Nightmare Invasion: the World Under the Pillow

I brought a fat man with me at the beginning, and my relatives disappeared at the beginning. Now it's become a bit poisonous.

The subject matter of the novel is quite good, and the writing style doesn't have much of a problem. But in my personal opinion there are some problems. The villain is a bit stupid, especially the description of the old player villain. Although it seems that he is slightly better than normal people, the methods he uses are a bit too childish. When the protagonist clearly shows abilities that are far above ordinary people, the method of dealing with the protagonist is still to conceal information, or to not tell the most basic concealment. You can design it to be a little confrontational, at least not to be seen by the protagonist at a glance. Such an escape of the protagonist will also increase the excitement of the plot. Although the fear of some characters and the calmness of the protagonist can show a relatively obvious contrast, there is no need to design all characters to have a fearful mentality. The mentality of some veteran players can be changed to a solemn and nervous expression. There is also the description of horror scenes. You don't need to overly describe the psychology of the characters. You can describe more about the impact of the environment on the characters. For example, a certain character suddenly saw a distorted face in the corner of his eye. The person was sweating on his back, but his body did not dare to move in any way, and he still kept his original actions. Suddenly, there was a rustling sound above his head, and a few hanging hairs appeared in front of his eyes. The itching on his face also reminded him that the ghost was above him. It would be better to use the environment and human behavior to support the scary atmosphere. There is also the plot of the protagonist. It seems to me that the protagonist has read the script. He knows the rules of ghosts and why he kills people, but he just doesn't know how to develop it, so he uses his own way to find clues. It looks really strange. The last point is that the feeling of ghost is not brought out. It looks like a machine. The character triggers the rules, and then the machine kills the character. There is no sense of crisis. The behavior of the ghost can be adjusted a little more lively, and it will actively guide the character into the trap, instead of putting a trap there and waiting for the prey to step on it. This is the feeling I got after reading the first hundred chapters. I haven't had time to read the rest. I hope to see optimizations in the future.

After reading it, the advantages are: the writing is neat, the copy is well chosen, and the protagonist's IQ is also online. Disadvantages: 1. This type of dungeon survival story has a tight rhythm. There are too many memories or background introductions of the supporting characters, which interrupts the sense of urgency and easily distracts the reader's attention. 2: The plot is too smooth. Several more reversals can be designed to enhance the suspense hook. 3. This type of article needs environmental description to heighten the sense of horror. You can add a little environmental description appropriately to make readers immersed in the scene. 4: The title of the book does not attract volume, just keep the first four words, the rest are not necessary. (You can delete it after reading it to avoid affecting the novel)

I don't have a problem with readers. I feel like the title and introduction of the book are not good enough.

I am applying to be unblocked, but I have been blocked repeatedly for a day after trying to change it, but it has not been successful yet 🙂

Why did Rosa, the second deceased person in the first copy, die? Just because the village chief stole his clothes, but the village chief and the ghost are not of the same mind. If the ghost killed her because he violated the rules, she did not break the rules. If the ghost killed her because he randomly picked someone to kill her, then there would be a way to survive, but obviously, there was no way for her to survive.

Give me some data, it looks great

Fighting with others is endless fun 🙂, why are you just focusing on internal fighting?

If relying purely on IQ to decipher the code is not very attractive, just have some tools that can fight against supernatural beings.

Yes👍

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After looking at the first few dungeons, the difficulty of Nightmare is really not that high. The difficulty is all caused by teammates. If you weren't careful, you would probably be able to clear the level by killing only one or two at most, but as a result, the whole group was almost wiped out. In a dungeon with a difficulty level of one, the veterans were all scheming, concealing key information, digging holes in each other, and even directly setting traps. The difficulty is directly increased by two to four times. It is better to increase the difficulty of the dungeon, so that everyone will not feel that they are the chosen ones. Even if their teammates are dead, they can break through the dungeon by themselves, and they can trick people in the dungeon and hide information at will. The fact that all the veterans the protagonist encounters have this mentality shows that the difficulty of the dungeon is really not that good, otherwise why would he be in the mood to fight among himself every day?

Weird, fat man, have all the elements of this genre been welded to death?

I like that book very much, and I hope the author can write it as well as that one 😄

🙂Nightmare?

The author has an idea. Since dreamers can perform tasks in dreams, can the dream world be explained later? Can people in the dream world go to the real world to perform tasks? Just like the settings of the latest novels by the ruthless scholar, people in the dead zone can go to the dead zone to do tasks, and people outside the dead zone can also go to the real world to do tasks. And then further reveal the secrets of the dream world

Are there any skills or evolutions? I feel like an ordinary person

The author is awesome. This book is another good book after Black Fire, A Finger and a Smile, and The Charming Scholar. Although the setting of the fat man is a bit cliche, the writing style is very good! I listen to it every time I go to and from get off work. I beg the author not to stop updating. I have to pay to listen to it all. Do you know the feeling that good books are hard to come by? The writing is full of atmosphere! ! ! ! Moreover, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are also very interesting.