
There Is No Immortal Here in the New World
新世界此间无仙
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- Ongoing
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- 39k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
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- Modern Cultivation
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- 7mo ago
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[Li Jingxin] Character Profile
"My sword is wielded for you, but my way is determined by myself." --- [Basic information] Name: Li Jingxin Title: Xuanbing Sword Master (Era of Cultivation) / Daughter of Heavenly Dao (Secret Identity) Age: · Current Timeline (2020): 7 years old · Cultivation Timeline (2177): 164 years old (appearance remains in the state of a 25-year-old monk) · Illusion Timeline: Aging together with Yan Mingfei to old age Spiritual Root: Tianshui Spiritual Root (mutated·ice attribute tendency) Realm: ·Appearance: Half-step Nascent Soul (Cultivation Timeline) · Reality: Early stage of Nascent Soul (hidden cultivation, suppressed by the mark of heaven) Physique: Tianyou Saint Body · Extraordinary affinity for ice attribute spiritual energy, the speed of practicing ice attribute skills is increased by 300% · Can independently absorb the yin attribute spiritual energy of heaven and earth, and the practice efficiency is doubled under the moonlight · Hidden talent: Extremely sensitive aura perception, able to detect energy flows that are difficult for monks of the same level to detect --- [Appearance characteristics] Face: · The face is a standard oval face, with soft lines but no edges. · The eyebrows are as slender as distant mountains, and they are dark without drawing · The eyes are a rare "ice glazed color", which is light gray and blue under normal conditions. When the mood fluctuates or the spiritual power is activated, it will shine like ice crystals · The bridge of the nose is straight, the lip color is light, and it looks cold and distant when not smiling Physique: · Height 168cm, excellent proportions, beautiful shoulders and neck lines · Due to years of practicing swordsmanship, the limbs are slender and powerful, the waist is slender but the core strength is extremely strong · Hands: The fingers are slender, with thin calluses on the fingertips and the tiger's mouth (characteristics of sword cultivators) Iconic features: 1. There is a very small light blue mole on the lobe of the left ear, like an ice crystal 2. There is a faint mark of heaven on the back of the neck. When the original power is used, complex silvery white lines will appear 3. The breath has a very light fragrance of winter plums, not powdery, but it is naturally emitted by the body Outfit style: · Cultivation Era: Wearing a dark blue combat uniform specially made by the Dawn Society, with a temperature-adjustable spirit-pattern windbreaker, long hair usually tied high into a ponytail or a combat bun, and a long sword with an ice blue scabbard. · Real world/Fantasy era: Daily wear is simple and elegant, with a preference for off-white, light gray, and ice blue. She has a clean temperament and looks like a quiet girl at first glance, but in fact, her eyes hide the perseverance that has gone through vicissitudes of life. --- [Character Dimension] Surface personality (real world/daily performance): · Quiet and reserved: does not like noisy, can immerse in his own world for several hours when alone · Cold on the outside but hot on the inside: polite to strangers but keeping a distance, silently caring for people he recognizes (such as remembering friends' preferences, delivering medicine when sick) · Delicate and sensitive: can be keenly aware of the emotional changes of others, but usually chooses not to point it out and comforts with actions · Occasionally playful: only in front of highly trusted people (especially Yan Mingfei) will show the mood of a little daughter, can play pranks, be shy, and can act like a baby Deep personality (age of cultivation/crisis): · Strong principle: adhere to the belief of "protecting the weak", and may ignore his own safety for this purpose · Tolerance and decisiveness: able to endure great pain for the sake of the overall situation or the people you love, and make cruel decisions without delay · Strategic mind: not reckless when fighting, good at observing and analyzing the strengths and weaknesses of the enemy and ourselves, and looking for the best opportunity · Gentle stubbornness: once you decide something is worth paying for, you will stick to it, even if you are the enemy of the world Character contradictions: 1. Desire for the ordinary vs. Carrying a mission: She yearns for a peaceful life in her heart, but her identity and sense of responsibility as a daughter of heaven prevent her from truly staying out of the situation 2. Rational restraint vs. Emotional intensity: She usually has excellent emotional control, but it is easy to lose control when it comes to things related to Yan Mingfei, and she loves deeply and absolutely 3. Self-sacrifice tendency: accustomed to putting others before oneself, it takes growth to learn to "cherish yourself and those you love" --- [Ability System] Core Skills: "Xuanbing Sword Technique" (Tiandao Inheritance·Fragmentary Scroll) · One Style·Xuanbing Armor: Instant defense technique, lasting up to 30 minutes, defense power increases with cultivation · The second type·Heart Sword: Can control 6-12 spiritual flying swords at the same time, accurately strike multiple targets · The third type·One Line Sky: A single killing move, consumes a lot of money, a full blow can hurt the enemy across levels · The fourth type·Zero Domain: The remaining skills are missing (hidden foreshadowing) Special abilities: 1. Heaven's favor (passive): · Luck is higher than that of ordinary people, and there is always a glimmer of hope in desperate situations · Extremely keen perception of malice and murderous intent · Cultivation bottlenecks are easier to break through than ordinary monks 2. Original luck (active, limited to three times): · A