Interdimensional Science and Technology Starting from Cyberpunk

When this book just passed one million words, I said: First, if you write multiple overworlds, they will definitely collapse later. In the past few decades, there are only a handful of new and old writers who can do multiple overworlds without collapsing.        ，，51020 At that time, it happened to catch up with the residual heat of 2077DLC, and the writing style was not bad, which made this book very popular. Then they began to force Marvel to reduce its popularity, and the votes for the post were overwhelmingly 2077. The author doesn't care. The reason is that the subscription volume of Marvel 2077 is the same, so he won't think about why so many excellent DC and Marvel fans were ignored before. There are too many good subjects and everyone is tired of reading them. Summary: Cyberpunk writing is full of charm, but it bucked the trend and ended up going low.

Welcome everyone to click into the comment area, and I will directly state the conclusion: this book is written on all platforms, and it is the best novel by 2077 fans. It is very worth reading. Advantages: 1. The character creation and control are very good, and there is no OOC at all. This alone is enough to kill more than 90% of fan fiction, let alone the scattered 2077 fan fiction. Especially the shaping of the heroine V, she should be like this, and I also like this. 2. The author has a very high degree of understanding of the world view of cyberpunk, and his thinking about technology and prosthetic settings is beyond ordinary people. This is very rare, and it is reflected in the reasonable plot in the work. The protagonist uses high technology and makes homemade prosthetic weapons without a sense of fragmentation. 3. The author has a very complete thinking about the framework of the entire plot, and finally brings the system and plot development into full circle. He handles Night City and gangs very well, and finds hope in a desperate world view. It is indeed a great achievement as an online article author. The plot is very good at saving the players' regrets, and the happy ending is even more civilized. I was always very dissatisfied when I saw other 2077 fanfics. I even fantasized about writing one myself, but I gave up after reading this book because I knew that what I wrote would definitely not be as good as this one. Disadvantages: The 2077 part is not mentioned. I can score more than 90 points out of 100. However, the content of this book not only includes 2077, the author also sets up the main storyline of Marvel in order to get back the protagonist's system cheat. Ask me to evaluate the Marvel part, and I will be really embarrassed 1. First of all, the biggest problem with Marvel is boring, very, very boring. Perhaps based on the consideration of balance of combat power, the Marvel worldview chosen by the author is not the movie version generally accepted by most audiences. This makes readers very unfamiliar with this world, and the result of unfamiliarity is that they have no emotions at all. I believe many readers are like me. They basically skip the Marvel part every time they see it. They have no idea what happened to Marvel. It doesn't matter even if the world is destroyed. If I were to give you some advice, I strongly suggest that when the protagonist is doing trouble in the Marvel world, he can bring V, Jack, or even David's team there. This way, it will be more interesting to watch and more enjoyable. Even if it doesn't work in the early stage, it will definitely work in the middle and later stages. Don't you know what the audience attracted by the title of the book wants to see? The author can really bear to let the protagonist perform a one-man show in the Marvel world. I really can't stand it. 2. Then there is the issue of the two branch worlds, Transformers and Titanfall. I knew that the author wanted the power and technology of these two worlds, but he couldn't have deus ex machina, so he wrote that the protagonist would run over and cause trouble. But the same problem remains, it's boring, I don't want to watch it because there are no characters I want to watch. The author writes these two worlds as useless: Are these two worlds useful? Somewhat useful. Want to see it? It's not like you can't watch it. Want to pay to subscribe? Ouch, shit. 3. Let's go back to the main plot of 2077. As I said before, this part is very good, but it is not perfect. The biggest failure is the European part, which is boring for the same reason. I know that Europe is very important, and it doesn't mean that you are not allowed to write about Europe, but again, who are the characters in the European story? Do I want to see it? I basically didn't read the content in the European part, but I scrolled back and thought, "When will we return to Night City to find V? Why hasn't this been finished yet?" Then there are some small problems, such as everyone's favorite Adam's Hammer, which appears casually and exits quickly and casually. Unreasonable? It can't be said to be unreasonable. Are readers satisfied? Can't say I'm satisfied either. 4. Emotional line. Oh my god, the author's depiction of the emotional line between V and the protagonist is simply catastrophic, which is in sharp contrast to the overall excellence of 2077. I know the author is Xiao Chunan, who has never been in love, but even if he devoted one-tenth of his energy to researching cyberpunk to watching some romance anime, he wouldn't end up writing like this. I'm very happy that there is a single heroine v, but if you leave such a well-shaped heroine v and write the emotional line like this, it is simply a waste of resources. Is it so difficult for you to just add some sweet interactions in your daily life? This book is finished. I hope the author will think carefully about it in the extra chapters and the next book. Do you still need readers to tell you how popular Nv is? Finally, let me give you an analogy; if you compare this book to a Kung Pao Chicken dish, the chicken part will undoubtedly be very delicious. But half of the whole dish is seasoned with green peppers and chili peppers. It's not inedible, but I will eat the meat and leave the rest. But the embarrassing thing is that the entire Kung Pao Chicken dish is sold by weight, and these unpalatable seasonings cost the same as the chicken. The full book subscription is 120 yuan, which in my opinion is actually worth 60 yuan, and the quality bonus is 80 yuan.

