Prehistoric: Zixiao Ascends the Throne and Eventually Becomes Hunyuan Wuji

I think the writing is okay, so I'll subscribe to it all first and read it slowly.

There is a poisonous point. The protagonist himself has always been trapped in the problem that only Yang does not give birth and Yin does not last, but other characters do not have it. For example, the Queen Mother of the West, Nuwa is originally Yin, there is no Yang, and Emperor Jun Taiyi is Yang without Yin, so there will be no problem.

The whole prehistoric period has been written badly. I have read a lot of ancient novels, and now my impression of the ancient world is that of a very small world. The setting of the Prehistoric World is very large, but judging from various descriptions in the Prehistoric World novels, going from one end of the Prehistoric World to the other is just like going out for a walk. It does not reflect the vast and vast feeling of the Prehistoric Age at all. Specifically, there are no details at all about the various geography and humanistic societies in the Prehistoric World. The same is true for time in the prehistoric times. It started with a few huiyuan and tens of millions of years. However, in fact, it feels like a day or two has passed. There is no epic feeling in a prehistoric novel that describes the changes in the world at a glance. There is no way to write the feeling that time has really passed so many tens of millions of years. Basically, if you replace "how many Huiyuan" and "how many thousands of years" described in these novels with "how many days", there will be no sense of inconsistency.

The writing is good, but I always like to talk about past lives, and I feel a bit like a virgin. As long as I talk about those mythical celebrities in previous lives, I will get a little excited. Now the protagonist is a great power from the ancient times. He has lived for an unknown number of years. The memories of a few decades at most in his previous life are nothing. They may have been long gone or forgotten. So don't keep talking about the past life. Don't be surprised, nervous, and excited when you see the mythical celebrities from the previous life. They are a bit like the great powers from the past life.

Bullshit, moral mismatch, everything is about strength. If you have strength, you have the way of heaven, and you dare not let it go to return God's will.

It's pretty good, but it has one shortcoming: the time span of the entire article feels too short. .

Theoretically, the prehistoric era is Pangu, so any wisp of Qi is Pangu Qi, including Pangu's fart

You can make up the 24 solar terms and the 12 zodiac signs.

It smells a bit like the prehistoric flow more than ten years ago

If the protagonist is the incarnation of Pangu's "qi", then wouldn't the original top defense treasure "Zhutian Qingyun" belong to the protagonist?

In the battle between Tao and Demon, Tao Ancestor owes the West Karma. The spiritual lineage of the West was completely destroyed and it could not afford the two holy thrones, so later the West needed to make great aspirations to become a saint. The war between three clans, the war between lich and the remnants of vicious beasts have caused the evil spirit to permeate the north. Therefore, the Northland needs to get rid of evil spirits, regulate the earth's veins, and educate. Therefore, at the beginning, Hongyun's positioning was to revive the West, and Kunpeng's positioning was to regulate the evil spirits of the north and revive the north. At the same time, Kunpeng could create characters and had the merit of making characters. This was also the reason why Kunpeng could survive in the subsequent battle between Lich and Lich. And Hongyun gave up his seat, causing Xiangyin to owe Hongyun a cause and effect, and also formed a cause and effect with Kunpeng, and Hongyun would die later.

In one breath, Pangu's chest turned into exotic treasures and Qingyun in the heavens, which were owned by Yuanshi.

Just don't be too kind to Our Lady

Should I open a new dungeon later or continue to follow Journey to the West?

Just like the title, at the end of writing, I found that this name is more suitable.

Critical moment. What about today's update?

Good books shouldn't be buried!

Don't write so much. It's not something, but something. It smells like AI. At least change it, author.

Please start your performance