Gunslinger, Magic, Crown

It can be seen that the model the author imitated should be the firearm warfare model based on flintlocks during the Napoleonic Wars. He also felt that the weapons were not cash enough, so he upgraded the technology to the World War II era. But it's so nonsense, it's romantic for the sake of romance. What does it mean to train a gunner with a flintlock gun? What does it mean to emphasize the precise hit of a single shot? I am surprised that this backward military concept has not been put into the trash can. It can still be regarded as a standard. The IQ of the character really depends on the author himself. The author is completely unaware of one of the most important facts: with the firearm system behind them, the most powerful thing about gunmen is not their powerful long-range, but their ability to cut grass. No extraordinary gunners can effectively create a crushing advantage over non-extraordinary cold weapon soldiers, and can pose a threat to low-level extraordinary knights and mages, and the training cost will be cheaper. The training cost of extraordinary gunners is much lower than that of knights (no need to find a mount), their self-sustainability and shooting range are far better than that of mages, and they can maintain extremely efficient grass-cutting abilities, still exerting strong suppression on knights and mages whose levels are lower than themselves. So the significance of the existence of gunners is to shrink the scale of the low-level training system for knights and mages, and most of these gunners have graduated from the command academy. What does this mean? This means that these gunners form the skeleton and nervous system of the army: a non-commissioned officer corps composed of low-level officers. Without them, the army is just like a group of levies in the feudal era, a ball of loose sand! They are originally the core backbone of the army - what, you can form an extraordinary regular army composed of all knights and magicians? Or can you give up firearms and use the legions of the cold weapon era? So in this context, gunners may not be super-high-ranking generals, but they are definitely not high-ranking or low-ranking beings - they are the actual military controllers, and their positions are more like British civilian secretaries. They may not be full-time, but they are definitely the main force of the staff system. So if you want to read a fantasy and romantic epic, you can ignore these things, but if you don't like the setting, don't read it. It's really disturbing.

In an extraordinary world, the musketeers fight against the magician knights, without any hardship and confusing logic. Pig's foot black powder vest-loaded flintlock gun, 3 rounds per minute, effective range 50-200 meters, skilled shooters hit 50% and 30% at the shooting range 90 meters before and after (the battlefield hit rate is even lower affected by the environment), the hit depends entirely on the salvo, the tactic is to queue up and shoot in three stages. The warhead can effectively break armor for 50-90 meters. It is difficult for extraordinary enchanted plate armor and mage armor. How can you compete with knights and mages with this thing? Mage beeps, long-range rapid fire and atmospheric attacks, plate armor knights can charge up to 330 meters in one minute. Author, tell everyone how to fight. It's a pity that the author's writing is wonderful, but the setting is wrong. I suggest you restart it.

I only read a few chapters and the comments felt inappropriate, so I deleted them. After reading all the updated ones, I will post another one. There must be a magician and a knight. There must be breathing techniques, right? Or other ways to exercise? Does your father, a viscount or a powerful colonel, have no resources at all? After four years of being completely like an ordinary person, I was covered in sweat within ten rounds of paper bullets, a time traveler! The biggest attraction of this kind of novel is that the liver is harvested. Every time I have a skill book at 1:00 or 2:00, I am 12% killed by the anticipation of the following. After reading it, I feel dry. I put it on the bookshelf and never think of this book. I don't want the pig's feet to take off so quickly and I'm afraid I won't write it. But what's the highlight?

In total, 50,000 words can be read in one go. However, there are some debatable details in the current character design: The protagonist is set as a soldier in his previous life, and he has the proficiency system to assist him. However, the academy has been focusing on front-loaded flintlock guns for four years, or it is in the form of custom-made paper-shell bullets and pellets and gunpowder packaging. It feels better to be a novice who knows nothing The core premise for iterative upgrades of firearms is breakthroughs in ammunition technology With the background and system support of the protagonist, the development direction does not require a lot of trial and error, and the experimental process has systematic error correction. I am also obsessed with the setting of the front-mounted flintlock gun, which lacks a bit of rationality. I feel that the harder I work, the more mistakes I make, so I have to take it hard. Finally, training hard on flintlock guns and improving existing ammunition and firearms are not mutually exclusive. It is impossible to be at the shooting range 24 hours a day? I hope there will be some reversal in the plot later on, even if I quietly improve it in private and leave it as a cheesy patch, otherwise it will be too dramatic.

It's simply inexplicable. In the first chapter, I saw the protagonist holding a flintlock inexplicably discriminate against mages and knights, and even didn't understand them at all 🙂 I think it's time to take a look inside.

When I saw Chapter 92, I couldn't stand it anymore. A talented gunman was sent abroad to engage in intelligence work.

After reading three chapters, the writing is good, but the core of the plot is a mess. The protagonist wants to rely on a gun from the Ming Dynasty to prove that the gun is more powerful than the magician and the extraordinary knight. The advantages and disadvantages of guns in the extraordinary world have been mentioned in many novels. The advantage is that it does not require high talent, and your flintlock gun + lead bullets are not as good as bows and arrows. To put it another way, if you have a system, what can you prove? Prove that extraordinary people can't defeat cheaters?