It's so uncomfortable. Originally, the book really got better and better as I wrote it. I loved reading it. There are two worlds in total, one is the Marvel world with family members, and the other is the 2077 world with souls. I travel back and forth between them and fight against injustice. The angle is interesting and even close to traditional literature. There are a lot of thoughts. Just when I was about to read on to see how I would think about it in the follow-up, suddenly there was another world. It felt like the author had been taken over by the editor. How could another world have the same tension as the previous one? What a pity for a good book. I think having a really good book is much more important than making more money

Judging from the number of votes, the number of votes dropped when I wrote about Marvel. As a bookworm, I have watched too many excellent Marvel works and have no expectations for the subsequent plot. Most readers came here for the title of Cyberpunk. If you really want to play dual-player for a long time, it is recommended to change the game world, such as the continuous exploration of Fallout, Nier, and Interstellar; such as the Halo of individual soldiers; or exciting sequels such as Dead Space, Prototype, and Resident Evil; the niche Abyssal Syndrome, or even the popular 40k. You should think carefully about why this book is so popular and what groups are attracted to 2077, and maintain your own advantages and attractions

It's a very interesting book. I read it in one sitting. The first part really suited my taste, but the decisive battles at the back made me a little tired. I had to look at the table of contents to find what I was interested in.

The author's three views are very consistent with mine. The story about the European Community is enough to make a god, and it is a fairy grass in my eyes. The rhythm of this book is a bit problematic. The stories in the Marvel world are a bit boring and basically only serve to provide hooks for other worlds. A little suggestion, that is, the author is not a master yet, so you cannot completely ignore the patience of new readers. I believe that sooner or later I will see your name at the top of the list

The only unlikable thing so far is that the protagonist is a sickly man who is about to die! As a result, everything you do is anxious and you need to achieve your goals quickly! The pace will be a bit fast. This is also the reason why the protagonist has been constantly being cheated on in the recent photos! He has no time to slowly investigate and plan! However, the flaws do not hide the advantages. From the current point of view, as long as this level is maintained, this book will definitely be successful! Come on! 🙂

I originally came here for Cyberpunk 2077, but later I found that without the plots of other worlds such as Marvel, it would be difficult to control the rhythm by relying solely on the plot of 2077. It is precisely because other plots and 2077 serve as a complement to each other that people will not feel tired in the same copy. And the content volume of 2077 alone is difficult to support a long novel. The other good works I followed that only wrote about 2077 were basically unable to write 700,000-800,000 words. And I like the plot of each world. Although it is quite painful when I am following the update, it always ends at the wrong place 😡, but it feels very good to replay each copy after finishing it. Let me mention one of my favorite plots: Night City Unlimited All-Martial Arts Fighting Racing Competition. That part was so exciting, it was so exciting that I felt like I was watching 3Dmix on the big screen in a cinema, my brain was spinning 🐉🐉🐉 Another suggestion: there are too many "voice-overs" in some places. The inner monologue and explanatory text of the character can be reduced appropriately. I feel better if it is expressed through character dialogue. The last moon confession is romantic enough, enough, you are this Niu Niu👍 In summary, this is the best cyberpunk fanfic I have ever seen (I haven't seen Marvel enough, so I won't comment. There is not much content in other maps, so I won't comment. ), The world in 2077 should be smashed to pieces like this. The way you swing the sledgehammer really hit me so much 🐉🐉🐉 ps. A little extra extra time, more time 😡

