All Heavens: Guo Jing, the Ancestor of the Zhou Dynasty in the Condor Shooting

The idea is good, but it's a pity that the author himself has low ability. Zhang Asheng is still alive and dead, and he can't make up the growth process of the time traveler Guo Jing before he went south. He traveled to the peerless two prides to play house, and a good idea turned into a pile of rubbish.

Author, don't go astray. Everyone was attracted to your book by Guo Jing as emperor from the beginning. The core selling point is the temples and historical hegemony in the world of martial arts. You yourself added imitation historical records after the chapters. As a result, now I invite Yue Wang Yuyan again and travel through the world of "Peerless Two Prides", which is completely wrong. Did you deviate from the original work of "The Condor Shooting"? Guo Jing was too young and you couldn't write it? You refer to the real Mongolian history and write about Guo Jing's growth in Mongolia. What about Yao Yue? I thought it would be interesting to add an emotional scene with the girl version of Yao Yue. What about Huang Rong in the back? The golden finger opens wide, the heavens open early, the main plot is scattered, behind you... Just be steady, who wants to see Guo Jing, a time-traveler who is still a child, wandering around in the "Peerless Two Prouds". Pay attention to your core selling point, the court struggle in martial arts

Just like Spider-Man in the fandom will lose Ben, the protagonist's master died in the hands of Chen Xuanfeng. The protagonist can't do anything, even cheating

Wu Zhao and Wu Zetian can't compare to Lu Pheasant. Think about how much land the Tang Dynasty lost in his hands

Just like the title, I saw in the comment section at the beginning that the writing was not good, but I still clicked in to read it and caught up with the latest chapter. Personally, I feel that it is a work above the standard. At least the only discomfort is that Zhang Ah died, but the death was not poisonous and he was heroic. I hope he can be resurrected in the later stage. As long as he does not suppress the later stage and reaches high martial arts, there is a chance to do this. The other thing is that some people think it's awkward to write about the Condor Heroes, but actually I think it's okay. I've also read two other books recently, one is about Guo Jing and the other is about Yang Kang. They are both about rebelling against the world, but there is only the Condor Heroes at the moment. It feels like the progress is very slow. The author has suppressed the protagonist's strength and development speed in order to make the story longer. I feel that although this book has the behavior of turning around the world, it is not written in a skip. The main plot is still shooting the vulture. At present, I have only stayed in Peerless Twins for a few days and less than one chapter. Yao Yue's writing is quite pleasant. It is also because of this that the protagonist's strength is not suppressed. He is basically invincible when he has just reached adulthood. Huang Yaoshi was scared to death by the 60-meter sword. I was very happy to see it. There is also the history book section at the end. The first one I read was Fu Han, and this book is also quite interesting. Personally, I have different feelings. I think the advantage of this book is that it does not suppress the protagonist. The writing style is above the standard and should be that of an old author. The description of the characters is very vivid and I like it very much (there are too many books written by AI now). Not having to kneel down to lick the five unique skills is also an advantage. Many people can't get around when they see a woman. In order to win over Huang Rong or even Mei Chaofeng, she will do anything. Mei Chaofeng is the psychological shadow of my childhood and is really uninteresting. Not to mention that grabbing people's skulls is too annoying. The system reform in Mongolia is also very suitable for my taste. The current writing in the south also has a heroic flavor, the kind of lawless hero in Wen Ruian. Jin Yong's heroic flavor is a bit suffocating to be honest. . Speaking of this, I would like to mention another advantage, that is, Monk Chen Wanyan was very decisive in killing him. He was not reluctant to kill and conquer him just because he was a talented general in the late Jin Dynasty. To be honest, there is no need for you to hang up enough. If there are many talents, there is no need to recruit some butchers and aliens The only thing I am wary of personally is that the author should not commit the literary youth disease. Killing one Zhang Asheng is enough. Although I think the writing is okay and I don't feel poisonous, but try to avoid this in the future.

This is a good start, and I also like the future development. I hope to continue to stick to it.

A few years ago, Baidu Huazheng's historical prototype talked about the Princess of the Prison Kingdom. If the Princess of the Prison Kingdom is definitely not weaker than Huang Rong, otherwise she would not be able to become the Princess of the Prison Kingdom. And has the protagonist found a way to acquire internal skills and mental skills? After all, In the original work, Guo Jing was not good at deriving internal skills from external skills, but after acquiring internal skills, the Seven Heroes of Jiangnan became much faster in martial arts. He learned the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms in a short time, and Peach Blossom Island learned Zhou Botong and all the Nine Yin Scriptures in a short time. This shows that it is impossible to be really stupid.

