My Family Curse Is Only a Little Bit Scary

Not to mention the three golden chapters, there is no clear explanation of the world view in Chapter 30. Apart from the extremely superficial corner of the underground industry, the only participating forces are the giant company Wanxiang, which simply shows the corner of cyberpunk. But other than that, there is no extra information. The look and feel is extremely dry, and the emphasis on depicting the relationships and emotions of the characters is somewhat excessive. From the perspective of the length and writing style, we generally call it "Guilin Wenqing". Let's briefly talk about the early introduction of this book from three parts. 1. There is a problem with the presentation of the content. After 30 chapters, it is not clear what type of book it is, what it is about to write about, and it has no connection with the title of the book (just a few simple rumors, rather than definite cheats or debuffs). It is not required to point out the theme at the beginning, but the current opening chapter cannot retain human stories. The actions of the protagonist all have motivations, and the actions of the supporting characters all have a certain logic. It is quite reasonable for a cyberpunk character, but it is too reasonable and too ordinary. It would be exactly the same if the protagonist were to change to a cyberpunk world. The protagonist's experiences can be reproduced by anyone with the same strength and personality. So why is the protagonist the protagonist? Where is the special point? What is golden finger? The reader was attracted by the title of the book and read it for a long time but could not find any connection between the protagonist and the title of the book (the amount of rumored information that repeatedly mentions family lineage can only explain why the townspeople abandoned and disliked the protagonist). What is the attraction? Speaking of the introduction again, apart from the names of places and people, does the whole thirty chapters have anything to do with the confusion of time and the blending of ancient times? 2. The plot transition is abrupt. The entry point into the supernatural/weird part is very weird, without any foreshadowing. Logically speaking, encountering such an event is so sudden, but writing a book like this is terrible and confusing. Any turning point must be foreshadowed. The reader should feel surprised but be able to accept the plot immediately instead of feeling confused or inexplicable. He is not a hen card writer. The first two incidents encountered were extremely sudden, without any prelude, and the impression was inexplicable. After the incident, the setting was quickly added to tell the story that there were strange and terrifying rumors in this place, which gave a strong sense of haste. For example, when entering an event for the first time, can't you stand at the door of xx and recall the weird rumors about xx before entering? In the second incident, couldn't the gangsters tell the boys to hesitate after they said they were throwing people into the xxx, and write their scared expressions to show that even they themselves did not dare to go there, as a foreshadowing that would not be suspected of being a spoiler? This is not because the movie has a black screen to help explain the transition. To show the plot of the novel coherently, it must be written, rather than relying on the reader's brain waves to match the author's and use the same brain-filling pictures to imagine the process. 3. The problem of combining elements of the world view. It is necessary to write both supernatural and cyberpunk. This is a particularly good gimmick. But in the first 30 chapters, the content of these two parts is very clear. When writing about life, there is no supernatural content, and when writing about supernatural beings, the content has nothing to do with high technology. So what's the point? What is the future direction of integration? If you plan to incorporate some cyber spells and electronic exorcisms, then these thirty chapters should be a foreshadowing. So far, the protagonist's golden finger is a mysterious shovel. Those who didn't know it thought it was a fantasy background. The protagonist got an indestructible brick of unknown material at the beginning. Goldfinger, cyberpunk, and supernatural, the three elements can be played in their own way without interfering with each other. So why don't those who want to see the mysterious old man pass on the magic weapon go to fantasy? Those who want to see cyberpunk? Don't go to soft science fiction. Those who want to see supernatural? On the contrary, it is neither fish nor fowl. Based on the first thirty chapters, such as the title, we do not rule out the possibility of excitement in the later stages. But it is best if the later stage is really exciting enough to make the novel break out of the circle and make readers believe that they will enjoy it after reading it.

I just saw a new book that just came out. It was quite interesting after flipping through a few pages. I'll give it a try and look forward to the follow-up 🤭

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I feel so tired watching. The author has good writing skills, but the setting is too complicated. Can't he just give the shovel to the old man and start something happening nearby? He has to pull it out, and the sister of the family feels so deliberate. Cutting down a street lamp, fainting accidentally, going to investigate the old man's past, going into a mine, it's all settled in one breath. You have to talk about family or fate. He acts like a savior, which is annoying for a logical person like me. Naruto, Death, and Pirates have proven that blood theory is despised in China.

Chapter 1 Duck, I thought it was that duck, but I didn't expect it to be a real duck. He looked hungry in the middle of the night.

It's my type😍

Looks great, support, support, support!

The writing is great~ The first chapter made me want to eat duck in the middle of the night hahahahaha

A solid Gundam industry chain The beginning of this book still lacks imagination Sell Gundam directly

Following the update, leave a comment and I immediately took a look👍🏻. Support the author greatly, good books deserve to be seen!

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The author said that there will be a new book soon. How come it has been three years? 😭😭😭 Do you know how these three years have passed?

Looks good, looks good, watching, support, support, support

Future Cthulhu + Curse Family, a bit interesting

From the big city of cyberpunk to the weird town, I met people from the past. There is also a family curse that is passed down from generation to generation, a bit like hereditary bad luck. I look forward to the follow-up story.

The writing is pretty good, I'll update it quickly.

I don't understand, let me ask a big guy to analyze it.

It's over, no more investment times

When will my sister come back?