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I am not a fan of 2077 or Marvel, but I understand part of the plot. Regarding Marvel content, I know more about the plot of the main universe. As a 2077 cloud player, I think the author's imitation is quite vivid and flexible. Although Marvel is a big IP, judging from the number of chapters I have seen so far, most people are not that profound about this part of the plot. At least in Marvel's Iron Man, the plot after the iP became popular is more impressive, and the tone and demeanor are easier to imitate. Especially considering that the plot chosen by the author is not the Spider-Man clips put on the screen. This part uses more plots from the comics. And the game 2077 itself is very attractive. People have a deeper memory of the content in this game. In addition, the tone and language of the characters in the game are easier to imitate the charm. I think the author has promised to reduce the plot of Marvel, so he must have made certain cuts. If you completely abandon Marvel's plot, it will be equivalent to forcing the author to revise the outline, which will make it easier to produce serious bugs. From the perspective of the size of the two, Marvel is obviously larger than 2077. Marvel's works include TV series, movies and some games, which cover a large number of parallel worlds and bizarre world views. However, 2077 is just an imaginary cyberpunk world. The game itself and DLC are not enough to support a novel that spans multiple dimensions.

A few more pictures, not enough.

I can write about cyberspace, but forget about other worlds.

It is recommended to focus on 2077. After all, most people are tired of aesthetics because they don't want to watch Marvel and DC, and there are not many good fan works in 2077. Moreover, the author's 2077 has a very positive flavor, and V is also very lovable. This is the key point. Marvel can weaken him and use it as a small adjuster through vague descriptions or specific goals (such as stealing technology from large companies) to feed back the cyber world. Why I say this is because the most despairing thing about the cyber world is that big companies control everything and do not treat people as human beings. A legendary story must have the shadow of a big company. It is recommended that the protagonist join a small company. Li Daitao steals the power of the company. Or use Promise V as an anchor, let the cyber world dominate the world, and go to other worlds to steal technology to feed cyber. Of course, this is my suggestion, the author has the final say on how to write it. But the point is that readers do like to see the cyberpunk world more than Marvel. This needs to be addressed by the author as soon as possible.

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I found that people have a lot of objections to my writing about Marvel. This is the case. I have no intention of writing Marvel plots based on movies or the like. I want to write Marvel as the real world of a protagonist, a world that will become like 2077 without interference. 2077 is equivalent to going back from a stinking end point, and Marvel is equivalent to bringing a world that is about to slide into the abyss back on track. If there was only a world that kept making up for things and then sighing when it was too late, it would feel a bit hollow, just like someone would ask when seeing a crime: Why can't things be prevented before they happen? Does it feel a bit fake to have a happy reunion after it has already happened? Of course, taking everyone's emotions into consideration, I will try to control Marvel's pace. As for the game settings, my understanding is that many parts of the game are very rough. For example, some prosthetics are simply called "kill healers." In the real world, it seems a bit strange to have a prosthetic body with this name on the product. The working mechanism of a large number of prosthetics is not explained in the game. For example, why are they called operating systems? Si'an Westan and the network access warehouse are different. The former cannot install golems, while the latter can. However, if Si'an Westan is installed, it can still invade the protocol and so on. I still remember that someone on the forum insisted that Sianwei Stan was a superpower and could create a position of slowing down time. I would not adopt this statement and setting. The prosthetic system is more like an alternative equipment list in terms of game performance. Many things can only be completed by combining current technology and imagination, as well as some settings of board games. I will use my imagination in this space. Otherwise, it is written that the commission is to come up with some money on the hour, another vote for a prosthetic body, another prosthetic body, and the tower will be blown up in the end. Then everyone will find a place to hide and comfort themselves: they did great things when they were young, and now they are retired and enjoy a comfortable life

