Naruto: Reshape the Ninja World with Scorpion

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What are the latest pictures about? Don't slander Luo Sha in secret. If you want to show that Luo Sha is not qualified to inherit Feng Ying, write from the perspective of merit and the overall situation. Why do you write about not paying attention to family? You are not a female channel. It will only make people think that you have no courage.

Scorpion will transform his body sooner or later anyway. He discovered his hidden thoughts during the days and nights with the male protagonist. He suffered from the fact that his physical body was still male, so he determined to ascend mechanically, so he changed himself into a female body in Return of the King and attacked the male protagonist at night.

I became a Kazekage and then went undercover in the Akatsuki organization. I couldn't stand it anymore.

Sand Ninja has an old American killing line. Play elite school education (catching high-quality schools), add some medical teams in 2077. People are consumables. If injured or disabled, just add puppet accessories. If dead or not, the human puppet will ascend directly. Later, it can be reincarnated and strengthened.

A dozen a day

Minato wasn't dead and Naruto still had the surname Uzumaki? Minato's superior Uchiha is still being suppressed and Danzo is still causing trouble. If he can go up, it must not be White Lotus. Let the previous one continue to cause trouble without him?

Knowing the root and bottom, I put it into the sea 😅 and abandoned it.

I can't write without leaving the original work... Obito is dead, Minato is alive, without the Nine-Tails Rebellion, Uchiha's situation in the village is even worse. Even when both parents of Naruto and Sasuke are alive, Kushina and Mikoto are best friends, and Fugaku supports Minato, Sasuke and Naruto have become enemies, and Uchiha still wants to rebel and annihilate the clan...

Delete the book and leave, so as not to hang it on the bookshelf to be an eyesore. I have read more than 300 chapters in vain.

After fighting for a long time, none of the three ninjas died. The first and second generations of the dirty soil also said that they would have a chance to meet again in the future. They said that the battles in the past few days had achieved nothing. Just going to Danzo was equivalent to strengthening Konoha.

The writing behind it is so shitty. . What a waste of points.

The overall feeling is very good. My suggestion is: don't rush to exceed the shadow level by too much, use more methods, and have a strong life-saving ability. The best balance of combat power is that before the end of the book, you can defeat many with one, but you cannot crush the five shadows. You have the ability to save your life when facing super shadows or above, otherwise it will easily collapse.

Modify it, I mean the protagonist uses blood to attack, what should the protagonist do if he meets Hidan?

Is the author a female? She is obviously a little bit arrogant.

Although Naruto's first beauty is good, I recommend Gaara's mother. 🤭

Yes, the level of Liangcao+ is good, and the plot rhythm is well grasped.

After fighting for so long, no one was killed 🤔

Could it be that they are the legendary double male protagonists?

Desert Layer Burial Seal

Why are you following Scorpion? I posted it too deliberately on anime characters. Write some novel characters and perspectives. I'm done.

The hero who never sees the light of day and hides in the shadows is the true face of a ninja!

Is this a way to die? It's written like this. At least it's watery and ends well. Alas.

It seems that I broke away from the original work in the middle period and I don't know how to write it.

When I saw the plot staff of killing Konoha and increasing Konoha's hatred value, I knew it was over. Fortunately, the poisonous points did not come out after the charge. The previous writing was okay. At the very least, my writing skills were fine from the beginning until I gradually developed them. As I wrote, I just started to write whatever came to my mind.

Quicksand, gathering and dispersion, very suitable for the protagonist's organization

I've written it all here, and I'm still a eunuch. Even if it's unfinished, I've finished it.

To be honest, when I saw him using his academic degree and medical knowledge to fight the enemy, I suddenly felt that the book was over. The white eyes had already told him that in the world of ninjas, the human body meridian diagram is stupid, and he still eats a lot of food. Guess why the Yondaime did not kill as precisely as you did, but studied the extremely destructive S-level ninjutsu. It is really hard to guess. What is the reason? If you use it to strengthen your body with medicine, I won't say anything else. If you use it to kill people, I can only say that it is too idealistic.

Turn the hook up, and it's almost enough to see the third generation of Lei killed.

Very interesting, good luck to the author! ! !