Keeping a Low Profile on the Journey to the West and Attaining Immortality

I just saw Chapter 117 and I'm really upset. I really don't understand. We all know that Sun Wukong was tricked. You traveled through time and were with Sun Wukong for so many years and did so many things, but Sun Wukong still followed the old path. So what is the role of your time travel? Since nothing can be changed, according to the theory you wrote, isn't it true that your heart is dusty? It is possible to not make any progress in your cultivation and to become possessed by evil spirits. Author: What was your purpose in writing this book? Is it to change the tragedy of Sun Wukong, to accompany Sun Wukong on his journey to the west, or to seek his own opportunities and immortality? Regardless of whether it is reasonable or not that you can find the harmony between Fang Cun Shan and Fang Cun Shan, I just feel that your writing is off track, as if you have changed the outline, which makes it look awkward. Seeing now, I feel that you have been doing useless work before, so why do you need to do so much? If you don't intervene in Sun Wukong's cause and effect, can't you just be a bystander? This is fan fiction, not originality. Readers are relatively more tolerant of originality. But fan fiction either pursues fun, or uses your imagination to write new ideas. If you do this, you may feel good about yourself and feel good about yourself, but how many readers are willing to pay for it? Everyone subscribes with real money. As an online article, this way of writing is destined to be lost in the public and unable to stand out.

It's just a stream of mortals cultivating immortals under the guise of Journey to the West. It doesn't have the flavor of classical cultivation at all. Those who like the routine of mortals can watch it.

It's quite silly. I started licking it when I arrived at Huaguo Mountain. The plot becomes funnier as it goes on, and the system of cultivating immortals is also a mess. Now and then, has the author figured out what exactly he wants to write about? No matter how the Journey to the West changes, this is a transaction between the three supreme forces, each getting what it needs. The monkey is a chess piece and this will not change. So what if there is an extra time traveler. There is a fool who can be killed by the powerful. What the hell, just keep going to the end. The weak chicken and the supreme power compete with each other, thinking that they can stir up trouble with a little modern sophistry and prophecy. Or there is something beyond these rules.

People who practice Taoism are written like thieves. They steal everything they do and have a petty attitude. Either you take the opportunity generously, or you don't take it. It's just a sneaky way of taking things that others don't like, and it's like being a thief with a guilty conscience.

I originally thought it was a traditional journey to the west, but after it was put on the shelves, I found out that it was still a prehistoric game. It was covered in the skin of traditional immortality, but in fact it was still the same as ordinary people cultivating immortals.

After it was put on the shelves, it turned out to be a flood. It was really useless and abandoned.

The previous story of Zang Tian Gou Dao Liu was well written, but the later part had to be forced into the monkey storyline, which was both self-indulgent and embarrassing...

After seeing the first few pictures, I didn't feel comfortable with it. Fang Cunshan became a sect for mortals to cultivate immortality. They said it was a traditional cultivation of immortality, but in the end, they opened a level of cultivation for themselves.

In the back, the brothers were given equal status (the protagonist is still a senior brother), so why don't you just keep going like this? But after returning from seeking truth, I thought that the protagonist wanted to hide and continue to grow while stirring up the storm secretly, but it turned out that the protagonist directly transformed into a little fanboy and worshiped Sun Wukong's dock and became the king (the protagonist insisted), and gave advice to Sun Wukong. Preventing him from falling out with the Heavenly Court is equivalent to directly standing in the center of the whirlpool. It is really a fraud in the introduction. The main plot of this book is to save Sun Wukong and defeat the conspiracy of the gods and Buddhas, and to live forever. I understand that in the fanfic of Journey to the West, Sun Wukong will definitely have to go west in the end, but it is the fact that he has to go west anyway that makes the protagonist's struggle and efforts look so clownish🤡

What is written next has no logic at all. Do you think the reader is mentally retarded?