The reason why the world of Cyberpunk 2077 has reached its current state is that capitalism and espionage organizations account for most of the factors. The Marvel Universe definitely has this potential, and there are even several world lines that have reached a similar situation. Military industrial giants such as Stark and Osborn, espionage organizations such as S. H. I. E. L. D. And Hydra, and the cyberpunk line are actually just one step away from each other, just one "bad choice". Overturning the enterprise in 2077, and preventing the corruption of the world in Marvel are ultimately doing the same thing.

I personally think that the 2077 part of this book is the best among the fanfics. This is what attracts me to keep reading. I think most readers continue to read it because of this. There are too many people writing on the Marvel subject, and quite a few of them have written very well. The author has little hope of competing in this field, and this type of subject matter is also a bit tired of aesthetics. Readers who have read many Marvel fanfics may not be interested in your book. Let's just destroy the Marvel world and turn it into a zombie universe. The protagonist can't survive here anymore. He takes his family and hides in 2077 to live, and don't do any infinite streaming. This point can be learned from "This Game is Too Real" written by Chenxing Master. At the beginning, he spent a lot of ink on the player world and the wasteland world. Later, he found that readers liked the wasteland more, so he only wrote about the wasteland.

Author, you need to have a concept of yourself now. Your book is probably the best starting point for cyberpunk fan fiction. Even if the circle is relatively small, we will all continue to subscribe. Don't be a eunuch. Don't worry, even if many people support the book, if the number of words is too much, the money will still go into your pocket. Don't worry about the results. At least those of us who like Cyberpunk 2077 will definitely subscribe and support you, because this is the first cyberpunk fanfic from Qidian that is readable or even good-looking.

After reading Chapter 90, I feel very disconnected. The protagonist can do some dirty things and is described as a "big brother/legend" by the narrator, but at the same time, because he is a small team of three, he is threatened by other groups at will. The protagonist can only please and submit... It is very uncomfortable to watch, even if the protagonist is always Karami, but being said to be awesome while being beaten by reality is really unbearable. When can the protagonist become a scene person?

The plot of 2077 is well written, but too short. It's true nb I hope the author can update the plot of 2077 more, Marvel's plot is too boring

After watching 300 episodes, I can't stand it anymore. The writing of Cyberpunk was okay at first, but every time it reaches a critical point, it turns to Marvel to become a grandson. It's really incomprehensible. The heroine has already gone through 300 episodes? Do you understand? Ambiguity is the smelliest thing💩. Besides, what's the use of Marvel now that I don't even understand this world? Multiple mothers? Get a lizard transformation? And it's still not perfect. The most important thing is that once it's done, the one who causes the most trouble is Peter Parker. It's really inexplicable.

It feels like the protagonist is limited by the cyberpunk worldview. Did the author forget that he also has a Marvel world? In addition to transforming the prosthetic body, he can also get some external armor? If nothing else, Jack's physique is indeed impressive, but wouldn't it be better if you gave him a stretchable Adamantium alloy shield? Marvel doesn't have much else. . There are many kinds of special materials. . Loki will also give a large piece of Uru metal when he comes to Earth. This magical metal is also a good thing. A thin layer can prevent rockets. Of course. . It's indeed a bit wishful thinking to ask for such a good thing now, but Russia's imitation carbon dioxide alloy and the vibranium circulating on the black market should still be available. Oh, also, the heart-shaped herb and the super soldier serum without side effects should not be available now, but the low-end version of the calypso potion should still be available. It is in the hands of Hunter Kraven. You can see how to trade it with him.

