New Century Two-Dimensional Warrior

Your protagonist should have known from the beginning that this was a novel.

It's a bit off-topic, the plot is slow, and it's almost boring.

First of all, the title and introduction given by the author are fine. It was only after I saw these two things that I decided to read the first three chapters. The following is my personal opinion: 1. It is too descriptive for the sake of rationality. The first three chapters are all about why and how to do what to do. 2. I can't tell who is the main character. Is the protagonist mainly producing the work and then surprising the crowd and reaching the emotional climax of the readers? Or is it about the protagonist and the friends' efforts during the production process? If I write about both, I felt that Aunt Wang's foot bindings were smelly and long when I saw Chapter 5. 3. It doesn't matter how many things are there, the key is to be able to connect the past and the next. I hope that the author's works will get better and better. I hope that the author with a good starting point will have many good works and not give up due to temporary poor data.

It is the first time for an old bookworm to write a book, and he cannot grasp many aspects, so he admits to scolding. But on a heart-to-heart basis, can you give me some advice after scolding me? Don't be all emotional output? It is not a traditional virtue to let people die with their eyes open. Let's talk about this book first. In fact, like some newbies, it was written to practice writing, and to see if I have the ability to write out my previous imagination... So the current main line is to export cross-border works in animation and game music. At the same time, I also have a selfish intention to share with you some of my favorite works, such as the Cantonese version of The Widow's Ditty. But considering that there is a ceiling to the abilities of plot characters, I will only choose some classic or representative works for transport. PS: I was severely injured and stabbed in the back by Bao X Meng, which I never expected. I have grown up playing the fantasy beast Palu since I was a child ( Let's talk about the shortcomings mentioned by book friends. The most mentioned The reason is that the pace is slow... There are two reasons for this. One is external. The editor originally wanted to see if the shock flow would be interesting, so I was a little confused when it came to the pace. I think the plot is too slow... Those who have followed the latest book may also find that the speed is a bit faster at the end, but I feel that the plot is a bit too slow. This is a mess. The other thing is internal. The main reason is that I really don't have much experience in writing online articles. Although I have asked my master friends for advice on plot rhythm... But anyone who has written a book knows that reading and writing are really two different things. I can only learn through code words A few big brothers said that my plot was off-kilter, and I agree with this, because this book is a passionate start, with only a general direction, and no particularly detailed outline. In addition, I am a part-time codewriter, so sometimes I just write wherever I think... This I will slowly adjust, further refine the outline, and try my best to suppress the random thoughts. If I can't suppress it, then I will try my best. I will surrender first. Don't they say that surrendering will result in half the loss? By the way, brother. My brother said this is a romance, why do you think you are praising me? I still thought it was an old two-dimensional daily reflection article. I don't remember anything else, so I will correct it one by one. As a matter of fact. Screwdriver's first signing book, Suddenly Eunuch will definitely not do it. Even if the story cannot continue to develop, I will give it a cleanup before choosing to end it... That's all, I wish you all a happy New Year, and we will make progress together in the new year~

I love this cover! Do you have the original picture? Can I exchange a monthly pass?

It's normal, but the bad part may be that it's too scattered, from animation to music, and then I started to engage in self-media, and then the pace is really slow, and it's too scattered, and the fun is also scattered. I can suppress the plot, but there must be positive feedback. From 59 to today's update, it is actually relatively smooth in my personal feeling, but from the plan of Edgewalker and then When it comes to debuting and posting acceptance notices, it's very distracting and I don't understand what the main point is about. After all, the purpose of debuting is to raise funds for fringe walkers. In the end, the funds are not important, and then it has nothing to do with the game. It just engages in social arguments and public opinion, and then turns back to the game very abruptly. The above is purely a personal interpretation. If I feel offended, I apologize here 🙂

I don't know what's good about it. It reads smoothly and the plot is quite interesting. But would it be better if the plot had more details? It feels like every scene ends abruptly. Of course, my reading habits are very poor and I am in a hurry. I only read 1 page and 2 times. I looked at the comment section and saw that there are so many negative reviews?

Actually, it's not bad. I read 61 chapters in one go, which is normal.

I think it's pretty good. I've found the author's radio. I opened the book yesterday and added it to my favorites. I read it in one sitting at noon today. Except for the lack of content, I think it's pretty good.

I borrowed Guibao to promote a book, "Happiness God", also known as "I feel happy and I can make money continuously". You can get a reward of 5,000 for making a short video and laughing, 8,000 for winning a game, and 10,000 for admiring a beautiful woman... On the left, he hugs his cute and cute little apprentice, and on his right, he hugs a female Chinese medicine doctor who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. From then on, Li Qi's wonderful life has quietly arrived! [Sorry for disturbing you, please contact me to delete]

What's Doraemon? It's so fucked up.