Mixed in the Heavens, Meritorious Deeds Become Immortals

I asked why the book reviews are so clean. They are deleted every once in a while. Does the author know that the character he wrote is broken?

Don't always say whether to send it or not. Don't you think your voice is too sharp? This is not the voice of a real reader! 🙂

Updates must be stable. This one needs to be steady, it feels like Tianhu is starting.

I'm surprised that there are so many people who criticize stallions. They are in their teens and twenties and have strong physiological needs. They are not losers who can only lust after beautiful women. What's wrong with finding beauties who are attracted to each other to solve their physiological needs? Is this so outrageous? Do you have to go to bed and make it look like a cult ritual, burn incense and bathe with twists and turns, and make it look like the fusion of the universe is falling apart? Crazy! !

If you write a copy, write a copy. Why are you bragging about Yang Guang? He did not create Jinshi Science and Technology, nor did he dig the Grand Canal. The Western Regions were also his father's credit. The grasslands were built by paying for things. During the three expeditions to Goguryeo, millions of people died. How much food and armor were lost?

It's not fairy grass. Just look at what the protagonist does. It's like his brain hasn't developed successfully.

As he writes, the author starts to indulge in self-indulgence and accepts Cheng Ying and Xiao Longnu. After that, the forced romance is too disgusting for readers.

Da Feng is a watchman, this kind of book also writes about fellow people, digging for gold in the excrement,

I can't even describe my comfort zone well. This birdman is dead.

Not bad, very good, Tinkerbell, your new book makes me very satisfied, I must reward you severely! ! !

There is no need to subscribe, now it's time to wear it, mindlessly promoting women, and turn it into a pure studio article, 100% not written by Tinkerbell.

Isn't this more beautiful than a courtyard house? How can I write about it if I have to give it a few 😥

The author of Niu Mo has the beauty of someone who has not graduated from high school. The characters are OOC , the writing style is wrong, and the plot is forced. At the same time, the book is full of weirdness and irritation for others. As a result, he has become a literary youth and is known as a senior. He has a kind of three-spoon beauty. What's even more funny is that the images of characters in history and novels are all based on second-hand information from Tieba. Your Tieba yellow card is based on the creation of two Tieba friends, right? When will the ten philosophers of the Internet Temple be able to hang out at the starting point?

This book seemed good when I first read it, but when I read it I felt disgusting because of the author's description. The protagonist's behavior

This volume of "Zhu Xian" is so poorly written, the pace is slow, the plot is incomprehensible, and the dialogue descriptions of the characters are full of literary youth, not as good as Xiao Li's flying knives. The main reason is that the original novel is of average quality and artificial, with not much room for expression. It's not that the author lacks writing skills.

Yang Guo's writing is getting more and more wrong. Why does he feel like giving him a daughter?

It seems a bit fragmented, and basically every chapter mentions the original work. When I say mention, I mean words such as "in the divine sculpture", "in the original", "gold system", and "newly revised version". Just mention it in a subtle way, there is really no need to mention it so frequently and so obviously.

Hurry up and finish Da Bang. I really don't like it. I don't know how many people like Da Bang, but I haven't read the novel and I haven't followed the TV series. I hope to open a new copy soon.

I really want to go back to ten years ago, when Internet literature flourished, hehe~

I also saw the online fanfic and didn't want to read it.

The negative reviews below have complex ingredients. This book is really good-looking. The writing style is humorous and the whole work is interesting. It is ten thousand times better than the rhetorical sword out of the lobby. I really want to ask the negative reviews below what good books they have read. Let me see if they are eating s.

The group is gone, and the author hasn't published a new book yet.

Whether a harem can be opened or not, the new chapters are like giving away a daughter. I shouldn't have voted for it in the first place. I didn't expect that the veteran author could write such poisonous points.

People in the United States: Starting from Mission: Impossible Film and Television World: Starting from the Dimensionality Reduction Strike Film Drifting: Starting from the Siheyuan American Police Survival Record: Conquering People with Virtue Hang in the Heavens, Merits Become Immortals Martial Arts in the Heavens: Starting from the Jianghu of the Republic of China It looks good, believe me, give it a try

This book feels very good

When I woke up, the group exploded and came to find the organization.

I saw a lot of people in this comment section bragging about the book Xiantian Gong. I thought it was very good, but I found out that it was just a bunch of readers with preconceived notions and filters. They were stuck in the filters and just told lies. I read about 200 chapters, and Fan Qinghui was so disgusted that I stopped again. Here are my thoughts after reading: 1. There are some ingenuities in the exercises, but they are still chaotic and difficult to form a system 2. In terms of the smoothness of the plot, it is just a piece of history 3. It is very difficult to open a harem, and you have to take it with you through the heavens, because women are restrained in doing things, which makes a female audience like me very impatient. If you collect so much and you don't dare to write in detail, what's the point of opening this harem? Just to prevent readers from talking about giving away girls? As a result, the harem turned into a poisonous spot, making me sick 4. It was hard water, I had to kill or not, the force value was up, but things were far less fun than before, and the little people were provoking all kinds of things, which had no deterrent effect at all, and it was nothing Let's not talk about anything else. In terms of humor alone, the innate skills are far inferior to this one, and the reading experience is even worse

{"NickName":"Book Friends 160925104611197","UserId":223240130}When will the new book be released?

It's very sultry and good-looking, even though it's always the same routine. But as long as it works, it's a web article. It's so easy.

The level is really bad. Now, Jiang Langcai can finally close the book.