
Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Silver-Winged Ominous Star, the Ultimate Villain!
斗罗绝世:银翼凶星,最强反派!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 352k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- English
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176Chapters
326Recommendations
9.2kFans
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You're only level 29 when you enrolled, and you didn't even go on a soul hunt after your breakthrough. You just showed off three soul rings. Are you sure you won't be mistaken for a transformed soul beast?
Why not become Huo Yuhao's dog? Isn't this a classic trope in peerless novels? Go and become his dog!
If I remember correctly, wasn't Jiang Nannan's backdoor violated by that turtle?
Knowing he's rotten, why did he still go to school there?
It's really tough; there are so many plot holes left unfilled. Your writing is truly impressive.
Suggestion
The author needs to improve the logical flow, establish the protagonist's identity, and remember that enrollment requires information recording! The protagonist's breakthrough to a new spirit ring also needs to be planned, at least quickly, otherwise readers will leave.
It's not very interesting to just run a map with AI; it's not very engaging without a screenshot of the protagonist's martial spirit incarnation.