Lj, kneel to Tian Temujin

From Chapter 11 to Chapter 14, there is a conflict of characters, which makes me uncomfortable to watch. On the one hand, I don't want people in the Jin Kingdom to know about me, but on the other hand, when others have a meeting, I have to go to other people's accounts and let others see me. I feel like I have no brains. Stay away. Do Jin people still have clairvoyance? When I saw this, I immediately wanted to give up.

Author, your current main world is really well written, with majestic momentum and broad vision, but going to other worlds now is a bit downgraded and uncoordinated. Martial arts has now become a constraint for the protagonist. It will be awkward to abandon your basic base and go to the Southern Song Dynasty. You can neither and should not build up a team from another world when going to other worlds. It will be even more destructive if a bunch of beauties from other worlds are brought to this world.

The second volume is really not as good as reopening, but I still give you my monthly vote.

It was a good weed when it was not on the shelves, but it became a poisonous weed when it was on the shelves! Those who want to see Guo Jing compete for hegemony will be disappointed😞. Guo Jing is listed on the shelves and goes to be a Thai star. First he went to Tianlong World and fell in love with Wang Yuyan, and then he fell in love with Li Qiushui

What are you going to do? I at least know the general plot of "The Condor". I've watched his TV series, "Don't mess with it." The main character is nowhere to be seen in three consecutive photos.

It stands to reason that the protagonist's kung fu should be very high, but the description always feels very low.

I feel that the content is very conflicting with the title of the work. Most of the readers who are attracted by this name want to see Guo Jing's other life and how Guo Jing dominates the world of the Condor Shooting. However, the content written now is too biased. It is about inviting the moon and traveling through the peerless two prides, which is very separate from the selling point of the work. The content has nothing to do with domination. No matter how powerful the character of Yue is, she is just an ordinary person. Even if she practices the martial arts in Yihua Palace to the extreme, she still can't kill hundreds or thousands of people with one skill. Writing about the interaction with her is not as good as writing about how Guo Jing improves his status and seizes power within Mongolia and forms an army loyal to him. This is in line with the process of striving for hegemony and is worthy of Guo Jing's goal of becoming Zhou Shizong.

I'm not interested anymore. If you didn't travel through time, Zhang Asheng would die. If you travel through time, he would still die. Isn't it funny? √Ya plot

I just saw the ten-color sky crystal, and I thought it was Xuantian Baojian

Why do the comments section say it is obsolete? Is it really useless? It seems that everyone is not very satisfied with the sudden time travel to Xiao Wu'er and Hua Wuque.

Rt, attributing great power to oneself and gathering the public are really two different directions, and the logical conflict between them is difficult to balance. As strong as the Egg Spirit Emperor, it also pulled out the dragon deposed. The recent plot of this book is a bit stuck. The reason is that the author has written Guo Jing's military power in an awkward place. He is so powerful that even the Five Ultimates can only be used as pendants. The military force and efforts of other companions are meaningless. The traditional hegemony text of diligently practicing internal affairs and training the new army will be a bit der when written, but it is not powerful enough to destroy the country with one hand and rule the world by one person.

As a colleague of Zhu Tianliu, I would like to praise you for writing well. Come on

Did Guo Sheng and Chai Jin send Guo Wei's tokens and Xuannv's Heavenly Book in a dream?😄

If you don't practice advanced martial arts, you will have to practice junk martial arts. Got kicked in the head by a donkey

I'll give you a monthly pass. How much is the monthly pass and extra updates? Give me a reply

When I see the Tian Jing, I always think it is the Hun Tian Bao Jian. Is there any Six Divine Art and Tathagata Divine Palm? I feel like I could add some martial arts from Hong Kong comics such as Tianwai Xiaoyao and Jiuxiao Sutra.

I have read the title and introduction of this book several times, and every time I don't want to click on it. Fortunately, the new book ranks high, so I read it patiently. It is indeed a good book.

Can you change the name? This name is too fast. Instead of looking at the author, just cross it. If not, change it to Heroes of the Grassland.

Come on

Your update is too miserable. If I want to vote for you, I have to read other books 🪖

It's okay, but it's just that I have to copy it every now and then, and it takes a bit long.

I didn't log in for a day, and the group exploded 🙂