I don't know why so many people jump into cyberspace. I feel like the author has changed the outline because of the rhythm. The current situation is that a lot of people jump into cyberspace and squeeze the Marvel plot a lot. Then they feel that Marvel is not deeply involved in major events, and then continue to squeeze Marvel...

The ocean section contains a cyberpunk story, but it's not very interesting. The chapter ends with waiting for time to travel. This chapter is a purely transitional chapter, so I won't book another chapter. Nick Kerry's information should be partly about cyberpunk, but I guess it is the progress of the method of connecting the two worlds, so I did not subscribe. You can order the next two chapters, which are pure cyberpunk. I will continue to update the chapters that are suspected of being cyberpunk, especially the exchange chapters between the two worlds, so that the author can make extra money from Marvel without any small tricks. ps: It is impossible for me to delete these words. And as an author, if you want to be more Marvelous, just follow your own goals. We may not be our business. If you listen to too many readers' suggestions, you will have no goals. Don't end it! ! Marvel doesn't know that you've written really well about the cyberpunk world.

Starting high and moving low is a bit flattering to the author, but the early opening is indeed very good, but the core problem began to be exposed in the early and middle stages at chapter 380. The protagonist's actions have no central idea of ​​his own, do not benefit himself or save the world, and have no soul. The problem of new authors has been completely exposed. Every novice author has tried to trick them. Writing a book is not a biography. The characters must have distinctive personalities to attract readers. When I was in school, my teacher said that art comes from life but is higher than life. (Art is a distortion of life and cannot really be the same as life)

Brothers, you know, if I didn't like this book before, I wouldn't be so impressed, and I wouldn't criticize it so much. The author did write well before, and this is a fact. Later, I really can't stand the time jump thing, and that's true.

This book is one of the best fan works I have read this year. The author has written the soul of both 2077 and Marvel stories. But from my personal experience, the entire plot continues to decline from around chapter 450 onwards. V and the protagonist are always blurred, so much so that the current protagonist has no body or emotions left. The unstable energy and system of plug-ins in the whole text cannot be said to be useless, they can only be said to be decorations. The frequent emotional elimination effects have eliminated V's experience of the protagonist. When I saw this, I just felt very irritated and dragged out. The protagonist in the subsequent Dog Town plot directly turns himself into a quasi-AI. This gives people a classic consideration of Ship of Theseus. Is the protagonist still the protagonist? There is almost no flesh left, the brain is grilled every day, and the person in front is frail and sick. The plot is full of life every time, but he just can't die. To be honest, even if the protagonist is defeated in the plot, and even if Marvel is a niche plot, I can still watch it. However, I am completely uninterested in the full body replacement and taking Johnny to Transformers that I saw in the comment area. I only have a few questions. The protagonist is committed to creating a fair and stable world, which is fine, but does this count as unstable emotions and does it need to be eliminated by the system? I can persevere when I have a body, but after I lose my body and become Cybertron, is this a useless emotion? Or just as an AI-like goal setting? What's the point of taking Johnny, who has appeared in hundreds of chapters, to Transformers? Everyone knows that this guy is a clown. It is said that he is trying to regain the protagonist's feelings, but what you wrote is that unstable emotions can be eliminated by the system. There is no need for technology, even if the Jack V brothers are passed on, there is no shortage of conflict content in the plot. What I want to say is that it is meaningless to see and build the world with an absolutely rational and ruthless character, because the world itself is meaningless, and the existential collision of emotions opens up a new space between meaninglessness. The passion of the protagonist in the article is gone, and now that I am reading the book, I can no longer feel much enthusiasm for the content of the book. From the past, I followed each chapter to reading, and now I am flipping through the table of contents, and I can only see that the existence of Lille is becoming more and more blurred. I don't know how much more content I can read later, so I'll just write it like this.

Can you ban "Tarot Rules Introduction Card"? This guy only leaves a smiley face in each comment, so I can't read 3 chapters, a bunch of 🙂. I read and comment on the book, just to see what the book friends can do, even a small amount, leave a message everywhere 🙂, click on it and you will see this weird guy.