only have two levels of Qi training in Chapter 80.

I hope the author's next book won't make me tired of academic writing.

If you want to write about cultivating immortals, why don't you write a fanfic for mortals 🙂. Goldfinger makes a draw for Naruto. You can use the blood chakra at the beginning to beat the primitive people and link up with Naruto. You should be better at it. If you really want to write and take advantage of the popular talent cultivating immortality right now, you can create a world by yourself. Compare Naruto gouging out his eyes to an honest person. In the world of Naruto, it would be too merciful to gouge out his eyes and still be sneaky.

I've given you ten monthly passes this month. Please write well and come on 😡

Keep writing fanfics, first consolidate your fans and then change the subject matter!

The pace is too slow, please pay attention in the next book.

Alas, this book is pretty good overall. But the early stage was not impressive enough. The title of the novel is not very attractive either. If you want to be immersed in reading, it still takes a certain amount of time. It was difficult to get involved in the early stages. I didn't have the feeling of being hooked after just one or two chapters in the previous Naruto book.

Cut out the new book as soon as possible. Don't waste any more time if it's already on the market. This is almost 200,000 words long and it hasn't been published yet. Don't you want it? It must be because I didn't have enough money to read 100, so I could only force 300,000 words to be put on the shelves, right? Give up the fantasy. Don't think that it will get better after it is released, there is no hope. The right thing to do is to open a new book quickly. The recommendation mechanism of Qidian is really messed up now, and there is no guarantee at all for old authors to open new books.

The new book has just started, shouldn't it be updated a few more times, please vote and collect it?