Emperor of Ten Thousand Machines

The protagonist has never pooped once so far. Why don't people in the steam age have to poop? 😡😡😡😡Write a chapter for shit quickly

The material selection is not done well. Apocalyptic survival games like Generation of Ice are on fire. There is not much overlap between actual players and readers of Qidian. Moreover, your subject is a suture monster that spans Western fantasy, science fiction, and games. The selection is based on the intersection of these three themes, so there are even fewer readers. Of course, there are also theme worlds that combine Western fantasy, science fiction, and games, such as Warhammer, Star Wars, and Marvel. This kind of background is well-known and widely spread, and the public can easily relate to it when they see the name. This can well cover up your writing weaknesses. Your advantage is that the characters and story plots are created with flesh and blood. The same weakness is that it is too flesh-and-blood and too detailed. This is the problem with fast food like online writing. The audience does not understand the world you are writing about, and it is difficult to wait for you to unfold the story. Therefore, using a relatively well-known and mature story world to let the audience know the general background and development of the story as soon as they read the title is a way of writing that maximizes strengths and avoids weaknesses. In fact, I discovered this problem when I read your first Cyber ​​Science and Technology book. Because I've watched Marvel and never played cyberpunk, I think Marvel's writing is good and cyberpunk is boring. Others who have played cyber games think that your cyber writing is good. You are indeed suitable for writing fan fiction rather than original work. You are suitable for extracting and adding flesh and blood based on the original work. If you write your own original work, the skeleton is too big and too dense.

This man is worse than the God of All Opportunities 😏

Then chop it into pieces for you, a pile of fat and a pile of thin.

It's really depressing. In reality, I feel uncomfortable watching this when I work overtime every day.

It was too depressing, especially the part about Bordeaux's death. The twist here was too blunt. It was just to find a reason to join the church, to see everyone survive and develop together in the apocalypse, not to watch a tragic story about Bloodborne.

The King of All Opportunities has not been reflected at all. The protagonist has gradually grown into a real leader, but to be honest, I still can't see where the breaking point is. The attack is still too small and the population is too small. Cold Wave is the whole map AOE, and there are no wild people to supplement the population. You can only plunder the population through war or eat the refugees who escaped from the war with other forces. This is a temporary solution but not the root cause. This book is very good. The name Mechanical Philosopher is more appropriate for the identity of the leader under the cold wave than the Emperor of All Machines. The Emperor of All Machines is neither fish nor fowl and is too vain.

Reconsideration and writing another 2077 fanfic

I was mining from the beginning until the end. I couldn't relate to it at all. Really, I've been a bookworm for more than ten years. I really couldn't relate to it. I forced myself to read it. The world settings, character dialogues, and plot advancement are indeed innovative, but the core point is to be able to read it. You persuaded 99 people to quit in the first 20 chapters. What is it to be able to read it? It's interesting, it's refreshing, there's a sense of substitution, there's a golden finger, there's a sense of gain. You don't have any of this. I know you want to rely solely on the plot, but how can you, a plot reader, take it in? The reader can't stand it. I really like the author's 2077 book. I hope the author will continue writing 2077. Stop stitching and be original. Sincerely.

I have finished reading Cyber Science and Technology, and I have only read a little bit of Cyborg Tyrant. I can only say that there is a reason for the poor performance. Nowadays, everyone likes to read books that make people feel comfortable, and they like to see the protagonists high-spirited. These books are about the protagonists who are always under a kind of depression, and there is no sense of satisfaction. Writing books is very particular. I want to express myself first, then I suppress it. These few books are suppressed, and then they are promoted and suppressed again, which makes people feel uncomfortable. To be honest, the Cyber Science and Technology book only felt a very slight sense of relief at the finale. It has always been very depressing in the early stage. If you keep suppressing it, no one will read it.