I Prove the Qing Emperor with the Tao Fruit

I don't understand the word "pardon". It was created by the author. I can't find the source. It's also inconsistent with common sense. It's very awkward. The normal expression is "Emperor".

The law of the jungle is the absolute law of the jungle? Who told you that nature is the law of the jungle?

I have read it several times, but the panels have not changed, and the panels have not changed. I really don't know why the author wrote the panels out so many times?

The most difficult and confusing thing to watch is the plot of Asgard and the creation of the characters in Asgard. Deleting the entire Asgard plot will not have any impact on the article, but will make the plot more coherent and smooth.

The world view from the introduction should be quite grand, but the more than 30 pictures seem to make people feel like they are just starting out, and they don't even have enough practice. It's a little slow.

Too slow. After reading Chapter 10, I felt like the protagonist was just doing some everyday things.

The setting is very good, keep it up!

Brother, hold on, it feels good. The concept, gimmicks, etc. Are all pretty good. You, an old bookworm, will like it.

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The writing is still very good, come on, don't be a eunuch. Cultivation novels are based on word count.

I read the previous one. The writing is okay. Don't be a eunuch