False Covenant: the Saint Overturned the Chess Game of the Gods

Important adjustments: (1) The first-level name of the Saint Card Class System has been adjusted. The original "Primary Witch" is now changed to "Reading", and the content of the relevant chapters has been revised simultaneously. The complete rank system from lowest to highest is: "Reader", "First Witch", "Witch", "Preacher", "Acolyte", "Priest", "Priest", "Bishop", "Saint", "Goddess". Optimization and correction of other chapters: (1) The plot of the first chapter "The Banshee in the Forest" has been optimized to enhance the suspenseful atmosphere and make the writing smoother. (2) Some descriptions in Chapters 2 to 6 have been corrected. For example, in Chapter 2, "kicking off high heels" was revised to "kicking off loafers" to fit the character's condition at that time; in Chapter 4, "clawed worm-like tail-like limb tips" was revised to "clawed worm-like tail-like limb tips" to make it more consistent with the world view setting.

(1) The wording and rhythm of the plot "The Banshee in the Forest" at the beginning of the first chapter have been optimized. Split long sentences into short sentences, reduce obscure sentences, and improve the reading experience; increase psychological description and enhance the sense of substitution. (2) The rhythm of Chapters 2, 3 and 6 is optimized. The information density of the original Chapters 1 and 2 was relatively high, and the continuous connection affected the reading experience. The "Pilgrimage Road" task presentation in Chapter 2 was adjusted to Chapter 6, which alleviated information overload and gave space for emotional precipitation. At the same time, psychological description was added and the protagonist's initiative was slightly enhanced. In addition, the original second and third chapters have a strong sense of explanation, and the modifications enhance the sense of the story and pave the way for the protagonist's psychological adaptation. (3) The text and coherence of other chapters such as the fourth, fifth, ninth, tenth and eleventh chapters have been optimized. Supplement psychological description.

Important adjustments: (1) Addressing the key issues of unclear positioning, lack of sense of interweaving of the two lines, and unclear main line due to the separation of the growth line and the ghost story line. The setting of "Saint cards attract mythical creatures/ghosts" is added to the dialogue in Chapter 3; In the soothing chapters of Chapters 3, 10, and 11, mythical creatures/ghosts are added to clarify the main line of the ghost story, increase the sense of compactness, and enhance the sense of interweaving of the two lines; Other adjustments: (1) Chapters 9, 10, and 11 have been adjusted to make them more coherent, and the character dialogue has been adjusted to match the mood, and the fluency between sentences has been optimized. (2) "Interlude: Sprouts from the Ashes" is adjusted to before Chapter 13 to avoid interrupting the emotional flow of Chapters 9 and 10 and to pave the way for the characters to appear. (3) Three-dimensionalize some characters and increase the emotional ups and downs.