A gunner who is not pure enough is not a gunner. What is the difference between a gunner who needs talent for enchantment and a mage who needs talent? You have to prove that firearms are for mages, right? 🤔

It is not easy for gunners to combine extraordinary power with enchanting bullets, adding mental power, or other methods to attach extraordinary power to bullets. The essence is still extraordinary power, and it has nothing to do with guns. According to this method, it is no different to attach bows and arrows to cannonballs. As for physical skills? In the same way, should we use extraordinary power? Why not switch to another job if you can use it? This is especially true when combat power increases in the later stage. Not to mention the bullet range, how can you play without changing the straight-forward attack mode? Either the rules system can still reflect the presence of firearms, or else it is almost non-existent, but there are other differences between the rules system? A good example is dnf. The performance of firearms in it has already shown that the gun master cannot play well with guns. Even other mechanics and gunners can only use large calibers and mechanical creations Of course, low magic and low martial arts environments can still be played. To be honest, I have never seen a high magic or high martial arts protagonist using a gun (rule-based and non-main weapons do not count)

If you want to write about something that is mainly popular, don't write about extraordinary power, especially when it comes to muskets or flintlock guns... Can pig's feet use this kind of gun to hit enchanted plate armor? The funniest thing is that I got a gun enchantment... Don't you need magic to deal with pig's feet? Then your previous insistence is like saying that grapes are sour when you can't eat them. When you eat them, they taste all kinds of delicious.

I am very happy to have discovered another work with potential that is above the standard 👍 Let me talk about the advantages first: 1. The subject matter is novel and interesting, and when used properly, it can show the dual charm of reality and magic at the same time. The collision of the two is also worth looking forward to; 2. The background is quite interesting. It has the potential to explore the world, reveal the supernatural, improve personal abilities, war... It can be said that the development space of the story is quite broad; 3. The author's writing skills and attitude are also worthy of recognition. The text has traces of polishing, and the content is supported by materials. I am cautiously optimistic about the subsequent development. Let's talk about my opinions: 1. The intention of creating a confrontation between gunners, knights, and mages is too explicit. Perhaps it will be better to show the contradictions with the actual contact between the three parties. Restrained expression can sometimes give readers a more objective and in-depth perception. Now this mode of repeated emphasis through a large number of dialogues gives me a feeling that the debate between the two parties has not officially turned into a confrontation. , One of the parties has begun to strongly blame the other party; 2. Some of the character names are too straightforward and make people laugh, so it is recommended not to translate them directly; 3. The protagonist's personality and behavior pattern are very suitable for the profession, but they seem a bit too mechanical, and the common communication language is too written, and it feels like it lacks some human touch Finally, I hope the author can write better and better!

There is a reason for your poor grades. It's hard to imagine that a time traveler has a sense of mission. Even if you say you are engaged in liberating productivity, I think you have attended nine years of compulsory education. Moreover, the title of the book is Magic, World Sword and Magic, and you also have plug-ins. You said you want to play with guns. Brother, don't you even want to practice? Isn't it possible that your body's instincts are extraordinary?

The author is proving one thing, how mentally disabled a protagonist who has traveled from modern times can be.

Isn't his sensory ability better than that of an ordinary person like you? Or you can just pretend to be a comparison. Whatever you write about glory and perseverance must be consistent with realistic values. One general will succeed and thousands of bones will die. No one is a fool now. What you wrote is too hypocritical.

I don't understand that the most junior mage can fire an explosion with a diameter of 10m at a distance of 500m, which is equivalent to an infantry mortar. It does not require any cost or equipment for a single soldier, and the protagonist's equipment is still in the front-loaded flintlock stage, using black powder. No artillery, no modern weapons. Not to mention using a World War I rifle, I feel like giving the protagonist an AK is too much. Of course the writing is good.

The biggest problem is that this setting no longer works In fact, the current setting of firearms must be a supplement to mechanical ascension. This enchanted gun is really easy to eat.

In a world where firearms and magic coexist, the flaw of the firearm setting is that it cannot be enchanted, so the protagonist is the first extraordinary person who can become a gunner. After a lot of specialties, the reader seems to be just another kind of magician, and it is completely incomparable. There is a magician with a mature system, and the firearms in the world view are a bit too exaggerated. They still use flintlock guns, black powder, paper cartridges, and have to manually load the powder. With the current strength of the magician, it will be very difficult if the protagonist is not cheated in the future. It's difficult to fight, or various patches are applied to limit magic and knights In the end, I don't actually feel the feeling of a gun, and it feels completely inferior to an archer, because this enchantment quality shows that not everyone can use it. I can understand that this is a golden finger for the protagonist, but this setting leads to the loss of the most soulful quality of firearms-universality. A magician needs years and months of training, but a gunner does not. The way you write now makes the extraordinary gunman become similar to a magician So it feels very contradictory.