life-saving trump card given by the status of the daughter of heaven · Each consumption can resist a "certain death" attack and quickly repair the body · After three uses, the mark will disappear and you will lose the protection of heaven 3. Ice domain control: · Create a low-temperature field within a certain range to weaken fire and thunder enemies · Can condense the moisture in the air to create ice mist, which can be used to cover or trap enemies Combat style: · Positioning: medium and close range control and explosion · Advantages: Exquisite swordsmanship, fine control of spiritual power, good at seizing fleeting combat opportunities · Disadvantages: Average continuous combat ability, long cooldown time for ultimate moves, fear of pure Yang restraint magic weapons --- [Interpersonal Relationship Map] With Yan Mingfei: · Emotional essence: fetters at the soul level. Trust and love for Yan Mingfei are almost instinctive · Mode of getting along: · Normal times: a tacit understanding partner, one can understand each other's intentions with one look · Private: an occasional dependent (allowing oneself to be vulnerable in front of him) · In times of crisis: a comrade who can be entrusted with life and death, willing to cut off all obstacles in the way for him · Unspoken obsession: "No matter how many times I come back, I will choose to stand by your side." With You'er (the spirit of heaven): · A complex and subtle "half-body" relationship. You'er is the giver and supervisor of her mission, but her personality independence often conflicts with You'er's absolute rationality · In the later period, she developed emotions similar to "sisters", and You'er gradually understood human nature because of her Working with the Dawn Society: · A respected but slightly distant "deputy leader". Recognized as strong and reliable, but few people dare to joke with her · Zhou Shuying is one of the few female friends who can talk to her about her inner feelings With other forces: · In the eyes of allies, he is a trustworthy and strong person · In the eyes of enemies, he is the calm and terrifying "Xuanbing Shura" --- [Core plot anchor] Past·Hidden background: · She is not an ordinary mortal. Her family discovered an ancient ice-building cave in the early days of spiritual recovery, and the whole family was wiped out. However, she was taken away and trained by the mastermind (possibly related to the fairy court) because of her talent. She later escaped and kept her name anonymous · This memory was self-sealed, which is the key to breaking through the inner demons in the future Now·Character arc: 1. Growth line: From "fighting for him" to "fighting for common beliefs", and finally realizing that self-worth is not attached to anyone 2. Power line: completing "Xuanbing Sword Art", awakening the true potential of Tianyou Holy Body, and even briefly touching the "rules" level 3. Emotional line: learning to balance between love and mission, understanding that "living and dying together" is not as good as "living together to create the future" Future·Possibility: · Branch One (HE): Together with Yan Mingfei, we end the troubled times, establish a new order, and become a legend · Branch Two (Sacrifice): In order to protect the fire of hope in the final battle, we transform into an eternal ice monument to guard somewhere · Branch Three (Rebirth):? --- [Character Theme] Image: · Dongmei: Ling Han blooms alone, and the fragrance is secretly sent · Deep Lake: The surface is calm, but the undercurrent is surging in the depths · Never melts ice: clear and tough, seemingly fragile but actually lasts through the years Theme colors: ice blue, moon white, dark night blue Symbols: swords, snowflakes, old pocket watches (carrying memories of time) Line style: short Powerful, occasionally with poetic metaphors, but very few words when the emotion is strong (use actions instead) --- (She is not a vassal of the male protagonist, but one of the twin stars that illuminates the long night alongside him.)
Tiandao·You'erCharacter File
"I follow the rules and don't know the joys and sorrows. But because I saw you holding a torch and marching against the long night, I knew that a spark can boil the sea." --- [Basic information] · Name: You'er (the original name of the carrier is "Lin Xiaoyou") · Form: Appearance is a white-haired girl about 10 years old, translucent spirit-like body, which can be transformed into reality · True Essence: The manifested intelligent spirit body of the rules bred by the Heavenly Dao in this world in response to unknown crises · Birth Method: Using the remnant soul of a 10-year-old girl who died in despair in the "Edict of Raising Gu" in 2170 as a container, and born by integrating the original laws of the Heavenly Dao · Lifespan: There is no natural lifespan limit, but existence and the Heavenly Dao share losses and prosperity · Mission: Find and guide the "son/daughter of destiny" and help them grow to cope with future disasters of heaven --- [Core setting] 1. Traceability of birth · Omen of the Heavenly Dao Crisis: Around 2170, the Heavenly Dao in this world sensed for the first time that some kind of "devouring crisis" beyond the dimension of this world was approaching. The source of the crisis could not be directly observed and understood by the Heavenly Dao itself. It was only known that if it did not intervene, this world would be completely annihilated in the future. · Choice of birth: Heaven cannot directly interfere with the present world and must rely on a carrier. It happened that Xuantian Immortal Lord launched the "Edict to Raise Gu", and millions of living beings were filled with resentment. One of them was a 10-year-old orphan girl "Lin Xiaoyou" who died at the foot of Kunlun Mountain. The strong "despair for an unfair fate" and "desire for a warm glimmer" in her remaining soul resonated with the instincts of "survival" and "searching for hope" in the way of heaven, so she was chosen as the perfect container. · Fusion and rebirth: The origin of heaven injects the residual soul, reshapes the spiritual intelligence, inherits some memory fragments of the carrier (especially the name "You"), and forms a new consciousness - You'er. The memories and emotions of the original owner of the carrier become You'er's "initial data package" for understanding human nature. 