The Pig Advances Suddenly!

The treasures are free to post pictures, in human form and animal body.

Is this written by Second Senior Brother?

What a great book. What did the author think? I didn't notice a huge sense of fragmentation. It went downhill from the beginning of the end of the world. The protagonist is a demon. What kind of literary and artistic enlightenment is there? The pig's head has not been transformed. What is the enlightenment? The enlightenment is only in the later stages of the story where the big bosses are. Yes, the author should have read the novel, right? The famous novel on the list is not something that the protagonist only realizes after reaching a later stage. Usually he understands it in a flash of inspiration, and then progresses step by step. The biggest problem is that he starts from the Duanjie Pass and suddenly goes to the Demon Land, which is inexplicable. Wonderful, there is a problem with the plot design. Normally, you should not be practicing as a soldier at the same time. Start slowly, settle the territory, gather friends, and after several friends have fiefdoms, look for opportunities, and there are any magic weapons and techniques. The protagonist does not have them. Now everything is imaginary. The protagonist is directly from the first realm. It's like a loose fairy, it's too imaginary. I feel like it was written by one person before the Duanjie Pass, and another person wrote it after the Duanjie Pass. The protagonist of a story must have enemies, adventures, skills, and magic weapons, and then the plot will have its ups and downs. What will happen after going to the Demon Land? The author is really the eunuch.

It was quite weird to be a soldier in the first place, but Inugami became even more crazy and sick, and later the protagonist was reorganized and rebuilt. How many chapters have it been and there are still a bunch of primitive goblins hanging out in the underworld? Is this a studio story? The number of chapters has been significantly reduced recently. Can't the author see the data drop?

The writing in the following chapters is almost boring. The Lao Zhu in the writing is not as ferocious and domineering as the previous ones. He is wily and knowledgeable. He is not like a time traveler but a native of a small place.

It seems like a different author has changed since Inugami. The literary talent is serious, the battle data is vague, and the plot is a bit stiff. The one written by Yamauchi is better.

Finally, it's no longer a gimmick. 95% Of the protagonists of the alien beast genre don't know where their butt is, which is annoying. This is not meant to be, it finally looks a bit like an alien beast.

What are you going to do after it's released? Author, you have to write a heroine like this. What's the point of writing the protagonist? It can be said that the character is gone.

Like the title, I always think about sex, the style is very different

The author wrote that Piggy visited the brothel and found a matchmaker to be a matchmaker, and she really felt like a carefree fairy. The naive protagonist was no longer the same decisive killer, which gave me an urge to stay up late to watch. The novel background setting of the world was also very good. Then Inugami suddenly gave me a black myth. Vomited🤮 and fed me a big lump. I would like to ask the smart authors at Qidian to stop writing about black myths? This stuff is really disgusting. You are the first author I have complained about. I really hope I can block you permanently🤮🤮🤮

Author, listen to me, change the title of the book to "Pig Real Man" 🙂

I regret subscribing, ugh

Has the author ever been a pig? Just scribble here 🙂

I was so sleepy that I saw Zhu Yuanzhang transforming into a big black wild boar at first sight. Can I still be saved?

I feel like I have a different perspective. Wild boars subjectively eat grass. The writing seems to focus on meat. The body structure and evolutionary path are different from those of carnivores. If you like eating meat, you should choose a carnivore.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, it feels more and more wrong. The first few dozen chapters were okay. But since I joined the Heavenly Court and became a heavenly soldier, something is wrong. It feels like it was written by a different person. The character of the protagonist has changed too much. Before, it was normal to open his mouth and eat people. But later on, he started to get entangled because someone else was using people to make elixirs.

What's the point of being together with a snake spirit? They have problems with their origins and moral character. Is it necessary to force them to get together? It was a good idea to find a gentle, virtuous and obedient vixen, but why do we have to get together with a problematic snake?

I remembered that I had read a book about a pig demon before, The Wild Boar.

Nowadays, there are still too few kinds of plants in cultivation literature. Immortals and monsters are crawling all over the ground. Except for rare medicinal plants that can be seen occasionally, normal plants can still be seen everywhere. If spiritual energy is everywhere, isn't there a bottom plant that can absorb spiritual energy and is highly adaptable to replace ordinary plants that only bask in the sun? There is no awesome plant demon that absorbs spiritual energy while basking in the sun. The roots of plants are connected to transmit spiritual energy, and spread to occupy a mountainous area. Life can move on its own without the need for spiritual control. Let the spreading plants transmit the spiritual energy to the main body. If it spreads to the whole world like this, isn't it possible to ascend in minutes?

When I first started reading it, I was curious why this book was so well-written, why it wasn't even a top-quality book? It wasn't until I ordered 30 copies after they were put on the shelves that I realized that the plot behind them was not for people to watch at all.

670,000 Words finally return to fanfiction Journey to the West

I am Shennong, so I don't need to watch it until it is released.

Female authors shouldn't write male videos, okay? The book I wrote is so disgusting

Even if I cut it, I hope I can write down the ending as an explanation for subscribing.

The paid chapters with no titles in the back really disgusted me. I came here blindly. Run, run quickly!

Although it is classified as cultivating immortals, the early descriptions are completely in the style of alien beasts. The protagonist escapes to the mountains as a kind of pig, and then survives in the wilderness with other animal friends. Although monsters appear later, they are still in the form of beasts, and the overall atmosphere is similar to the fairy version of Wolf King Dream. They are all animal friends with their own thoughts But then, as the protagonist defeated the tiger demon and unified the mountain forest, the author suddenly arranged for the protagonist to transform and start messing around.

If you write it carefully, it won't be a big problem, at least it can be read. One question is, is it a bit unjustifiable that the Heavenly Soldiers and Heavenly Generals didn't find the difference in their techniques? Looking back, it feels a bit like being deceived. You can consider filling in the holes later. Come on!

Come on! I think it's well written!

There is so much I want to write, but it must be rhythmic and the subject matter is good.

The early writing was okay, but later it got a little disgusting.