The King of All Opportunities

The author sees that your copy of Cyber ​​Science and Technology has never been used for monthly voting. If you want to vote for it, should you vote for your new one or your old one?

The protagonist has never pooped once so far. Why don't people in the steam age have to poop? 😡😡😡😡Write a chapter for shit quickly

The material selection is not done well. Apocalyptic survival games like Generation of Ice are on fire. There is not much overlap between actual players and readers of Qidian. Moreover, your subject is a suture monster that spans Western fantasy, science fiction, and games. The selection is based on the intersection of these three themes, so there are even fewer readers. Of course, there are also theme worlds that combine Western fantasy, science fiction, and games, such as Warhammer, Star Wars, and Marvel. This kind of background is well-known and widely spread, and the public can easily relate to it when they see the name. This can well cover up your writing weaknesses. Your advantage is that the characters and story plots are created with flesh and blood. The same weakness is that it is too flesh-and-blood and too detailed. This is the problem with fast food like online writing. The audience does not understand the world you are writing about, and it is difficult to wait for you to unfold the story. Therefore, using a relatively well-known and mature story world to let the audience know the general background and development of the story as soon as they read the title is a way of writing that maximizes strengths and avoids weaknesses. In fact, I discovered this problem when I read your first Cyber ​​Science and Technology book. Because I've watched Marvel and never played cyberpunk, I think Marvel's writing is good and cyberpunk is boring. Others who have played cyber games think that your cyber writing is good. You are indeed suitable for writing fan fiction rather than original work. You are suitable for extracting and adding flesh and blood based on the original work. If you write your own original work, the skeleton is too big and too dense.

This man is worse than the God of All Opportunities 😏

Then chop it into pieces for you, a pile of fat and a pile of thin.

It's really depressing. In reality, I feel uncomfortable watching this when I work overtime every day.

It was too depressing, especially the part about Bordeaux's death. The twist here was too blunt. It was just to find a reason to join the church, to see everyone survive and develop together in the apocalypse, not to watch a tragic story about Bloodborne.

Reconsideration and writing another 2077 fanfic

The King of All Opportunities has not been reflected at all. The protagonist has gradually grown into a real leader, but to be honest, I still can't see where the breaking point is. The attack is still too small and the population is too small. Cold Wave is the whole map AOE, and there are no wild people to supplement the population. You can only plunder the population through war or eat the refugees who escaped from the war with other forces. This is a temporary solution but not the root cause. This book is very good. The name Mechanical Philosopher is more appropriate for the identity of the leader under the cold wave than the Emperor of All Machines. The Emperor of All Machines is neither fish nor fowl and is too vain.

I have finished reading Cyber Science and Technology, and I have only read a little bit of Cyborg Tyrant. I can only say that there is a reason for the poor performance. Nowadays, everyone likes to read books that make people feel comfortable, and they like to see the protagonists high-spirited. These books are about the protagonists who are always under a kind of depression, and there is no sense of satisfaction. Writing books is very particular. I want to express myself first, then I suppress it. These few books are suppressed, and then they are promoted and suppressed again, which makes people feel uncomfortable. To be honest, the Cyber Science and Technology book only felt a very slight sense of relief at the finale. It has always been very depressing in the early stage. If you keep suppressing it, no one will read it.

It's a bit depressing. Let's read it after a few hundred chapters.

The overall look and feel is quite good. Although it is depressing, the apocalyptic atmosphere is prominent, and the characters are relatively three-dimensional. However, the starting point is to focus on refreshing writing. These dozens of pictures are not refreshing at all, and the future is worrying. 😒

Let's write about cyberspace again, book friends can do anything 😭😭😭

I was mining from the beginning until the end. I couldn't relate to it at all. Really, I've been a bookworm for more than ten years. I really couldn't relate to it. I forced myself to read it. The world settings, character dialogues, and plot advancement are indeed innovative, but the core point is to be able to read it. You persuaded 99 people to quit in the first 20 chapters. What is it to be able to read it? It's interesting, it's refreshing, there's a sense of substitution, there's a golden finger, there's a sense of gain. You don't have any of this. I know you want to rely solely on the plot, but how can you, a plot reader, take it in? The reader can't stand it. I really like the author's 2077 book. I hope the author will continue writing 2077. Stop stitching and be original. Sincerely.

I think the author can definitely prefer the early farming stories where everyone works together to survive in the apocalypse. There is no need to write some negative ones. The writing does not have that deep feeling, but is depressing and nondescript. There is no need to write it hard. The wasteland book on the site is also about survival in the apocalypse. The dark ones are basically not written or brushed off, and the results are good.

If it's not exciting enough, fewer people will watch it, and it's too niche. Not very optimistic

Awesome seedlings! It's weird but not outrageous! The hard-core post-apocalyptic wasteland engineering science requires a quiet environment to read carefully. It doesn't matter if you don't understand it. It will be explained in a popular vernacular way.

Authors I follow because of cyberpunk How about we go back to cyberpunk? In fact, if you are willing to learn more about it, there is a lot to write about 😭

... It should have been written by AI. There are all kinds of bugs in the first chapter.

The background is very similar to that of the Ice God's Throne. That book had too much about religion and I stopped reading it after reading more than 100 chapters. It depends on how the author writes it. I hope he can write about the height of 2077.

It doesn't make sense. If you write it, your grades won't be so bad, right?

From the perspective of cyberpunk, the writing and plot arrangement of the author's works are quite good, but there are not many and active comments Why, I think the pace is too slow This is not a derogatory statement. On the contrary, after I met Luo An and the hot spring people, I saved it to the latest and read it all at once, and I was very happy to criticize it But the problem is, this pace will As a result, many people have become fat and have forgotten to read it, which is basically lost This is no one's fault, it is that everyone now prefers to read works with a faster pace, so the author will be more reluctant to read I hope you can continue to persevere, it is very interesting, it is really interesting, and I look forward to the story of everyone walking out of the ice field and heading towards a wider world Come on!

Author, would you like to write 2077 in your next book?😭

It was really fun when I saw the author writing 2077 before. It would be even more fun to write cyberpunk and add a hook that allows you to go to a traditional magic world. You can pretend to be awesome on both sides at the same time.

The writing is very good, but the originality and construction are not enough. The cyberpunk one is the best. I can definitely write about unlimited streams or just write about popular fan fiction. It will make money.

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To put it bluntly, the author should write a character RPG world with a small number of original characters + expansion on the original plot. This is your comfort zone. The previous book was purely original and just borrowed a background. The plot of this book requires a lot of originality + there are too many worldview terms, which makes it a bit tiring to read.

In the first three chapters, you said the tunnel was short, but there was a tall mecha inside. Is it short?

I really like the article written by the author. The author's writing style is also very good and the plot design is not bad. I don't understand why it is not popular. Please support the author.

The author can study the rules and background story of Cyberpunk Red, and continue writing fan fiction in this area!