Immortality Begins with Refining Elixirs and Hiding Swords

I feel like the issue of taking on a disciple is not very well written. I think the main purpose of the protagonist's purpose of recruiting disciples is to do chores, deliver medicine, and serve people. You can go to the market to buy a servant or just buy a puppet, which is better than accepting a disciple. The relationship between master and apprentice is better than that of father and son, and every word and deed of the apprentice will affect the master. If the apprentice is not good, it also means that the master is incapable of teaching disciples. Think about how your master treats you, how tiring it is. Even if the protagonist really wants to recruit a disciple, how can he accept a mediocre person? Even if the protagonist does not seek talent when recruiting a disciple, at least he must have a good character. Disciples are also unpleasant. You, a disciple, actually interfered in the master's back house, helped others pursue the master, and disturbed the master's love. How can you be a disciple? Moreover, you eat from the master and live in the master's house. The master also teaches you skills and searches for swordsmanship according to your preferences. He is so good to you. You should at least side with the master. How can you ignore the master's wishes just because Sister Yu is friendly with you. Also, your master and Uncle Yan have a good friendship among the same generation, but as a result, you, the apprentice, call him by his first name, and you don't even want to call him Uncle. It's so rude. In summary, the protagonist is not good at accepting this apprentice, he is too hasty, he needs talent but not talent, he needs character but not character, and he is not even good at being human and worldly.

Here is an original elixir, Wang Shouzhuo's Thirteen Incenses, which can heal wounds and practice cultivation😄

I didn't read the whole story, why did the Holy Father suddenly appear in the middle to make a contribution, and what the female apprentice wrote was too emotional?

The writing of this book is quite good. It's just that the author's thinking is a bit different from ordinary people. For example, I don't understand why the protagonist, the alchemist, doesn't sell the elixirs himself, but gives 50% of the profit to the alchemy shop for sale, and also buys the elixirs and medicinal materials himself? The most difficult thing to understand is, how can the city lord allow other sects to come here to collect resources? ! In addition, it is recommended that the relationship between characters be written more clearly.

This kind of bland writing style is no longer popular nowadays. There is only one who has good grades. It made my eyes tired and I couldn't remember anything after reading it. It was even more tiring to read without using my brain. After half a day of reading, I found that it was really nothing to watch. It was just like daily life and there were no ups and downs. I thought that you, a powerful rebirth streamer, must come out to show off. Who knew that Heisei was like this. After reading dozens of chapters, it was completely boring.

Too whitetoo

Xiancao

He is very thoughtful, armed with sharp weapons, and has a murderous intention. Don't you understand this?

If it weren't for the opening paragraph, how could you find someone to help with the moral dispute between the two of you? Isn't it also deceiving one's heart if one wins the opponent?

The writing is good, plain and profound, but it's a pity that it doesn't suit my taste. Goodbye

Oops, the first chapter caught me, look again

Lord Shennong, is this grass edible?

I don't see what's so cool about this elixir of yours. I'll forget about it after seeing it. It's not interesting.

Including sect maps of various states and so on

Please give me more perspective of the protagonist. I recommend the plot in the city.