The latest chapters are unimaginably bad. They were all forced to advance the plot. They used two ultimate moves and a forbidden magic that I had never heard of before. In the end, only one eye was knocked out. No matter how extraordinary the brain is, it is easier to be injured than the eyes, right? As a result, it was written that a string of energy attacked the brain and was unharmed. Then the villain only injured the protagonist's eyes, and the protagonist was still alive after the explosion. The writing was terrible from the moment the protagonist became a spy. The protagonist's mercenary group simply showed that I am a soldier on their face. Everyone can see that they are different. The most difficult thing is that before, the 5x burst of one attribute could break the defense of elite dwarf puppets. Now, after half a year of intensive training, adding the ice and fire attributes can only knock out one eye of others.

What's the point? Or the ancient Chinese village magician... Chinese elemental mage, why are you writing something that is worse than a warlock? You have to make something out of nothing, so why do you name this gunner? What does this have to do with the shooter? A new profession that is completely forced...                                                 ……，？ That's called "consistency"... It can already be said that it is not target shooting, but the "art" of body control.

What are the employment standards for extraordinary professions? In the book, knights have fighting spirit and mages have magic power, which are derived from breathing methods and meditation methods respectively. So what is the learning threshold? Does talent need to be adapted to breathing methods and meditation methods? Then a question arises, why did the gunman become a profession that is not extraordinary but similar to extraordinary? It is said that people in the supernatural world generally believe that gunmen do not have supernatural abilities because gunpowder is "mechanical, rigid, and lacks spirituality." Then where is the resonance between other professions and spirituality? Why didn't the protagonist take the approach of the Ranger, first becoming a supernatural being and then using his extraordinary abilities on firearms? What kind of operating logic is the extraordinary system of this world based on? Why can't you become a transcendent through the enchantment skill books of other professions, and then still use firearms?

British flintlock experimental data in 1824: the flintlock fired 27,000 times, the flint failed to ignite 1,448 times, the charge failed to ignite 378 times due to blocked flame holes, and a total of 1,826 misfires, that is, the misfire rate was 6.8%. Hits depend on volleys, that is, lining up to shoot in three stages. There is no so-called sharpshooter.

A systematic protagonist, to learn an extraordinary thing that is still in theory! ! ! The sense of violation is too strong,,,

Please don't time travel, sometimes it's quite childish. As a time traveler, you prove to be a hammer and protect your home and country. If you really travel through time, indifference, alienation, and only me are the main theme. If you have nothing to do, you have to take responsibility, that's just a sandbird.

It's finished 😒

Aren't guns and magic one and the same? Alchemy, fire magic, wind magic, explosion, path tracing, and acceleration are equivalent to fast spellcasting without chanting. Even equipped with magic-breaking bullets, it can also be specifically targeted at mages, turning the staff into a firearm and the bullets into magic scrolls. It is equivalent to a magic, long-range and offensive combat assassin.

If you want to make a gunner a profession, the best way is to rely on DNF. Give the gunner profession several job transfer routes (1) The second-level gunner can choose to continue to be a gunner (additional equipment: firearm modification 'silencer, long gun, camouflage, range...' And other skills make the changed profession have more employment directions) (2) The second-level gunner can change his profession to become a gunner (additional equipment: multiplier skills such as 'increased damage, increased range, increased distance…', and at the same time, in order to make the gunner less strong and super-model, the second-level gunner can only use shotguns, grenades, hand cannons, small slaps… and other weapons that can be operated by a single soldier, and then unify them in the later classes. The ability to arrange equipment transmogrification or small different spaces avoids the embarrassing situation where later-level artillery professionals cannot move and can only erect city walls) (3) The second-level gunner can also change to an ammunition expert (additional equipment: modifying the 'various types of bullets and shells enchantment bonus, enchanted mine production, enchanted grenade production...' And other skills Yes, compared to gunners and gunners, this job change has certain professional requirements, which requires junior high-level alchemy or intermediate-high special material processing) At the same time, professional gunners must be separated from ordinary people (that is, people who hunt are called hunters, and people who master extraordinary skills and change jobs as hunters are also called hunters). The two cannot be confused.

Originally, this book can be read at the beginning. As long as you can tolerate the setting of firearms against magic knights, the writing is good. But wasn't the writing method of pretending to die after graduation a setting for online articles 20 years ago? Why would her mother write like this in 2026? The protagonist is the only extraordinary gunman. He has to keep a low profile to avoid being discovered by the enemy country. It's understandable, but he doesn't have to be high-profile. You said that without iron-blooded training, he is just a flower in the greenhouse. Just get the enemy country and let him develop on his own. Why did Mao have to fake his death and hang up the Security Bureau? It's said to be unique. Shouldn't it be protected first and then released after subsequent large-scale research is successful?

Hey, hey, there's Beilin Daiyu here too, that's an exaggeration.

It's actually very good-looking👍

Seeing this is no different from seeing a lump.