Wandering Around the Heavens, I Want to Become an Immortal

This book is really underwhelming. I would give it five stars even on Tomato. Your writing is really awesome. When I wrote recommendations and answers on Zhihu, you were always recommended first. I just read it. Currently, it has more than 300 collections and more than 70 likes. I hope it can retain a wave of people.

It's so appetizing. I am an impetuous person with a high threshold. I have never read some of the original books, but I can read this book and enjoy it non-stop. Looking for books every day, I looked around and found that this martial arts book is the best, and it doesn't have a meal replacement! The author's writing is so strong. He has excellent character portrayal, excellent fighting scenes, excellent construction of the skill system, and clever setting of the golden finger. His writing skills are so deep that I can't see any shortcomings. I can tell at a glance that this is something that cannot be written by current AI. The author is not able to achieve results at this level, and a word-heavy "Datang" book will end up with thousands of orders. I think the author's choice of writing Siheyuan is fine, saving the country through curves, and first finding a way to achieve results. I just hope that the author will not give up on martial arts!

It's so beautiful. I've never seen Rain and Clouds, but the author's writing skills are so strong. It's refreshing to upgrade, the costumes are natural, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is readable. Updates can be slow, please don't be a eunuch.

If you don't like the first volume of Shooting the Condor, just go and try the second volume of Chu Liuxiang. There's really nothing to say about the second volume. The third volume, Clouds and Rains, is also very good. I can read it even if I haven't read the original work. In terms of the overall setting, the game is small and powerful, has no tasks, and has a high degree of freedom. You don't need to be a tool for tasks. The main line can be doing work, recruiting girls, eating melons, and enjoying the world freely. To be honest, the plot, writing, rhythm, character portrayal, etc. Are all very good. Anyone who has read enough can tell at a glance that this is an author who is absolutely skilled and on the rise. If he doesn't produce results, I can't sleep well while riding a horse. I just feel that a bunch of ## readers and the platform are ignorant.

Compared with the Gu Long No. 1, It is more affectionate and more beautiful. The protagonist is portrayed more freely, the plot is more lively, and it is fun to acquire a daughter.

Do you have any recommendations for meal replacements of the same style?

Obviously only a few people have seen that puppet show, but why does it seem like everyone knows about it at the starting point?

Everything else is okay. The main body conveys the feeling that the protagonist lacks everything except his moral character. The writing of the emotional line is not that good. There is no problem in breaking up the CP, but it is too abrupt. To break up Hu Huangrong, it is better to meet her one step earlier than Guo Jing, and then the two of them will cause trouble with the Yellow River Gang. In the process, the emotions can naturally sublimate. Instead of being like now, inexplicably getting along with the protagonist 😅

Huang Rong has already accepted Guo Jing, but why don't you? I think Guo Jing is also a stunner.

The protagonist who is both good and established is nosy. I don't know if it's the original Licking Dog. There used to be three golden chapters in the starting point and now there are three chapters of feeding💩. Sorry, the author doesn't have any specific intention for you. It's just that the current state of Qidian is really unbearable.

Don't explain the difference between the versions, just write the plot directly. People who have never seen the TV series version don't care about the difference between the three versions of the novel.

The power level of the ancient world of Xia can be gradually advanced according to the four levels of gold, ancient, warm and yellow. This way, you can write a longer one. Every time you attract traffic with martial arts, when you turn to fantasy and fairy, it starts to collapse until the end is rushed. How about writing more martial arts worlds.

The author grasps the hot spots and writes about what is hot. Hurry up and write down all those Manchu and Han conspiracy theories, Ming and Qing conspiracy theories, and things like the United States and Japan. Everyone reads books to relieve their anger, no matter whether they are true or false.

I found a misunderstanding. Many people say that the Jiuyin Scripture is too feminine, so the Jiuyang Scripture of the Doujiu Monk was created. Huang Shang was a civil servant who was ordered to compile the Wanshou Taoist Canon. From many Taoist classics, he understood how it is possible for yin and yang to be imbalanced.

Are courtyard houses so profitable? On the contrary, I feel that the book written by Siheyuan is much worse than the two books of Zhutian. The spirituality of this book is a bit worse, but the flavor of slander and meme is still there. Now the update is frequently interrupted, or the second half of the update repeats chapters, which greatly dampens the enthusiasm of those who follow the update.

Is this a bad grade? The updates are so unstable that I don't dare to subscribe. Although it is not necessarily eunuch, the probability of unfinished novels has increased crazily. I updated two novels at the same time, and the quality is indeed lower than the previous one. Can the author return to the state of the first two novels?

Why does the article feel like a short, ugly and poor person? As long as there is a partner, it will not be like this🐢

I told you long ago that there is no future in writing about missing women. I should have cut it off earlier and concentrated on writing about courtyard houses.

I haven't had much work in the last ten chapters. Isn't it going to be affected by a bunch of hypocritical passers-by in the comment section? They are not your audience! Your audience just wants to see something interesting!

I thought the beginning of the book was good, but after more than seventy chapters, I really didn't have the desire to go there. It was originally a Zhutian type novel, but the author kept suppressing the protagonist's strength. I originally thought that the protagonist would follow the path of nine yin and nine yang, but he never practiced. He always had experience settings and did not write about the use of internal strength. The protagonist started with more than seventy levels of internal strength, and turned nine After the Yin Shen Gong, I was only around level 40. As a result, after more than seventy chapters, the protagonist has gained a lot of martial arts, but has not made any progress at all. Later, I did not practice the Xiaoyao sect's martial arts. I clicked on the table of contents and the volume was almost finished. The author kept waiting for the protagonist to gain strength and wait for the Huashan Sword Theory to let others help the protagonist open up his meridians. This setting can only be said to be really disgusting. The result of the time traveler belt system is such a protagonist. I can only say that this book is really like this. Goodbye.

Once the eunuch author writes a book, he will always be an eunuch in the future.

Small head controls big head, vulgar, sexually repressed, feels like I have never seen a woman before

The writing is so disgusting, the protagonist has no moral values ​​at all, he is a scumbag, let alone scum, and the writing makes people feel uncomfortable watching it.

The protagonist in this author's works is also a purple boy. He was said to be unable to get married, but now he has to cut off his beard.

Stop being constrained by women, stop controlling your brain, and stop leading women all over the world. It's good to just read this book. The reading experience is not bad. Innate skills are really not as good as merit. Don't believe in those evil filter readers.

Tinker Bell started off well and ended up turning into a world of chaos. I couldn't hold it in anymore and smoked people away. Promise me that I will write a trilogy about fighting for immortality and don't touch the world of fantasy. Okay?

Looking at the comments section of old books, the author seems to like having a harem and having a prostitute and a nanny.

Is your latest chapter anti-theft? It feels like it not only prevents theft but also prevents subsequent reading.

The author has gone too far. He used to write an ending no matter what, but now he doesn't even write an ending. He just acts like a eunuch.

Don't end this book in a hurry. Even if you write a copy of what you have written before and add some new chapters, it will be fine. There will be very few people in the world who can read it. In addition, everything else in your courtyard is fine, but taking over Qin Huairu's role as Xiaodang is a bit awkward.