2. Ability System · Heavenly Vision: Can directly observe the flow of luck, cause and effect lines, and legal context, and see through illusion and essence. But it is impossible to look directly at the "source of the crisis" itself. · Law control (limited): The power of some of the underlying laws of the world (such as time and space stability) can be called upon, but each use consumes the source. Excessive use will cause itself to dissipate or the local rules of the world to be disordered. · Transformation between virtuality and reality: It can be converted between spirit body and entity. It cannot be touched by ordinary people, but can be sensed by those with strong spiritual consciousness or children of luck. · Gift of luck: You can separate your own heavenly origin, condense it into a "mark of heaven" and give it to the chosen one, improving your luck and chance of enlightenment, and providing limited protection in times of crisis (such as the three strands of original luck obtained by Li Jingxin). · Information Perception: Can read the surface consciousness and strong emotions of creatures within a certain range, but has limited understanding of deep memories and complex thinking. 3. Evolution of personality and thinking · Early stage (rule logic period): Think completely from the perspective of heaven, regard all things as data, and choose Li Jingxin only because of his "Tianyou Holy Body and Tianshui Spiritual Root" as the optimal solution. It is impossible to understand why Li Jingxin rejected the "optimal path". · Mid-term (observation and learning period): Influenced by Li Jingxin's "emotion and responsibility" theory, he began to observe humans, especially Yan Mingfei, for a long time. By observing its struggle, protection, and sacrifice, an "emotional simulation module" was gradually generated in the database, but it still focused on rational analysis. · Later stage (consciousness awakening period): When Yan Mingfei fell into the illusion, she could have allowed her to perish according to the logic of heaven. However, the "desire" in the carrier's remnant soul and the "data" accumulated through long-term observation gave rise to a choice beyond the program - sacrificing oneself and using all the laws of time to send it to rebirth. This move marks You'er's transformation from a "tool of heaven" to a "being with self-awareness". · Current situation (rebirth timeline): Due to exhaustion of power, the fragments of his consciousness and the final source of heaven have been integrated into the depths of Yan Mingfei's soul and are in a state of slumber. Whether it can be revived and in what form it will reappear will become important foreshadowing for the future. 4. Relationship with key figures · For Li Jingxin: initially the "best choice", and later became his "mentor" in understanding human nature. He respected and finally recognized her choice, and was even infected by her belief in "believing in a better future". · To Yan Mingfei: From "the sub-optimal solution chosen by Li Jingxin" to the key observation object, and finally to the "only variable" on which all investments are made. She witnessed his persistence in two lives, and her final choice was not only her trust in Yan Mingfei, but also the inheritance of Li Jingxin's faith. · To the way of heaven itself: from an executor of absolute obedience to an "agent" with independent consciousness. Her choice (to save Yan Mingfei) may itself be part of Tiandao's crisis response plan, that is, "allowing the rules to create variables." --- [Character depth and plot role] 1. The narrator of the world and the embodiment of rules: through her, she reveals high-level settings such as the way of heaven, luck, and laws. 2. The junction of human nature and divinity: Her transformation process explores the philosophical propositions of "whether rules should have emotions" and "which is better between absolute rationality and emotional choice". 3. Key plot driver: Her decision directly leads to the male protagonist's rebirth, which is the core turning point of the story. 4. Foreshadowing of the future crisis: What is the "crisis of heaven" she sensed? The remnant soul of the carrier fused with her comes from the "Edict of Raising Gu". Does it imply that the crisis is related to the Xuantian Immortal Lord or the immortal cultivators from other worlds? Her sleep and awakening will be the key to uncovering a greater mystery. --- [Excerpts from classic lines] · "This battle will lead to nine deaths. If you go, you will die ten times. Run away, this is the best solution." (Initial stage, to Li Jingxin) · "Human beings always tend to avoid pain and embrace false warmth. This is very reasonable." (Mid stage, analysis of Yan Mingfei's fantasy) · "If I were you, I might really choose the first option... But you are not me." (Later, in fantasy) · "Li Jingxin said that she believes you can create a real and beautiful future. I believe in her belief. So, go for it." (Final choice) --- [Summary of design intent] You'er is a tragic character who transitions from "cold rules" to "warm existence". Her existence itself is a "seed full of variables" that Tiandao planted for himself in a desperate situation. She sacrificed herself to send Yan Mingfei away, not only to save the world, but perhaps also to deal with the indescribable crisis that God could find after countless logical deductions - the only glimmer of "unreasonable hope". Her story begins with an utilization (the carrier of heaven's use) and ends with a gift (giving the future to mankind). And she herself, in this grand narrative spanning time and space, finally changed from a "tool" to a real "character".
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Is the Nascent Soul stage so strong? I feel like I can't beat the laser cannon 🙂