Charge Headfirst!

What a great book. What did the author think? I didn't notice a huge sense of fragmentation. It went downhill from the beginning of the end of the world. The protagonist is a demon. What kind of literary and artistic enlightenment is there? The pig's head has not been transformed. What is the enlightenment? The enlightenment is only in the later stages of the story where the big bosses are. Yes, the author should have read the novel, right? The famous novel on the list is not something that the protagonist only realizes after reaching a later stage. Usually he understands it in a flash of inspiration, and then progresses step by step. The biggest problem is that he starts from the Duanjie Pass and suddenly goes to the Demon Land, which is inexplicable. Wonderful, there is a problem with the plot design. Normally, you should not be practicing as a soldier at the same time. Start slowly, settle the territory, gather friends, and after several friends have fiefdoms, look for opportunities, and there are any magic weapons and techniques. The protagonist does not have them. Now everything is imaginary. The protagonist is directly from the first realm. It's like a loose fairy, it's too imaginary. I feel like it was written by one person before the Duanjie Pass, and another person wrote it after the Duanjie Pass. The protagonist of a story must have enemies, adventures, skills, and magic weapons, and then the plot will have its ups and downs. What will happen after going to the Demon Land? The author is really the eunuch.

It was quite weird to be a soldier in the first place, but Inugami became even more crazy and sick, and later the protagonist was reorganized and rebuilt. How many chapters have it been and there are still a bunch of primitive goblins hanging out in the underworld? Is this a studio story? The number of chapters has been significantly reduced recently. Can't the author see the data drop?

The writing in the following chapters is almost boring. The Lao Zhu in the writing is not as ferocious and domineering as the previous ones. He is wily and knowledgeable. He is not like a time traveler but a native of a small place.

It seems like a different author has changed since Inugami. The literary talent is serious, the battle data is vague, and the plot is a bit stiff. The one written by Yamauchi is better.

Finally, it's no longer a gimmick. 95% Of the protagonists of the alien beast genre don't know where their butt is, which is annoying. This is not meant to be, it finally looks a bit like an alien beast.

What are you going to do after it's released? Author, you have to write a heroine like this. What's the point of writing the protagonist? It can be said that the character is gone.

Like the title, I always think about sex, the style is very different

The author wrote that Piggy visited the brothel and found a matchmaker to be a matchmaker, and she really felt like a carefree fairy. The naive protagonist was no longer the same decisive killer, which gave me an urge to stay up late to watch. The novel background setting of the world was also very good. Then Inugami suddenly gave me a black myth. Vomited🤮 and fed me a big lump. I would like to ask the smart authors at Qidian to stop writing about black myths? This stuff is really disgusting. You are the first author I have complained about. I really hope I can block you permanently🤮🤮🤮

Author, listen to me, change the title of the book to "Pig Real Man" 🙂

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