Tianqingxiantu

I am a bookworm who has been reading books for more than ten years. To be honest, this book is quite good. The writing and story are very strong. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will become popular. Don't cut it.

I'm confused. I read more than one chapter and I can't understand the idea of the Immortal Court in the article. Even if blood sacrifices of monks are needed, they can still send out large armies to rob other people's monks. Even if domestic resources are not enough to support the current monks, they can still go out and rob them. Now it is possible to rob without Robbery, and even spilled his own blood~ Maybe the author will write a reason later, but I can't see the reason behind it. No reason can be an excuse to harm myself/benefit others. This kind of stupidity does not meet the three views. I am too lazy to complain about ordinary articles. I really can't stand it.

The comment area is so deserted 😭

If you write it at this pace, it will definitely become popular. Don't cut it.

The author wanted to write a group portrait, but he didn't have the writing style. Now it feels like a mess. The protagonist seems to be very awkward in the early stage. You want to express a lot, but your writing style doesn't support it, so you wrote a four-part portrait.

Looks good, looks good, the climax is coming. It would be better if the author could give the protagonist an eye-catching (awesome) move in this competition. The water method is called Water Dragon Yin, and the wind method is simply "Wind Comes", which would be better if it forms a kind of artistic conception or field, haha. In my humble opinion, maybe the author has a better way to write it. I look forward to updating it tomorrow.

Shit luck Simple people have good things to eat Masochistic tendencies

It's quite fun to see the character of this protagonist. I see that there are no big problems now, only a little awkwardness with Mako, but he quickly regained his smoothness. Moreover, this kind of feeling of having no worries and relying on excellent talent and strength to leapfrog people is much better than the ordinary person who just relies on one trick to conquer the world. Why do you have to pretend to be a grandson when you have extraordinary talent? Why should I hide it when I am so proud?

It looks pretty good. Come on author, it will get better 👍

Is there such a similar stream of genius?

I feel that the Q&A at the beginning of the introduction is unnecessary and a bit superfluous. It is a bit inconsistent to deliberately emphasize that there is no golden finger and no soul penetration. It should be changed or deleted. The following introduction is quite good. Personal suggestion, the author can refer to it.

After reading two chapters, it was a mess and I quit!

Why hasn't it been put on the shelves yet? It feels really refreshing but not too bad, the writing is sophisticated, and the author has been laying the groundwork. You won't want to save the cool stuff until it's on the shelves 😁😁. Imagine a scene, to be promoted to the true king, and arrange a conflict and competition that forces you to come to the door (questioning the status of the Seventh Son, treating the protagonist as a soft persimmon, trying to snatch the luck of the Seventh Son, because the protagonist has no position, so pick him): Then the protagonist enters, the sky starts to rain🌧️, the law is obeyed, from gentle breeze to drizzle to heavy downpour, murderous intent is permeated... Finally on the shelves, monthly tickets are available

He was used as a swordsman again, and he faked it time and time again. Let's see how the author can use the halo of the protagonist this time to make the protagonist fight back when he is seriously injured, or just write the whole book to death 🤫

After reading dozens of chapters, I'm still not sure who the protagonist is 🤭

Author, why are you so cool😭, will there be any new books😭

Cursing - how come you cut it when you are riding a horse?😆

I don't understand what genre this book belongs to. The genius genre has a long-winded plot, while the mortal genre is too flamboyant.

Where is Shennong? I looked at the comment area and it doesn't feel right 🙂

Could the author pay attention to typos and fluent sentences? It's a bit difficult to watch

This book can be cut. Come back quickly and continue working.

The writing is fine The writing style is fine too The group portrait can be expanded a bit I give it 8 points on a ten-point scale

Well written, very comfortable to read

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

It's indeed different, and it's brilliantly written!